
The Armored Warrior in Marvel
在漫威混的铠甲勇士
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 189k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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36Chapters
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I haven't watched it yet, but if you look carefully, you will find that the setting of Armored Warrior is actually not inferior to Marvel's. Take a look at Emperor's Man. .
Great idea! But you have to make some magic changes. After all, the firepower of the armor is really not as high as that of Iron Man. After all, it's an armor manufacturing system, so I'm not saying that I can't design armor! Come on!
The writing is novice, the plot is not good, the characterization is missing, and the protagonist is bluntly portrayed.
I have probably read twenty chapters and want to ask what the author's positioning is for this work? Is the self-pleasure funny category plus the invincible category? From the first few chapters, we have established a weird personality for the protagonist. The inner description feels like a clown making a joke, but not like Deadpool or Tony, who have a distinctive and poisonous tongue. It is easy to crash if the plug-in is turned on too high, otherwise you can only write invincible articles. Especially for the manufacturing system, it should be possible to write a semi-backstage type. The performance of the protagonist's intelligence needs to be expressed from a certain aspect of the protagonist, otherwise it will be like the protagonist written by Feng Chaohuang. I can afford to play with figurines, and my family's conditions are not too bad. At least I am relatively well-off, but what happens when the old man eats instant noodles after he leaves? Is the protagonist a giant baby? After all, he went to college, so he shouldn't behave like this, right? Does it look like he is in a rebellious stage? The description of time travel is a bit sloppy. He was sent to time travel by a big boss, and the boss didn't speak like it was the first time. His mentality was like it was fun, so he sent people to time travel, and the description seemed like there was a crisis. So why choose someone like the protagonist? It can be explained slowly later. At the beginning, it is shown that being a good person is just a promise to the old man.