This Youngster Is a Force to Be Reckoned With

Let me start by saying that there is nothing wrong with what the author wrote, but there is something really wrong with your plot design. First of all, novels are not life. You can pursue truth, but you have to consider the readers' feelings. First point, international issues, you have to understand the meaning of changing your nationality. Pigfoot's father's explanation is feeble. The main perspective is puzzling, and he shouted that he is Chinese when winning the Premier League. The result was a sickening backhand for the Netherlands national team. The second point is the issue of penalty kicks. I don't know what the author wants to advertise? Sportsmanship? Sorry, faster, higher, stronger, professionalism? Of course it is to earn more championships for the club🏆. First of all, let me say that when the protagonist refused a penalty kick, did he consider the feelings of his teammates? Have you considered the feelings of the club's players? Or do you just think it's the right thing to do? I don't know what the author wants to express. It's not a matter of writing style. But there is something wrong with the plot. You have to think about why the protagonist, a newcomer to the team, can refuse to take a penalty kick regardless of the feelings of the team bosses, team coaches and club fans. The most important thing is that you made this penalty kick so important. I can say that this is a temptation that no one can refuse. But it is inappropriate for the protagonist to refuse very calmly. After all, Pig's Feet is a teenager playing in his first season in the Premier League.

Or we should be reborn as foreign Chinese. We were originally Chinese and then changed our nationality. This is unacceptable. This has nothing to do with the national football team. When I saw the nationality change, I just gave up. No matter how good you write later, of course the author is free to write this way. I will not criticize. I only read Chinese books. I admit that our national football is not good, but I don't want to read a novel and make myself sick.

I won't read it if I change my nationality. The national football team is bad, but if you don't even become a Chinese, I don't know what you think. Or just write it as being reborn as a foreigner.

There are few people who write about football, but if you change your nationality, you might as well just write about foreigners. This will definitely explode.

It's stupid to change your nationality when writing about football. If you want to write about the World Cup and Europa League, then you can directly travel to become a star or a local Chinese, etc. The protagonist has a nationality before you go there. If you want to be Chinese nationality, and don't want to write about the national football team, you can just write about the Football Association not recruiting, and let the Football Association take the blame. There are many ways. Then, the operation of this book is very clumsy. The protagonist is Chinese, and the protagonist's father secretly changed the protagonist's nationality to the Dutch for the protagonist's benefit. Then the protagonist plays football in Portugal, and then the protagonist still hesitates, and finally joins the Dutch national team. Then, after joining, he did not play and was a substitute for the whole game. That's fine. People are directly racist and pollute the Chinese people. I will see how the author is round. Of course, if you write that the protagonist is a bitch with no dignity, and you have to lick your tongue, then there is nothing I can do about it.

A few poisonous points I won't talk about the protagonist's nationality change, just change it. The national football team is like that, it doesn't matter if you don't participate. 1. In the Champions League final, the protagonist took the initiative to cancel the penalty kick awarded by the referee for the so-called fairness of the game. I just want to know if the protagonist still wants to play at Arsenal. Have you considered your teammates, the team and the fans. 2 When the Premier League won the championship, the protagonist said in his acceptance speech that I am Chinese (with Dutch nationality), and he turned around and joined the Dutch team as soon as the Champions League was over. As a result, he failed to play in the last World Cup game, was on the bench until he was eliminated, and even had conflicts with his teammates. Both sides in the Netherlands were unhappy. I think the author wants him to join the national football team. I wonder what the plot significance of the author arranging for him to change nationality and join the Dutch team is? You might still be able to watch it if you skip the World Cup plot, but that's all I saw. I can't stand the protagonist's words and deeds.

This is the best novel I have ever read, very realistic and logical. The European football culture and character descriptions in it moved me. Come on, author! Let's show those junk novels circulated by the system. Chinese people can play football without plug-ins. As for the national football team, it's good not to write about it. The poor quality of Chinese football is a problem of the general environment. Football in European countries is a gift for the poor, and Chinese football is a toy for the rich. It's useless even if the protagonist of the national football team is Superman. I hate cheating systems. I was cheated by cheats while playing chicken and gave up. Seeing cheats in the system makes me sick. It's rare to find a realistic football novel. It's very good. Good luck to the author!

First of all, as an old book friend, you can tell that the author is still a newcomer, so I would like to shout "Come on" for you! After all, writing a book is not easy. Secondly, I gave up on this book when I read more than 120 chapters. Mainly because I was annoyed and lacked common sense. Some of the operations in the book did not look like something an adult could do. Let's talk about nationality first. The following is a US green card. You know that nationality can be renounced automatically. Sometimes you need to register in some places. If you want to join a certain country, some countries only need to take an exam and take an oath. Those who have a household registration book will receive a household registration book, and those who don't have a household registration book will need a passport (they don't have an ID card) and a driver's license. There is no need for the country of origin to approve your renunciation of its nationality. Its government cannot even deprive you of your nationality unless it deprives you of your political rights. Writing that requires approval from the Netherlands is really a lack of common sense. Then, let's talk about the British work permit. You cannot work in the UK without a UK work permit. Therefore, your contract with your club is invalid and illegal. Secondly, I remember that some international sports organizations stipulate that you must obtain the nationality of the country you are in for a certain period of time before you can represent your country in competitions. That is to say, for example, you can only represent the Netherlands in competitions after 3 years after obtaining Dutch citizenship. So even if you obtain Chinese citizenship before the World Cup, you don't have enough time. Author, have you noticed? The knowledge you have accumulated in writing this book is too little. Finally, let's talk about adult operations. I married a Chinese-American, obtained a relative-based immigration visa (cr1/ir1 visa), and obtained permanent residency (green card), but my nationality is still Chinese. I did not voluntarily give up my nationality. In this case, why can't the plot in your book be more ambiguous? If nationality cannot be changed in a short time, then as a person holding Dutch nationality, why don't you respond to the call? Even if you don't work hard and your attitude is good, who can say anything? The old saying goes: Eat the king's wealth, and be loyal to the king. Now let's talk about it: Whoever holds the bowl is responsible for serving. What example did you, Qin Muchu, set for those who came after you? The protagonist's father's explanation in the book is so pale. Then, what kind of comments will you get when you return to China? "Consistency" is not about doing things, but about being a person. Otherwise, your personality will collapse, you will be questioned, and you will lose the initiative to do things. What you do will be destined to fail when you come back (I think some people with experience will understand). With only a mere lack of talent, he has lived in vain for decades. Dan Ming understands the principle of "seeing small gains and forgetting one's righteousness, doing big things but cherishing one's life." There seems to be some understanding leaked from between the lines. I hope the protagonist will not be written in a way that none of us want to see. The author writes below, and don't add what you understand, experience, or think you should do that way into the plot. It's best to find someone with a clear conscience to talk to.

You have to understand that you are the rebirth of a 30-year-old business executive, not the growth of a child. I don't know what the mentality of a 30-year-old business executive is, but it is certainly not as childish as you wrote it.

In fact, it doesn't matter whether you change your nationality or not. If you don't change, take the Champions League as the peak. If you want to change, just add a suitable one and win the World Cup. But if you change, you keep mentioning it, passing the blame to your parents by the way, for fear that readers will forget, but it's really disgusting to keep saying it. Everyone knows what the situation of the national football team is, but if you keep saying that you have changed your nationality, you are scolding us. We can just say whether the national football team is good or not. It is really annoying for you to keep talking about it even if you are not Chinese!