Become Invincible by Killing the Protagonist

How should I put it? The punctuation is a bit messy, and the plot is a bit powerless. I understand that you may want to write a compact and coherent climax, but when you read it, it feels a bit like a running account, and more like the protagonist is enjoying himself alone. I suggest that you don't be too anxious to update. Go to the starting point and as a reader, calm down and read the chapters you have finished before. With the mentality that you have never read this book, read it over and over again, so that you can find the problems in the chapters yourself. After all, I have experience with this kind of thing. When I wrote it, I thought it was pretty good. But when I looked back and read it as a reader, I felt like it was all nonsense 😂, so I revised and read it over and over again. I didn't stop until I could read it completely at just one glance. I think you can also try this method, it works very well, so keep going!

I will update slowly. Anyway, it is absolutely impossible for this book to cost money. After all, it's so bad and updates are so slow. It's really a shame to ask for money. The author is self-aware~

Ahem, after reading the introduction, I now wonder if the author has also read the book My Disciples Are All Villains. Otherwise, why is the protagonist called Ji Tiandao? If it is just a coincidence, treat it as if I didn't say it, and I can only blame Ji Laomo for appearing too frequently 😂😂

Your introduction is just to persuade you to quit!

An ID called 1? ? ? ? User, I advise you not to read this novel, it will poison the monster! Still wasting 2 recommendation votes

Standalone is really fun🙂

It only takes one chapter from the discovery of the protagonist to the killing of the protagonist, and the killing was mediocre, with no explosion and no expert action. It felt like killing a passerby and almost not feeling the power of the protagonist's halo. For example, killing Xiao Huohuo should be like this: You will die today in less than thirty years, then the Xiao family will attack the protagonist and be destroyed, then the grandfather will take action, and finally the grandfather will be defeated in a fierce battle, and Xiao Huohuo will die of despair. This is how you feel.

I suggest you look for problems with the writing first... The narrative is too confusing and I can't explain anything clearly. From paragraphs to sentences, there are problems. Although online articles do not require good writing... But at least they have to explain things clearly.

I prefer this kind of subject matter, but the authors I see are either not systematic writers or have insufficient writing experience, and there are many poisonous points. However, I don't have enough knowledge to write good villain works. So my friend and I discussed some settings of the villain novel. The main issue is who has the protagonist's aura. If it is on himself, there is no essential difference from other books. If it is on another "protagonist", it will be very interesting. To break the situation, we have to study the nature of the protagonist's aura. I'm afraid it will be written as a science department cultivating immortality. Setting 1: The "author" creates the world and directly affects the development of the plot. The "author" is omniscient but not omnipotent Setting 2: The "author" is subject to three main restrictions: 1. The "author" has limited energy and can only interfere with the development of the main plot, and other parts of the world will develop naturally; The less interference the "author" has; 3. The will of the "author" is greatly affected by the "reader" Setting 3: The essence of the "protagonist halo": with the approval of the "reader", the character who is paid attention to and directly interfered by the "author" will be favored by the rules of the world Methods to break the situation: 1. Reduce the causal connection with the protagonist early, not play a major role in major events, and avoid the sight of the "author", which is the prerequisite for all preparations. At the same time, there must be a mainstream value connection between "author", "reader", "protagonist" and "world". From this, we can infer the values of "reader" in particular. This is the only way to fight against "author" 2. There are two ways to kill the protagonist: 1. Obtain the recognition of the "reader", create an environment in which the "reader" believes that the protagonist dies a justifiable death, or cause the protagonist to lose the support of the "reader", and induce the protagonist to become depraved or morally low, which will cause the "author"'s intervention to undo all previous efforts. It may lead the protagonist to a plot with obvious conflict of values. No matter what the protagonist chooses, it will divide the readers' support and weaken the help from the "author" 2. Directly defeat the "author" and lead his help to the protagonist into a logical conflict, reaching the point where he cannot justify himself, causing the "reader" to give up, and finally make the author give up and stop interfering in the world

I want to change the main character's name. Can you help me think about it? But the surname must be Ji