Shenhao Starts by Binding His Wife

Let me tell you what I really think: First of all, the author's concept and ideas are quite good. It is a love story about a divine hero. The first few chapters are quite attractive and can catch the eye. Then, the protagonist's previous performance and the system's functions are still in place. Secondly, I want to talk about the bad points. The lottery mechanism of the system is okay at the beginning, but it becomes more demanding towards the back and there is no sense of expectation. There is also the character of the protagonist. He always talks about love, which feels a bit far-fetched. It is also too humble. It is not easy to say that it is called a licking dog. This kind of licking cannot speak. I really don't think that the protagonist said anything to the heroine one day. He just eats and eats and invites her to eat every day. Everyone will find it annoying. The most important thing is the emotional scene between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. They are so embarrassed talking every day, how can they possibly seduce the female protagonist. (The point is that the heroine is not disgusted by the repeated mention in the book. I really don't understand why.) For improvement, the male protagonist please stop licking like that. Even if you lick, forget about it. Can you please stop asking for dinner every day and talking about everything? It's too deliberate. Chat more naturally. It's particularly disgusting. (If the author were the heroine, think about how you would react) That's all, I hope the author can improve (even if the review of this book is deleted, I hope the author will keep it in mind) Love is mutual attraction, not blind giving If it is not a two-way street, it will be meaningless.

The beginning was okay. After leaving the company, the relationship between the colleagues was not bad. At least it proved that the protagonist's behavior was in place, but it was not good when he met the heroine. The person on the fourth floor was so embarrassed that he picked his toes and cooked porridge. The heroine is a strong woman, and you are not the same. As a programmer, I don't know how to fall in love or how to get along. I rely purely on the author's writing to promote it. Some plots can be understood as soon as I see the subsequent development. I can tolerate it at first, but as the poison becomes too much, I can't stand it anymore. Seeing that there are fewer and fewer chapter reviews, doesn't the author feel something is wrong?

I feel like the emotional progression of the protagonist's pursuit of the heroine could be made faster, which seems a bit anxious.

How many updates are there every day? It feels pretty good. Come on.

The writing is quite good, but the update is a bit slow😁

Let me talk about the feeling of catching up to now. The plot started all day long. Although it was a bit slow, I was still looking forward to it. However, gradually it felt too bland and made me have no expectations for the future plot. There are also several points that you wrote that I was somewhat interested in, but you didn't write it down. That's a trap. The plot is neither big nor small, and there is no follow-up, and the interspersed side plots are not ups and downs. The main plot is too bland, not exciting, and not very sweet. I still like your subject matter, and I hope you can write this book well. I hope you can round out some plots as soon as possible.

No, does everyone have misunderstandings about dog licking? What is dog licking? Knowing that the other person doesn't like you and using you as a backup, but you lick your face to please the other person, that's called dog licking. The protagonist is not called dog licking at all, right? Who doesn't put some thought into chasing a girl? You can't let the protagonist be a wolf with nothing, right? Even the female protagonist doesn't know what the male protagonist is like, and the male protagonist is also pursuing the female protagonist. This is not called dog-licking, this is called pursuing love, right?

Sexy little wild cat

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I can't bear it anymore. If you are new to the Internet literary circle and have not been more than 3 years old, please come in. If you have passed this age, you can run as far as you want. Don't enter, don't read. Very disgusting.

A more objective book review: In fact, in terms of subject matter, I think it is relatively new among Shenhao novels. After all, everyone is almost sick of reading Shenhao novels with multiple female protagonists and bulldozers, but the plot progress is not reasonable enough. A few points: 1. The description in the early stage is too diaosi, and later it is easy to make tens of billions of dramas. 2. The relationship progresses too fast. I personally don't agree that Shen Hao's novels chasing the heroine are called dog-licking. Shen Hao's novels can also be close to reality. The author still has some problems in controlling the details of emotional descriptions, which will be a bit embarrassing later. 3. Lack of main line of conflict. To write a good story, there must be a main line of the story. The protagonist's smooth sailing is certainly very enjoyable, but if you read too much, you will be bored and there is nothing interesting. It is better to design a main line (for example, this book, I think there is no need for relationships to progress so fast. In the early stage, you can focus on describing the gap between men and women. In the middle stage, you can describe the process of the male protagonist improving himself, so you can understand luxury. The author works hard, but must work hard on the writing. I thought this book was good in the early stage, and it is not as vicious as others said. Most people have been humbled by love. This is the reality, but it cannot be written in a very embarrassing way. In the later part, I felt embarrassed when I looked at the driving scene on my phone. I believe this was not the author's intention. Finally, I hope that the author's book will end successfully. The next book can be a turnaround with the same theme. After experiencing this shortcoming, it will definitely become a hit next time 😁

I haven't read it yet, but when I saw the title, I wanted to ask you about the boss, the hero, the wife, and the single heroine. Is there any use for this Shenhao? You can't fly even if you have money? What's the difference between this and fried salted fish?

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It's a pure dick-licking article with no experience at all. After reading a few chapters, he died of poison. He looked like he had never seen a woman die in 2420 years.

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When I saw 189-year-old ginseng being eaten by myself, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was too poisonous. If you sell ginseng, eating it yourself is of no use, and its nutritional value is not as good as a pound of corn.

......... Goodbye Jianghu, the creativity is good, but the writing and plot rhythm are not very good.... No matter whether there is a system or not for the protagonist's character design, as long as they are not brainless money-worshiping girls, any girl can fall in love with me! Before you have the system, you are a loser, and after you have the system, you are a rich loser. 🙂🙂🙂

I really can't stand it anymore. I resisted for more than 60 chapters and couldn't resist it anymore. The subject matter is okay, but I don't understand why it is so poisonous. It was okay in the first part, but then it started to kill me.

I suggest changing the title of the book to "The Courtship Diary of a 29-Year-Old Single Program Wang Oude's Dog-licking System"

Let me complain about a few points, 1. The beginning is really rough and the introduction is very blunt 2. I saw that the female protagonist didn't have any scenes at all, they were all female employees of that company, and the foreshadowing was too long 3. The male protagonist's character is very unpleasant, at least the male protagonist depicted in the book is very unpleasant. He has no personality traits that make people like him. 4. Introduction I thought it was a single female protagonist, but when I saw it, it looked a bit like a harem unfolding. I feel like I don't know which aspect I want to write about 5. The single heroine will appear quickly and have some interaction. In harem stories, don't let the male protagonist think about a woman who doesn't appear, and write about another woman.

Poison Avoidance Reminder I gave up after reading more than ten chapters. This silly protagonist was used as a licking dog by a loser. He couldn't figure out his identity at all. Even if he picked up the system, he still couldn't change the nature of Silly Que.

Shenhao started by being a dog licker 🙂

There is a setting problem in the author's book. Shenhao and Jingqing are not compatible. With a system, it is so easy for you to make money. If you can't find any woman, you will only pursue one woman, or you will not be systematic and work through your own efforts. In reality, you have seen a few rich people who are dedicated to people. It is impossible to reach that stage with high emotional intelligence. Is it possible for a person with high emotional intelligence to have only one girlfriend or only one woman?

What kind of thing is it written about? The main character has such a good personality, but he is being fooled around by women. I was directly poisoned to death

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It's been a long time since I've seen such a dull book. Plant grass, nourish it and then kill it. Those great novels can easily make tens of millions or hundreds of millions. They are just superficial and have no breath of life. They are just for beginners to read.

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Do all the authors who write about the Shenhao system just fall in love with it when they fantasize about the opposite sex?

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