The Sword Immortal in White Clothes of Qingyun

Lu Xueqi

I feel like I am aboriginal but not aboriginal, and the writing is specious.

Has the protagonist seen Zhu Xian? You said he has seen it, but he doesn't know Wan Wan. He hasn't seen it, but he knows Zhou Xian. It's such a repeated contradiction and he doesn't want to watch it.

This book is very well written, and I have read a lot of Zhu Xian fan fiction, but the main character in it gave me the impression that it is another original novel with Zhu Xian as the background, and it is not a fan novel. Although it generally follows the original work, it does not prevent me from giving it an excellent Xiuxian novel (it is not a fan novel, and there is no feeling of fan fiction in it. I would like to say that I have not read the original work, and it is undoubtedly more immersive). It is worth reading. I hope the author will update it faster.

Ethereal and pure

Fellow Taoists, I have reached the fourth level of Jade Purity

Is the main character an original native or a time traveler? At first I just wanted to have a single heroine, Xue Qi, but after Baguio came out, I thought it would be a dual heroine. I hope Baguio will stop using the infatuation curse.

How should I put it? The most taboo thing among fans is to follow the plot flow and have to do everything first-hand.

Um, let me give you a suggestion. The author is ambiguous in many readings. For a book, you should have a basic outline, and then change the character settings and so on. Even if it is a fan novel, there should be some. The most basic thing in your book is whether the protagonist knows the plot. You are not sure yet... This seems to be very confusing. Does that mean you know or don't know? You won't let me guess, right?

Harem? Speechless, gone, gone

Have you noticed that the heroine of Zhu Xian fan fiction is rarely Baguio, and the heroine of Dou Luo Dalu fan fiction is rarely Xiao Wu. After all, even us readers want them to be together.

Multiple heroines? Harem? I came here to have a harem with multiple heroines. Can you tell me in advance?

① Is such an awesome plug-in interesting? ②Others have been practicing for decades to reach their peak, but you have been cultivating for just a few years. Is it interesting? (I just don't understand that I always like the idea of ​​becoming invincible within a few years of the timeline. I feel like I'm in the water supporting various shocking plots.) I always feel that reading this kind of novel is too hasty. Is it really true that cultivation will not lead to obsession? 🤐Too serious ③ Flirting with widows every day, married women, lolita, is it interesting for a stallion to have a harem? Can you come here to play? ④Is it interesting to be a dog licker every day? ⑤ Is it interesting for a woman to blush all the time? ⑥ Since Zhu Tianwen, don't always follow the protagonist and the original work. The world is very big and the protagonist's perspective is very small. You are the author who created Difference and Opportunity, otherwise wouldn't it be interesting to just copy the original work? ⑦ Can you write a paragraph of 3-6 lines? The author is great, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to look at😭, and it is a long page. Is it interesting? ⑧ It's always the Holy Mother who gives me the exercises. Is it interesting? ⑨Always with the title, is it interesting to sell dog meat at the expense of others? ⑩Is it interesting to always lower the IQ of supporting characters?

Author, come here for a moment. Did you make any mistake? Who can read this if it is updated every day? Let the readers of the book next door think that we don't have the coins to read the book. Here is another chapter, one chapter per person.

Author Damn, this book will still be updated, right? I have read some recently and I think they are good... But looking at the time span of recent updates... I feel like I am a eunuch... So I am here to ask...😥

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the writing was pretty good, but the life story of the protagonist was too confusing. The protagonist was entrusted to Cangsong by Suzaku, and then became a disciple of Daoxuan. Suzaku has no friendship with Cangsong. The only person who has some connection with Qingyun Sect is Manhuangxing a hundred years ago. Suzaku fell in love with Wan Jianyi. It is assumed here that the protagonist is the son of Suzaku and Wan Jianyi who had a one-night stand. After raising him for more than ten years, he felt that the protagonist was not suitable for the Demon Cult and wanted him to join the Qingyun Sect. However, Wan Jianyi faked his death and could only be entrusted to Wan Jianyi's number one younger brother Cangsong. But in Cangsong's eyes, Daoxuan was the murderer of Wan Jianyi and their master. If the protagonist was Wan Jianyi's son, Cangsong would not have allowed him to become his teacher after his father-killing enemy. Moreover, the age does not match up. If Wan Jianyi and Suzaku's son had lived to be over a hundred years old, it is impossible for Wan Jianyi to fake his death and sneak out of the ancestral hall to have an affair with Suzaku. Therefore, the assumption that the protagonist is Wan Jianyi's son is not valid. If the protagonist is not Wan Jianyi's son, and the relationship between Suzaku and Cangsong does not exist, then it can only be that Cangsong defected to the Ghost King Sect out of hatred, and the Ghost King Sect arranged the protagonist to be an undercover agent next to Daoxuan through Cansong. This makes sense. The protagonist comes from the Ghost King Sect, and his surname is Wan, so it is obvious that the protagonist is the son of the Ghost King Wanwen, and the brother of Baguio. If you guessed it right, please help me. If I guess wrong, it only means that there is something wrong with the author's settings. Please help me, the bosses, and let's scold the author together.

Lu Xueqi is the one who has gained the most. As long as you beat her in the Qingyun Competition, she will definitely be interested in you because of her pride.

What the hell, there are extra things from Sword and Sword 4 inexplicably, there is no foreshadowing, and everyone is familiar with it? ? ?

May I ask, is it a single heroine?

Xihe Sword

"Xiao Zhou took a deep breath, took a step forward, and the Seven-Star Sword in his hand lit up, but the Ghost King did not make any move. He just stood there and looked at him with a smile. Xiao Zhou knew that this man was the strongest enemy he had ever encountered in his life, but there were fellow juniors and juniors behind him, so he could not give up the fight no matter what. To escape, I just hope that I can hold him back and let the two fellow disciples go first." Senior Brother Xiao is obviously brave and resourceful, calm and able to deal with any difficult problems with ease. Daoxuan and Tian Buyi disappeared. His vigorous and resolute approach shows the temperament of a leader. I was so hacked here 😅

I haven't watched Zhu Xian, so it seems pretty good, but sometimes the author doesn't introduce new characters, which makes it a bit confusing.

Come on, more updates, gkd

The cover inside the novel

I want to read Dog Food, and I've been following it 🤓

I thought it wouldn't be updated, but I didn't know that was the case. I update a few chapters a week. Don't worry. Author, you can write for a few years and I will still follow it.

Don't stop, don't stop, update and update