Green Shirt Oath

Book review time: 47 chapters in series, about 100,000 words; Book review chapters: All chapters have been updated at the time of book review; Book review text: The writing style is relatively delicate, the psychological description is in place, the environment description is good, and the sense of substitution is strong. However, the portrait description of the characters is a bit poor. The image of the character is not very clear, the emotional expression is natural, and there is no feeling of embarrassment. The story is smooth and coherent, the language is humorous and interesting, and the emotional drama of the protagonist is well described. There are no obvious loopholes in the plot, there are no poisonous points, but the twists and turns are not very strong, the suspense is well done, the foreshadowing is also good, and the article is very integrated. The foreshadowing of Han Song's ring was very good. I didn't notice this detail at all, but what I wanted was this unexpected and reasonable feeling. However, because there were not enough twists and turns, the reader's urge to follow the story was not very strong. The rhythm of the plot feels relatively mild and slow, but the story is very interesting and attractive, and the description of the details of life helps to integrate the readers into the world of the novel. The plot is not empty, and it is also very helpful in introducing the entire novel world. I've seen a lot of soul-traveling themes, but this is the first time I've seen soul-swap. It feels quite novel. The character creation is very vivid, especially the male and female protagonists are quite interesting, and each character has its own characteristics, which is quite likable. The protagonist is not an almighty and invincible protagonist. This kind of protagonist feels more real. It is this guy with insufficient abilities who makes me very worried about her. The male protagonist also has his own story, which makes the image of the male protagonist fuller, but the stories of other characters seem to be lacking. The character of Han Song is well created. He is not a pure villain. He has a ruthless side and a tender side (toward his daughter). In addition, regarding Wang Qinruo, I think he is a character worthy of portraying. Although he is a villain and a villain, you can tell a story about why this guy is so bad, which will be of great benefit to enriching the plot and perfecting the character.        ，，，，        ：，，，，，，，？ When I first read the synopsis, I felt that it was not a serious novel, so I didn't read it until the past few days. After reading it, I found that this novel was completely inconsistent with the synopsis. How could such an orthodox historical novel have such a weird synopsis? Yes, it's weird. I'm short of words and couldn't find any other suitable adjectives. 😂 The book is generally sunny and kind, and it's relatively easy to read without so much violence. It's suitable for readers with a gentle personality. (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

It's nice to look at, and the writing needle doesn't scratch it. I've already collected it.

I came here recommended by an old classmate, haha, so I read it and wrote some reviews. The writing is good, much better than mine 👍, and it can clearly convey the characters' feelings and past experiences. The background setting at the beginning of the plot is also good. The souls are intertwined and they want to find the master. The protagonist also has a clear goal. Please give me some suggestions later. The progress is too fast. The man next to me at the beginning didn't have much of a story, and they separated quickly. It's a taboo for important characters to leave the scene quickly at the beginning. It might be better to design a complete conflict. Then the protagonist quickly found the master. . . It feels indescribable, and there is a gap between it and the setting. There are two more poisonous points: Chicken without salt is really not delicious. . . And why not tell the truth to the master? There is no handle in the woman's hands. It would be better to tell the story but the master didn't believe it and was scolded instead. Afterwards, the heroine kept working hard and finally confirmed everything. In the end, she found out that it was the master's intention because the woman had some kind of magic and the master took back her body for her. . . This is the beginning and end of a line, complete. The book is really good. Just shared with the author, please don't hit me. . .

