Marvel's Necromancer

After reading Chapter 4, I can only say that the coincidence is hard to accept. As soon as SHIELD said a few words, the pets would cause chaos and the experimental subjects would go berserk. I didn't think of a way to modify the memory to make up for it, but just TPed away, which completely reduced my intelligence. I read the next five chapters patiently, wanting to see if there was any plot or development that could wrap things up, but I ended up leaving it alone! ? This is really forcing all kinds of coincidences in order to force the development of the relationship. That's it?

There's nothing wrong with joining the SHIELD area. That is, in the first chapter of the opening chapter, Hell's Kitchen meets Aegis, in the second chapter, the identity is discovered when Aegis is encountered, and in the third chapter, a branch plot is triggered to meet Aegis again. I didn't join SHIELD at all, it was just a coincidence and an accidental encounter. As for dog licking, there is no mention of it. It's just friends supporting each other.

There is no such name as Fire Mai in Japan. If it is Mai Shiranui, the surname is Shiranui, and the pronunciation of Mai Mai is Mai The pronunciation of Fire Mai becomes himai Try to pronounce it, can this be regarded as a name? You also have to pay attention to the basic rules when choosing a name If possible, just change Hinata Fire Dance to Hinata Dance

The beginning is okay, but unfortunately I don't like the main character. He has tetanus and always smiles bitterly, smiles bitterly, smiles bitterly.

I have read so many Marvel fan fictions, but I have never understood it. People like the protagonist, who are safe and careful to hide themselves, will be exposed when they are exposed. Like the villains in Marvel, who can hide their identities every day when they do things. Are those villains too awesome or is SHIELD cooperating with the Ancient One? The local superpowers can hide, but the time travelers will catch them one by one?

Alas, it's totally okay. The author is not restricting the protagonist at all. The protagonist has the ability to control people, but due to various reasons, it is force majeure! He just can't control those who cooperate with him, he can't control the rich, he just can't control his undercover agents. He can only control some of his younger brothers. This is very reasonable!

Hinata fire dance, la la la la.

How many people were persuaded to quit in Chapter 4?

Regarding the things SHIELD does, many people who are not villains are forced to become villains. This department is really poisonous. I hope the protagonist will destroy SHIELD soon.

This person has also written about the Necromancer in the Marvel world before, as well as the eunuch and Lao Dongchang.

Personally, I feel that the author's writing skills are not very good, and I also hope that the author will not write older routines that are already bad. No matter what other people think, I don't like it.

I thought it was fake technology style, but I was disappointed😞

The author is very careless. The sentry robot that appeared in Chapter 89 😰 is that a robot? Brother, that is Odin's Destroyer Armor. The armor is armor, and they call it Destroyer. The sentry robot is from the mutants next door, okay?

Kasumigaoka Fire Dance/Shiyu

It's too pretentious, the pig's feet are too generic and have no characteristics.

The author was specially recruited to Dongchang

You can rename this "Mage is not undead at all"