Divine Sculpture World Enlightenment

An assembly line work, the writing style is basically equal to that of a gunman, the plot arrangement is very disgusting, the God-piercing eagle, the system's cause and effect changes rewards, but basically does nothing. It's still a tragedy. You want to change something but don't take action, and you blindly say that the protagonist is powerless. In short, the more you watch, the more disgusting you are, and the more you watch, the angrier you become.

It was okay at the beginning, but Kang Yuan was confused at the beginning. He knew clearly that the ancestral court would be burned down but did nothing. Later, he killed three thousand soldiers in anger and looked for it! This is also a big deal, almost no one in the world of low martial arts can do it! He was just invincible but was slapped in the face. A group of monks forced a big boss who killed three thousand Yuan troops. Moreover, when foreign countries are mentioned in the writing, there are all kinds of licks. Lamas, Indians, and Persians are all enigmatic, behave noble, and will do anything to inherit. On the other hand, our team is all short-sighted and cunning pig teammates. Finally, there is the flat-headed brother in the whole book. He is so iron-headed and naive. He is really not afraid of dying quickly!

Another coward, even though he is invincible, he is still so useless. Like a swarm of ants forcing an elephant to hand over its tusks. Goodbye giant poison

My scalp was numb after reading Chapter 1. I had just traveled through time, and the 200 words had not even passed a minute. When I heard that Yang Guo Quanzhen Cult confirmed that it was the Legend of the Condor Heroes, the first thought that came to my mind was that I want to save the old woman in the Tomb Sect. It's strange, I don't even understand the environment I'm in, I don't even know my identity, I don't even know my name, I've never seen the mother-in-law, she's just a character in a novel, and my first thought is that I want to save her. It is so great. Tens of millions of people die every year on the earth. How come it is not so great? It's really disgusting.

He actually awakened his martial spirit and started messing around. I will withdraw first.

The setting of this book is okay, and it has potential if it is well written. Many people commented that poisonous points frequently appeared in the back. In fact, readers have never written before. Writing is a boring thing and few can persist. Moreover, this person's writing has a shortcoming. This is a common problem for novices. If they can't overcome it, it means the author has a bright future and potential. If he can't overcome it, he will be sprayed by readers until he disappears!

You have been rapidly transitioning into fantasy in these recent chapters. I mentioned before that the protagonist is in the martial arts world, but where does the spiritual power come from in the martial arts world? In recent chapters, the protagonist, Youdao Quanzhen, has been portrayed as a fierce ghost. Isn't this funny? Even though you explained in the latest chapter why the eyes are green, it still doesn't fit the character and is very low. Needless to say, if you keep writing like this, you will be defeated. If you want farming and development, if there is no farming and development, if you want it to be more enjoyable or not, you think, will others see it?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of mind, the Mongols led the Mongols to destroy your sect, but you let them leave behind the reincarnated soul boy. Even though he was invincible, he was forced by ordinary people to hand over his cultivation techniques. The author has some ideas, why is it so disgusting?

Sometimes the author is too involved in writing and easily loses the reader's reading experience. 😰😰😰 So after you publish it, you might as well go back and read the novel you wrote. Don't read it on the computer, but use the mobile APP to see if your segmentation and logic have been processed. Readers are not familiar with the development and plot of your story. It may be better to think of yourself as a reader.

I came here with the intention of cultivating martial arts, but you showed me martial arts? Farewell. Anyway, I am wasting other people's time by writing an introduction. I deserve to be scolded.

After reading the introduction, I was attracted to it, but it turned out that the content was a bit inconsistent. To cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality carefully. What the hell is a martial soul? If the martial soul does not have a soul ring, it cannot be upgraded. If you are a martial arts practitioner, you should not engage in other systems. I thought it was a casual hermit farming and cultivating immortality indifferently. I didn't expect it to be an ordinary martial arts routine. The system is still messed up. Sorry, I was going to leave directly, so I couldn't help but comment.

Come on, since it's set that you can't travel through the world, then develop the world, raise the world level, upgrade the world, and later come to the intersection of the worlds, and use the world to conquer the heavens! Basically finished writing the settings, it must be good! Give me a suggestion! Although I am a new author, my initial hang-ups are a bit overwhelming! Things can be given step by step as the plot progresses, but it will be boring if you give them all at once!

I didn't look at the back, but when Golden Finger came out, the newbie gift package was Douluo Wuhun, which I really didn't feel. I don't know if it's because of the advertising bombardment or because it was too hyped, but I really have no interest in Douluo, or even feel disgusted.

Now really all kinds of smelly fish and rotten shrimps can be found in Sanjiang

The plot and setting are so messed up, why did you mention Sanjiang? !

Because of holding the Sanjiang on Tang San's stinky feet?

I was recommended by Sanjiang. I'm not an old Shennong and I couldn't stand it. First of all, I didn't know what it was about in the first chapter. I thought it was about being bullied after time travel. But after reading the whole chapter, I found out that it was the original owner. Then after reading six chapters, the protagonist role was not that many supporting roles, so I thought it was the main character. The character is Yang Guo, and then the awesome guy comes. In Chapter 6, he gets a gift package for newbies and opens the Three Treasures Jade Ruyi. Yes, it's the Yuanshi Tianzun. Then instead of the magic weapon, it's the Tao 🐴 Martial Spirit, which is also innately full of soul power. I thought it was a fairy novel about cultivating immortals, but it turned out to be a Douluo fan?

I was confused when I saw this, and I felt that I deserved to rush to the street. The martial arts started with a full innate soul power, and then you talked to me about cultivating immortals. Aren't you kidding me? I think this is the author who is so happy

It's strange that it was recommended on the homepage, no wonder. The subscription points are getting lower and lower. Reported revenue has been declining.

I really can't stand it. I have to mention the appearance of pig's feet every time. It's slightly ugly, a little bit ugly. I just write it. But is it necessary to write it every time? Did the original novel mention that he was ugly? Do you have to be so harsh on us?

Let me just say one thing, Chapter 6, Awakening the Martial Spirit! 🤭