My Martial Soul in Douluo Can Control Time

I really feel that I have read so many Douluo fan stories, and my poison resistance is almost full, but this Shrek chapter really poisoned me to death, because it was so well written before, comparing Bi Dong's attachment, his childhood sweetheart with Qian Renxue, getting along with Hu Liena day and night, and writing letters to Xiao Wu. The logic that Xiao Wu cannot be brought back to the Spirit Hall, so she can only be allowed to practice in Notting City, is okay. I also reluctantly believe that she must go to Shrek to study with her, but how is it written that you want to act as a selfless and dedicated teacher to improve the strength of your future enemies? Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Xiao Wu, let's not talk about myself, what's the relationship between Tang San and you? You also send hair crystals and teach martial arts privately. What's the relationship between Dai Mubai and you? You beat someone up, talk him out, and then treat him and take care of him while you're on the road. Are you trying to help him change his ways and then go after Zhu Zhuqing? When I thought about Bibi Dong being killed by Tang San, I almost went crazy and wanted to run and kill Tang San. Then I started licking him when I saw him. I have the same opinion as the old man named Leo. I spent half a day watching Xinghe meet the Emperor's auspicious beast in Xingdou. From the moment the protagonist started buying hair crystals, I felt bad. Sure enough, it was as if a different person had written it. The protagonist The character completely collapsed. You know how important this auspicious beast is to the soul beast clan and can make the soul beast fight you desperately. There are a lot of galactic immortal cultivators in front of you. They have a reverence for life and are completely upright and decent characters. Then when you see an auspicious beast that you think is cute, you use your own immortal cultivation methods to abduct it without anyone noticing. Isn't this a hypocrite? Enter Soto City, the Rose Hotel, fight with Dai Mubai, let Zhu Zhuqing see Dai Mubai and the twins, sign up for Shrek, meet Oscar selling sausages, be caught by Dai Mubai, beat Zhao Wuji, meet Ma Hongjun and Cui Flower, Meeting Canghui in the Tavern, Phoenix-tailed Cockscomb, Chaotian Xiang, and Titan Giant Ape. I have seen this plot no less than fifteen times in Douluo Fans. I know it by heart. In the first lesson, I saw Oscar's sausage chopped into pieces with a sword and eaten three times. This Shrek chapter is really too poisonous, extremely poisonous, and the Spirit Hall chapter is really well written. My expectations for this book were infinitely higher, but the result was a cliff drop from 9 to 1. I copied the original book, licked Tang San, suspected of giving away a girl, and the character of the protagonist collapsed. I really want to support you, but I couldn't hold on anymore. I subscribed for 4 chapters and expressed my feelings. I will come back and skip the Shrek chapter in the future. I am still very optimistic about the subject matter.

After reading the second chapter, I forgive my poison resistance for being too low, so I retreated just to say a word. I just subscribed to a few chapters, and the author said that the second chapter was revised compared to Douluo's original work? Titled Douluo can't find a 5 or 6 year old child? Can a child escape from a titled Douluo? Can't you kill a level 1 person who is over 90? What is your setting? Brainless cool article? Even if it is a golden finger, can it be more reasonable? Moreover, the second chapter did not say that he escaped with the help of Goldfinger. It was just a simple sentence. The villain's Titled Douluo used a skill to dodge and ran away. The villain boasted again that he was really a genius who could avoid the attacks of the dignified Titled Douluo. Oh my god, I immediately persuaded him to quit, and he challenged me to a higher level. I surpassed more than 90 levels. It was really awesome. The book review said that the Shrek chapter has a lot of poisonous points. That's true.

