Reincarnation Among Pedestrians Covering the Sky

I read ten chapters in one go and let me know what I thought. 1. Don't write a systematic novel; 2. Try not to use words and phrases about modern things (especially Internet celebrity words), because after all, this is still a novel with an ancient style, and overly modern words make people look very dramatic; 3. The current chapters seem to be too jumpy. The protagonist goes here and there, and it is a bit incomprehensible. You have to pay attention to the clear connection. Also, the following are my personal thoughts, or what I like, for reference only: 1. The protagonist started to like Ji Haoyue very much, and even said that he wanted to be the man behind him. How come he suddenly fell in love with Ji Ziyue? It's incomprehensible. I think if I like Ji Haoyue, it's acceptable to write it as BL, there's nothing wrong with it. 2. Personally, I still like Ye Fan very much, and I hope he can achieve the realm found in the original work. 3. The most common thing in fan fiction is to intercept the opportunity of Hu's original protagonist. This seems boring and uninnovative, and readers who have a strong sense of substitution in the original work will hate this plot. It's best not to write like this.

Don't be in doubt about your old age. Come on, Ollie.

Isn't the Ancient Holy Body the human race's Holy Body?

Before I knew it, it was already 10,000 words long. Thank you all for your support. I also want to thank all the readers for your recommendation votes. Thank you all!

You can tell me your thoughts and I will try to add your suggestions!

Please, please be active! It's okay to comment on this chapter! Would you like to keep me motivated?

The school is holding a welcome show for new students. The cafeteria is so crowded that we can't even eat.

From now on it will always be, daily life, 4000 words

Dear readers, I know my writing is not very good, but now I have to shamelessly ask you for your recommendation votes! But it's only for this period of time, it won't happen again in the future, please.

I've been writing too much these days and it's completely divorced from the plot of Zhetian. I want to start over from today's chapter. As for why not delete it? I rewrote it entirely out of reluctance. After all, I didn't want the first book to end like this. The plot of the future story is another story line I originally thought of, and then I connected it in this way, and then I also changed the name of the protagonist. I just want to ask, do you think this book will have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

I didn't realize it was 50,000 words long, and thank you all for staying with me, although I don't know if anyone will read it! And what about me? This is my first time writing, so please forgive me, I will change it slowly! Everyone is active in the comment area, please, really please (//∇//)

The data is getting lower and lower. Others are steadily getting better. I am gradually declining. What a mess. I feel that one day I will not be able to keep updating daily and it will get worse and worse.

This book has ended like this, mostly because it is no longer related to the previous plot. I have opened a new book. If you are interested, you can check out "The Rise of the Heavens" from "Celebrating More Than Years"

It's this book. Didn't I finish writing it? Then I wanted to start it again, but I didn't want to be a eunuch, so I asked, should I continue writing it? That's you, don't you want to watch it? If you still read it, I will continue writing. If you don't, I will find an open ending for him. Tell me within this week

This fucking thing is Danmei, it must be, right? ! !

Add the number of chapters to the number of words, which chapter should be written.

Is this book cold? Everyone