I'm Not the Only One Who Can Make Money, Right?

Now that I have read Chapter 30, I always feel that the writing about krypton gold is too loose, and I don't feel the excitement of krypton gold. The things in the gift package have no sense of existence. The character of the pig's feet is too romantic, but the author tightened it tightly, which makes it timid and timid. It doesn't look good. Here's a suggestion, even if you can't find it, you can pretend to be a wealthy person in the early stage! There are so many useless things, who wants to show some respect? I am afraid that the wealthy people will give me less money. We all are wealthy people and I don't want to lose face. 🤓 Krypton gold items can be used vigorously. After some attribute display, the sense of pretentiousness and krypton gold coolness will come. In the guild, you can tease girls and bring notebooks and the like. Just write krypton gold, then the mall gift package should be written more carefully and more, and everyone will not feel that it is unfair, because we are here to see this 😜. After the transition in the early stage, isn't it true that you are a wealthy person? It's time to develop your career. If the attributes of the game do not affect reality and do not contain fantasy elements, there is no need for The Lone Ranger, because this type of game is boring. You don't have to be the boss to join a trade union, you can be more harmonious and relaxed. If you join a trade union and write a lot of nonsense about it, it will be a failure. If you are a wealthy person and your personality is not bad, no one will support you, right? The union war is better written. If your attributes are so high, you can harvest the battlefield as a nuclear weapon and that's it. I don't know if these little suggestions are useful or not, just take a look at them. 😁

The main character is a bit slutty, and I skipped reading about women. It would be more enjoyable to read in detail about recharging or games.

Generally speaking, after reading 30 chapters, I don't feel any better. I don't dare to use my own stuff, just because it's just a money-making boss. There are so many things that the author himself doesn't even understand. There is no attribute value in an online game novel. How do we know that the protagonist has become stronger? Other players have better equipment than the protagonist, and their mounts are gold. They don't use the dozens of red mounts on their bodies, and they say that they are not lacking in these attributes. You are playing a game. You said that you will get attribute bonuses even if you don't go out in battle. Why keep them? I won't see you selling them later. Stuff them in your backpack? ?

There is a post saying that I can give it three points out of ten. As for the writing style, it is just average. But what a novel requires is a feeling. If you can make the protagonist flesh-and-blood, it's actually worth eight points. Other cuteness is less important than these things. What is important about you is that you, the protagonist, attracted me. The gradual transformation of an ordinary person seems very full and real. Well, it's been more than ten years since I read the novel. In the past, when Zhai Zhu was not famous, I was optimistic about Journey to the West. The books I like are basically Sanjiang at least. Well, I wrote this book well as a way of accumulating contacts, and I think it was well written.

I don't often read online articles, so I don't know the strength of online articles. However, based on my personal feelings and reading situation, I can give this book a 3 out of 10 in my personal evaluation. The beginning is not impactful, it is just a direct explanation of the setting. I personally think this is not a good beginning. Although many online articles are like this, if you want to write a good book, you should not start like this. It is recommended to start with a conflict event and use something like a battle to show the setting. I like to read the latest chapter after reading a little bit of the first chapter to see the author's growth, but the author doesn't seem to have changed much in my opinion, which makes it impossible for me to continue reading this book. Whether it is the writing style or other aspects, the author does not use the word "good". Please study the writing skills.

I have three impressions: one is messy, the other is licking, and the third is childish. The first one is messy, the system is messy, upgrade changes are not clear, upgrades require experience. Changes are not clear, monsters gain experience at each level, the damage calculation coefficient is not clear about the amount of blood, the number of equipment slots, the specific attributes and speed bonuses of the mounts, the map size is too messy, two adventures. The first half chapter of a man and a woman is gone. The second time, oh, it is so generous, the brother and sister who are not afraid of exposing anything screamed, the purple mount was given for free, but the sister did not want it. You have to pay (you can freely set your appearance as long as it doesn't look different). Typing gives me a headache. I don't think you wrote an outline! ! ! ! You didn't set the pig's feet (hot-blooded), I think it was the author (hot-blooded)

This book is well-written, at least it doesn't feel like there's anything poisonous about it, it's very smooth. You can see there is progress. Come on, author.

Tsk tsk,,, doesn't really appeal to me. . I saw dozens of pictures

It's not cool enough. The junk equipment and unused pet mounts given by recharging are sold. It's obvious that the official can't find it, so what's there to worry about? After selling it, you just pretend to be awesome, which is cool. Also, add a guild to complete the game. If you add a red guild, it will be of no use as you are still a solo player. Add a better guild to play together, and upgrade it with you to do quests to get equipment. It will be more fun again. Most people who play games play games, and those who play games basically play with gangs and guilds. Or maybe it's okay to be a lone ranger without writing about a guild, and the protagonist doesn't have a career, and he wants to find someone white, rich and beautiful that other people's parents will agree with? Since we have this condition, we should set up a studio and a chamber of commerce. I don't know if a city will be built in the future. There are also 4 master sub-professions that can be given to people in the studio (the account number that signed the work contract belongs to the studio). It's basically okay to make several billion a year in this way, as long as you don't go overboard.

Author, I want to say that the things the protagonist gave away with krypton gold are so powerful, and the protagonist is on par with other masters. Does this mean that the protagonist is inferior? 😏 Unless it is an invincible text.

Why should you go to the guild to sell unleveled items? Isn't the forum auction great? Bidding comes from all over the world. Anyway, it is obtained from hidden tasks, and the official will not look for you.

The writing is very good, I haven't seen a well-written online game novel in a long time! Come on!

This book is good, I will read it. But I have some questions for the author: How is the equipment you need designed? The red equipment is in the early stage, but what about the mid-term and late stage? It's not just a matter of rank, what about the equipment attributes? It needs some specialness or special effects. Anyway, in red. After all, your game has great intentions, so it needs to be more playable. In addition, you can exchange some of your unused equipment, materials, pets, and mounts for more money. I would be too embarrassed to go out if I didn't have the ability to make hundreds of millions.

It's not that cool, and since 50 gold coins can be sold for 440,000, it means that gold coins are very difficult. As a result, any adventure copy can get 150 gold coins, which is equivalent to more than 1 million yuan.

You have a good idea, but if the results are really not good, just start it again. You can slightly change it and send it to fantasy. Online games are really unpopular now🤐🤐🤐

Now that the author of the game article is writing this, it would be nice to add something that can be applied to reality.

What can I say? After reading it, I felt that it was not a cool novel and it had no depth. It was neither embarrassing nor embarrassing. I just felt that the protagonist's IQ was not high enough and everyone was smarter than him.

I'm really speechless after reading more than 80 chapters... I quit the guild after a big event, and I'm speechless without a corresponding ending. Since the script assumes that one person can earn money, he should be a lone ranger. At most, he will build his own guild later, and the emotional line is really too thin. This article makes me happy to read, but it's a pity that it's such a good idea. If you want to make an innovation, you can put the settings in Xiuxian, a krypton gold system, etc., Which is also quite good.

Yes, I have collected it. By the way, your updates are so fierce, let's visit each other 🤫

U1s1 Actually, there is no need for the misunderstanding between the protagonist and the union. You don't have to be the boss after joining the union. The relaxed atmosphere is also quite good, and it feels weird to be involved in conspiracy theories related to reality. The heroine feels a bit sowing discord. Should it be better to revise the article? (The stars were so miserable last night for a child)