Many years later, Song Guichen still couldn't help but feel moved when he recalled the stunning sight he caught in the heavy snow that year. She thought, maybe this is what people often call a pounding heart. Although it had been a long, long time since I had seen Du Qingshan, his beauty was so intrusive that after so many years, in Song Guichen's heart, his voice, appearance, and smile were not blurred, but became clearer. He said he would meet Shili Hongzhuang to marry her. He promised to accompany her all over the world. So Song Guichen kept waiting and was very patient. "Auntie, auntie, it's snowing outside!" The little boy, who looked like four or five years old, excitedly opened the door and rushed into the study. Along with it, a gust of north wind blew up the open pages of the book on the table. Song Guichen put down the book in his hand, put the boy into his arms affectionately, and pinched his nose. "It's snowing, let aunt see Azhao's frozen little nose." The boy giggled: "Aunt, it's itchy." "Mother, mother!" A little girl, also four or five years old, ran to Song Guichen excitedly, "The dead plum blossom in the west courtyard is alive!" Song Guichen was startled. "It's alive..." "Yes, it's still blooming. The servants are all gathered around to watch the excitement. Mother, go and have a look, it's beautiful." The girl was very eager and pulled Song Guichen out. "Mother, the plum blossoms are blooming. Will my father come back soon?" The cute little girl raised her head and looked at Song Guichen expectantly. Song Guichen paused after hearing this, and then said firmly to the girl: "Yes, your father said that when the plum blossoms bloom, he will come back." "But... But, they all said that father is dead, and if he dies, he will never come back." The girl cried, her small nose was red, "Mother, will father never come back?" Song Guichen knelt down and kissed the girl's cheek. "No, your father will come back." Although everyone thought he was dead, Song Guichen didn't believe it. She will never believe it until she sees his body. He said that he was born in the year of a cat, and cats have nine lives. He hasn't held her in his arms yet, hasn't given her beauty yet, and hasn't taken her through thousands of miles of mountains and rivers... How could he! How dare! How to die...

That math problem upstairs is too difficult! Change it! Come, let's pick up the poems 😏😏😏Song Guichen should be a literary and artistic person🤭 Pick chrysanthemums under the east fence, leisurely see the Nanshan Mountain. Mountain! ?

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The name of the new book "The Oath in the Green Shirt" is a bit unclear, but it is roughly a story about promises and oaths. I have been thinking about the design of this book for a long time, and put a lot more thought into it than the previous book "The Hour Also Knows the Moon" which I wrote on a whim. Save the manuscript... It's probably around 40,000 to 50,000 yuan now. Well, everyone, it's time to invest!

Ah, November 28th, Gu Yi's birthday 😰. Why did I set this date? Because if I hadn't celebrated my birthday on the lunar calendar, today would have been my birthday, too bad. 😄😄😄😄

I fried the snails but found that there were no toothpicks🤔

Fish, come on, come on!

I have invested over 100 and am happy. Why am I so easily satisfied~ Well, Shale... ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

This is the rhythm of becoming a great god!

Count the delicacies that appear in the book: 🤭 1. Roast pheasant, boiled pheasant; (Chapter 2, Chapter 4) 2. Jade pot; (Chapter 10, 11) 3. Bijing porridge; (Chapter 12 briefly mentions it) 4. Steamed duck with fermented wine; (Chapter 13) 5. Old clams with pearls in their arms; (Chapter 14) 6. Chapter 30, a table full of delicacies, all with dish names~🤭 "The three hot dishes in the middle: Palace mutton stewed with taro head, five-spice salt-baked chicken with black bean sauce, braised beef balls with shallots; Three Kaifeng dishes on the right: Braised bamboo fungus with dried hydrangeas, stewed soft-shell turtle with Wanfang Chun Yuanxiao, and go to court with drums; Three Hangzhou dishes on the left: West Lake vinegar fish, Song Sao fish soup, Longjing shrimp; There are three cold dishes on the top: Dian-flavored cold chicken, shredded tripe with red oil, and spicy beef; There are two soups on the bottom: duck duck in clear soup, and Eight Immortals beef soup; and two snacks: mung bean crisps and sweet potato balls; and a cup of tea at the end, which is Mingqian Longjing. "

A passage I read today: Nine out of ten writers can easily write a wonderful beginning, but only one out of ten can complete a complete story. It is always easy to be passionate. The difficult thing is how to stay lonely when the passionate blood has cooled down.

The cover is beautiful, the title is beautiful, and the big pen name is even more elegant. There is sugar in the beginning, the female protagonist can cook, the male protagonist is handsome, and I love it. What's rare is that the writing style is quite concise among female video authors. It has something to say and no nonsense. I have collected it and read it. Fire Tongs Liu Ming ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

Emma, ​​I have to express my feelings. It's very laborious to look up information in an abstract way, let alone Master, you still rely on history, so how much information do you have to look up? 🤔🤔 Either you, sir, are a "brain tank" yourself, knowledgeable and talented, and have a lot of knowledge in your mind, so that you can put your pen to paper. Hmm... I can't be envious, so I can only say "admire" 🙏🙏 and then go away and continue to count the number of words 😭😭

It seems that there will be no more updates. Friends, please take a look at my new book "Golden Seal Script and Jade Letter: An Inch Heart Through the Ages". Please, please...

Sprinkle flowers, scatter flowers, it's finally over

Finish spreading flowers 🤓