I stayed up late to watch Chapter 51 and subscribed to the full version. I couldn't bear it. It's not just a matter of characterization, but also a taboo in YY novels. The protagonist can be deflated, stepped on and humiliated, but the premise is that there must be a foundation for shaping, such as elimination. It is reasonable that Yan becomes a useless person and his engagement is annulled, and a certain protagonist in Chen Dong has his supreme bones dug out at the beginning. In this case, the protagonist eats the deflated quilt, which is tolerable, because they are already weak due to various reasons. Readers can imagine it and can endure it. The protagonist you created earlier is a genius. Invincible. You can also control time. I was so abused all of a sudden that I even wondered if there was a bug in the starting point, so I changed the novel. Although the protagonist you created earlier was a bit arrogant, he at least knew how to be educated and sensible, especially the punch he gave Dai Mubai, but suddenly he wanted to take him away just because he looked cute, and he knew it would affect all the soul beasts. Combined with the kindness of the previous protagonist, don't you think it's very hypocritical? What's the difference between those who protect their pets because they're cute, put roast chicken in front of their pets' graves, and write that every life deserves respect? I also mentioned age, but I'm sorry that the main character's mental age is over 16 years old. He has also practiced immortality, and he can actually do the same behavior as the person in the weird news who unplugged his grandma's ventilator and plugged in his cell phone to charge it in order to play mobile games. Compared with the previous scene with Dai Mubai, he has completely become two different people. Is the protagonist schizophrenic? The most important thing in cultivating immortality is cultivating the mind, is that it? ? ? I'm afraid it's not the monster on Journey to the West who was killed after being killed. He thought he was Bodhi's apprentice and Sun Wukong's master. Is he qualified? People can be skinny and bearish, but in the face of big right and wrong, they must not be bearish. This is the bottom line. Also, the protagonist cannot be slapped in the face. Since he was so invincible in the past, he cannot eat such a big turtle. Unless you portray an ordinary hard-working ordinary person in the past, you have stepped on all the thunder. I really feel like I have suddenly changed a novel while watching it. The gap between the previous and later is so big that I even feel that it was not written by the same person.

If I don't like Ning Rongrong, these few are enough 😤😤😤

I'm new here. I haven't read it yet. I just want to know whether to lick Tang Sanyu Xiaogang or hammer them.

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Tang San destroyed the Spirit Hall just for personal revenge. In fact, if it weren't for the Spirit Hall, there wouldn't be so many civilian soul masters who could awaken. On the whole, the Spirit Hall promoted the progress of the entire system. If they were like the three major sects and only accepted highly talented disciples and rejected all civilian spirit masters, there would only be fewer and fewer spirit masters in the end. Tang San was okay. After all, there is nothing wrong with revenge. I think it should be marginalized. But Yu Xiaogang should be killed, it's too disgusting, I don't want to comment 🙂🙂🙂

It's still pretty good-looking, and it's outstanding among the many Douluo derivative works I've read. I think the two most attractive points of this book are the plots between Wuhun Palace and Bibi Dong. The author really has some talent for writing romance, which is beautiful. However, most male readers are probably similar to me, and they are quite resistant to romance on the surface, but after actually reading it, damn, it smells so good! The second one is a small plot, writing letters to Xiao Wu. This kind of detailed description is really attractive. One of the annoying things about many horse breeding articles is that as the number of characters increases, the ink on the key figures is naturally scattered. There are many female protagonists, but many of them are passed over lightly, and the level of excitement and touchingness plummets. Since arriving at Shrek Academy, it is indeed not as exciting as before. But compared to other similar works, it is indeed good Some personal suggestions are not to have too many heroines. How much space will be left for A Dong, A Wu, and A Xue?，，😊         ， I write some of my opinions.         ，， Bibi Dong also has this kind of heroic shortness of breath experience. A person who is mature, intellectual, idealistic (even though he turned dark later), and charming, is really hard not to like.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            but the first time I read Douluo was after the high school entrance examination. I bought a paper version of the book specially at that time. At that time, I thought that for a villain like Bibi Dong, how could anyone like someone who is against the protagonist? 😠 Today, I am almost graduating from graduate school, and I no longer have the black and white thinking I had before. Bibi Dong loves 😍 and understands Prime Minister Cao 😠😠

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Good guy, I was looking good at first, but suddenly out of nowhere I suddenly had the idea to take the auspicious beast out of the Star Dou Forest. Forget it, running away without using a sword when being attacked by an evil soul master is outrageous. Who can catch up with you if you want to run away? Did you really force this plot out of nowhere? Afterwards, I was disgusted by the excuses I made for killing a group of soul beasts. I just couldn't figure out the reason for writing this plot? You could have been invincible if you followed the steps, but here you have to forcefully defeat the protagonist, forcefully sensationalize, and abduct the auspicious beast. There are so many ways to do it, but I chose the stupidest one. And she asked you to take good care of her before she fell asleep. Is this how you take care of her? This paragraph really made me sick, I couldn't help but feel sick.

