Demon Sealing Card

After reading twenty chapters, I can understand the new author's writing style, but I don't really like the protagonist's nanny-like character. I have finished reading Realistic Demon Sealing. Although the author has not updated it for the time being, to put it bluntly, there is still a lot to learn from the author. The two books are so different that there is no comparison at all. This kind of novice writing is still passable for a newbie to practice. I also suggest that authors should not put too much emphasis on relationships with women. Many authors cannot write this kind of thing well. New authors should not go too far into this aspect. If it is not done well, it will make people uncomfortable to read, and it will feel like something is forced. There are still some flaws between the sentences. I hope the author will pay more attention to it. Only personal opinions! Come on, author💪!

Name: Vivian (Death Kingdom) Race: Demon Spirit Occupation: Queen of the Undead Gender: Female Age: 20 Faction: Order Level: Law (Seal) Talent: Summon Death (God of Death with a Sickle) Prophecy Weapon: Queen's Scepter Treasure: Book of Death (records the death magic of the multiverse) Character: Dark-minded Wish: Want to advance to the God of Death with the help of the Kingdom of Death Image: A cool lady wearing a crown and a gothic black and white dress Introduction: The Death of the God of Death in the Western World After a long period of time, the existing divine kingdom generated spiritual intelligence and was sealed into a card by the male protagonist. He wanted to use the male protagonist's power to advance to god {"NickName":"Magical Creature in the Well","UserId":225223401}

Ye Zhen under the mask

No one wants to ask if there is a female protagonist? If yes, is it single or multiple? It's so depressing to watch! ! ! But the author, even if you see it, don't change the emergency setting. Just follow your own, I'm afraid I'll suddenly castrate! ! !

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I'm a noob in plot and writing, and it's about being a nanny for the country. Why do all the animal control genres follow this routine recently? Is it a team?

Frankly speaking, the author has written a book called "Realistic Demon Sealing Game" before, with a similar theme. This is your new vest.

I think about it, wherever the protagonist goes, he can meet someone who is more powerful than him or as powerful as him. The world is so big, you can be everywhere in just one city, it's amazing👍. This system doesn't work either. Demonic souls can leave whenever they want. Is Vivian a special case? Again, the world is such a big place, if only one person in Vivian's situation can have two, this system is really useless.

Just ask, what is the relationship between this book and "Realistic Demon Sealing Game"? Is it the same author?

Popular literature is the kind of literature in which the supporting characters are not worthy of their IQ, and the protagonist is shocked.

The creativity and ideas are fine, but the writing and plot are really lacking. . . Nowadays, fantasy and surprise novels no longer feature plots such as pet betrayal. It is actually better if there is no heroine and no ambiguity. And the dialogue writing is a bit bad, but I feel that it would be great if it was polished.

The more I read, the more I feel that you are the author of "Realistic Demon Sealing Game". Otherwise, I would go back and tie off the tail first, and it would be very uncomfortable to keep reading.

"Dragon Tower!" Welcome to the little brothers and sisters who come to play small roles. You can write down the character name and the demon soul you own. I hope all my colleagues can participate If more people watch it, I will also add more words. I am a newbie, so I can point out my bad writing. I will carefully read your speeches and take your suggestions seriously.

I knew this book would be eunuch sooner or later

The writing is jerky in the early stage, but becomes smoother later on. Come on, keep at it.

Is this the author's first time writing a book? This sentence is really discouraging. It's not about the plot, of course there is a bit of it, but the most important thing is that this sentence can't be understood! And where is that female ghost? Is that all? This fucking feeling...

Why are the names hidden in the rankings? Do you want to write that any passerby wants to mock the protagonist? It's okay to hide it, but at least let others know his strength and the quality of his demon soul.

I have read more than 50 chapters, can the author do it? Be more decisive in killing people and just hit and release them all day long. This is not even fun anymore 😰😰😰

The next book I will post is in the fantasy genre. The science fiction genre is not very good. I suggest you also write the beast-controlling style. Alternatively, the apocalyptic style of beast-controlling can also be used. You can read the novel Doomsday Summoning Frenzy to find inspiration.

Why do I feel that Anwar is the protagonist?

I quite like this kind of subject matter, but that one is the eunuch! I'll give you a monthly pass first, I hope you can stick with it.

I feel that the protagonist's opportunities are strong, but the strength is not enough or not reflected. I feel that the protagonist's special card system is not strong enough or does not reflect the difference.

"Card Tower" Since there is already a Dragon Tower, this card must also have an exclusive floor. Do you have any strange cards, such as magic cards, creature cards, power cards, physical cards, summoning cards, sword fairy cards, etc.,,, If you dare to think, I will dare to write. Bosses are welcome to contribute! ! The description of the cards may not be detailed at the moment. If I have the chance, I will describe the cards in detail later!

There is a book about the game of sealing monsters. The plot is quite different.

What did you write😅😅

You, the protagonist, felt like he was being outwitted in the later stages. He was a bit too arrogant and looked like a villain, which made people feel uncomfortable.