I Own a Nostalgia House

Please support me and gain some popularity. Although it is considered to be a revival style, the angle is still very special.

Haha, I saw you making a fuss. In fact, most new books are like this. My word count is about the same as yours, and I have almost collected them. Come on! Don't be too hasty, take your time

After reading Chapter 7, can you write the protagonist more cleverly? I hope it won't be a reckless push later.

I was very embarrassed when I saw the tiger's body trembled, and I had no desire to continue watching 😴

There is another follow-up book, please don't be a eunuch.

Ignore him and continue updating tomorrow. I will write it later and take a look 😊, which is a bit disbelieving For a moment, let's see how it feels to hit the south wall

Will this new commission be related to Wang Yuan?

The characters are vividly drawn and have their own unique characteristics, which is simply amazing!

The golden fingers of this book are still good, but there are too many shortcomings and immaturity. I will point out a few points here 1. The description of the comrades is too shallow. There is no foreshadowing. Just writing about brotherhood and comradeship will be very dramatic and embarrassing. And even if there is no foreshadowing, it can still be shaped on the spot and elicit a memory or something. But maybe the author's writing style is too immature. The two comrades died, and the anger shown by the protagonist is very poisonous. And the little Taoist priest is too poisonous. I hope he won't have any scenes in the future. 2. It may be that there are too few chapters now, Goldfinger does not show too much, and the current Goldfinger is not exciting enough. It just gives things vaguely without too much description, which will also lead to dissuading readers. 3. The world view is too bad. If you want to achieve good results, you need to put old wine in new bottles. Don't have spiritual recovery + supernatural recovery again. You have to write something new. 4. The main plot is pushed too fast, without giving the protagonist time to develop and grow. Today's readers prefer to watch daily life, development, and farming plots.

Writing a book is not easy, even for newcomers Open this building, all authors who want to collect it Please leave your name here As long as I see it, I will add it to favorites😊