1. Platinum Bishop Salas. The shock in Salas's eyes gradually turned into a cold glow. The twin martial souls turned out to be another twin martial souls. No, this is definitely not what this untouchable can have. 2. Cardinal "Can you call Bishop Platinum by his first name?" The cardinal immediately reprimanded. 3. Cardinal. "How bold, how dare you disrespect the Pope." The cardinal who had been singing loudly shouted angrily. 4. The Golden Generation of Wuhun Palace, Yan Yan said coldly: "Leave the Star Dou Forest immediately, this is not the place you should be. Now our Wuhun Palace is working in the Star Dou Forest, and other soul masters will not be allowed to enter until half a year later. " 5. Gengxin City Wuhun Main Hall, Miles Among the people in Gengxin City, most of the civilians are applauding. With Miles's character, there are countless civilians who are usually oppressed by the Wuhun Main Hall. The main martial arts hall in Gengxin City was destroyed, and almost everyone in the city was applauding. I am confused, can this kind of people be called civilian representatives? Tang San is indeed not a good person, but Wuhun Palace is not a good person either. Tang San can feel free to be black, there is no need to forcefully cleanse Wuhun Palace.

Xiao Wu Xiao Wu

I renamed this book, Douluo: The Virgin Bitch

The first few chapters are really poisonous, especially the part about saving Xiao Wu, where he said so many beautiful words. The last sentence, teacher, help me 🙂, The top of the immortals, proud of the world, the galaxy is the sky with me, Dong'er save me, it's really embarrassing to see me

I didn't have the desire to watch anymore, even the soul beast didn't want to kill me because I was drunk, so I just committed suicide on the spot and it was a waste of practice. A cultivator can't survive more than one chapter without blood on his hands.

The protagonist is too holy, just a little bit poisonous,

I have read a lot of Douluo fan books recently, and when I was reading comments, I occasionally saw a message about the plot after Douluo 1. Because I personally didn't read the remaining 234 of Douluo 1, and I didn't read anything else. After reading other people's debate, I suddenly had a little question about the meaning of Wuhun Palace. Because many novels are not hostile to the Wuhun Palace at every turn, even if they take the path of the Wuhun Palace, men all know the reason. It feels like the meaning of Wuhun Palace is seldom truly explored. In particular, there are many comments that Wuhundian is the same with or without him, and it's not because of me being tough. Mainly because one comment said that I really can't understand that after the unification of Wuhun Palace, historical civilization will not progress. That's why I thought about it seriously and then posted this. The meaning may be very small, but I feel uncomfortable if I don't post it. First of all, the gap between the existence and non-existence of Wuhun Palace The first one is from Douluo Yi's free awakening of Wuhun and then subsidies, to what they say about the federation or something? There is no subsidy and you have to pay for it. It seems to be too expensive. Not to mention study schools, but in comparison with our own history, we have changed from private education to free provision by the state, right? Compare our history with what's in the book, and talk about their so-called civilized federation reversing history. There's nothing wrong with that. The second one is that I am doubtful about the view that Wuhun Palace will not progress after its unification? First of all, we must know how big the role of the Wuhun Palace is. ① First of all, the Wuhun Palace has the power to suppress the two empires. The pressure it puts on them makes it impossible for them to fight a war. So this brings peace and stability to Douluo Continent. ② What many people have grasped is that the subsidies from Wuhun Palace are paid on behalf of others and are funded by the empire. But you have to think clearly that they must pay for this money. If the empire doesn't contribute and Wuhun Palace pays for it, then what does it have to do with them? At that time, the people's hearts will completely go to Wuhun Palace. Do you think it's impossible for them to pay for it? ③Think about who are the owners of ancient knowledge in our history? An aristocratic family, to put it another way, could be called a noble family. How many opportunities do common people have to learn? Only a few scholars occasionally appeared among tens of thousands of people (before the Tang Dynasty). Of course, this is just what I personally summarized from the information I received from watching TV, news, and novels. So do those empires really care about civilians? If you really cared, there wouldn't be a pure aristocratic school ranked number one. Why there are so many civilian schools is not all because of the existence of Wuhun Palace. If they hadn't established a civilian academy, what would have been the consequences? The complete loss of talent would have been completely absorbed by Wuhun Palace. That's why civilians have a way to rise. ④The most important point is that we can know from their words that when Wuhun Palace was there, although ordinary civilians had a certain fear and fear of soul masters, they were at least stable and safe. They won't appear to massacre the village every now and then, right? If they don't like you, they will destroy you. Even if most of the struggles are between soul masters. Civilians are rarely involved. But what would be the future impact of Wuhun Palace? The village that was said to be massacred was the village that was massacred. As a result, the state did not care, and only one school came forward to pursue them. Isn't it funny? Then there is the existence of evil spirit masters. Are their presences felt during Dou Yi? My feelings for them seem to have existed in the Killing City. And I feel like the Killing City is just a prison where life is worse than death. Then learn from their responses how active they were at 2. That's right, the above is just my personal opinion and understanding. Because I have never seen many of them and learned about them from other people's comments and responses. Because no one seemed to point out their mistakes. So I took it seriously. If there are any errors, please point them out so I can correct them. The most important thing is that I really want to know what most people think about Wuhun Palace. By the way, please slow down when replying to my message, don't be in a hurry and say it properly. Don't cause unnecessary conflicts. I hope everyone can reply in a civilized manner. Thanks!

The book I just read today is all ordered for you. How about adding some details? Bibi Dong is the best in the world 😍

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The main character of Biao Virgin is really amazing. I will tell you a joke based on this logic. Don't worry. Everyone is also a living being, but you kill other living beings to eat to maintain life. If these living beings (livestock, plants) were aware, they would also roar. You were born on mother earth, but you have to breathe to increase the greenhouse effect. If the earth is alive, it will roar, right? Does the issue of plane rules impose moral condemnation on the people living in the plane? It's hard not to suspect that the protagonist is an animal who has become a time traveler

When I see a woman, I can't walk and I feel so strong Is this a cultivator? What comes out is martial arts Nummy cultivator? ? ? Serious doubt

The protagonist is really disgusting. He doesn't want to kill the soul beast. Anyway, the protagonist has practiced skills. It's okay not to practice the soul power of the Douluo world. However, the protagonist said to Bibi Dong that he hopes he won't kill soul beasts that are 100,000 years old to get soul rings. Because killing soul beasts in order to become stronger is contrary to the protagonist's view and he can't stand it. Isn't this just telling Bibi Dong not to stop practicing? ? Anyway, there is no way to improve your soul power without a soul ring. The protagonist never thought that if Bibi Dong didn't kill the hundred thousand year soul beast, wouldn't others be able to kill it? Others become stronger after killing others, but the skills are not given to Bibi Dong, leaving Bibi Dong standing still? Especially when I saw that I was willing to be the enemy of the world for Bibi Dong, I couldn't stand it, and I was not willing to give back the skills to become the enemy of the world. Bah,,, I still want to overthrow this abnormal cultivation method and create other cultivation methods in the future. Do you want to create it? Doesn't the protagonist already exist? Why not bring it out? It's not because he's afraid that after others practice, the protagonist won't be able to leapfrog and fight.

A group of "Bibi Dong" licking dogs, so interesting

As expected of a cultivator, her kidneys are like iron. The eight heroines may be too busy for her.

It was so licking, the holy bitch didn't know how she survived. In addition, the personality gap between the front and back is so big that it doesn't feel like it was written by the same person.

This is because you wrote it too early, otherwise you would have persuaded them to quit in the second chapter. Originally, the reason why the wandering evil soul masters were not strong was because of the role of the Wuhun Palace, but you directly wrote an evil soul master with the strength of a Titled Douluo, which directly reduced the role of the Wuhun Palace to the lowest point.

I just saw this book yesterday, thank you so much for the author＾0＾~

It's another brainless novel. The plot I heard is the same. I suspect you copied it. Today I need to evolve this novel software.