Zangetsu

I'm not telling you why your writing has gotten worse over time. I have liked your books before and now that I have recommended you to my friends, I am really disappointed with your current writing level.

I can't stand the part from Chapter 150 onwards. What a useless male protagonist. He can forcefully complete 50% of the mission. I'm laughing to death. Just make it up and lick it hard.

Online Game Trilogy: Piracy Myth, Dominate the World, Unparalleled, God in the Hearts of Online Game Readers.

The novels written by Lost Leaf can be roughly divided into two parts: the plot in the game and the plot in reality. I personally think that he is better at writing game plots, and his writing of real-life plots is relatively simple, because the online game trilogy he became famous in before probably also includes the Dragon Slayer. There are overwhelmingly more dramatic plots than real plots, so everyone thinks they are very interesting. Later, he planned to transform from the realm of refining gods to fighting gods. He wanted to combine games and reality to create a "real world like a game." However, his ability was limited and he failed. Personally, I think it may be because of him. Even if there are some elements of cultivation in the game plots in previous novels, if they are compared to a real fantasy world, there will be many logical loopholes in them. But after all, this is just a game. Settings that are unreasonable in reality are reasonable in the game, and the game cannot be the same. Reality is the same, so everyone can accept some shortcomings. However, the novels he wrote are like "writing the real world as a game." This gives me a sense of fragmentation. Even if you tell me in the setting that this is a real world, in my opinion, it feels like it is just a game, and the sense of immersion is very low. In his previous famous works, in addition to the protagonist, there are many, many players. The plot is not driven by the protagonist alone. They also have a lot of roles in the game, which is a bit like a group drama. The climax of the plot is mainly in the large-scale dungeons in the game, territorial competition, guild wars, and world competitions. In games, national wars, etc., It mainly describes the cooperation or competition between players, which gives people a sense of collaboration and strategizing. However, the novels written by the author after his transformation are very boring. It feels that except for the protagonist, they are all NPCs and there is no player. It is a one-man show of the protagonist. To sum up, the author wanted to write real fantasy novels, but because he had too little experience in writing real-world plots, he could only draw on his previous experience in writing game-world plots. As a result, the novel he wrote was nondescript. It was set in the real world, but it looked like a game. It made people unable to enter the drama and there was no way to substitute it. But if you treat it as a game Look, because the author's previous writing style was biased toward group dramas, when he concentrated the main plot on the protagonist alone, we would find that the plot was very boring, not exciting, and had no climax. To put it simply, it was boring to watch, and there was no desire to continue watching. It meant that it was not pleasing to both sides, and because of this, the popularity was not as good as before. Later, he returned to write two online game novels, but it can be clearly seen that he was weakening the proportion of the game world plot in the novel and strengthening the proportion of the real world plot. My personal guess is that the popularity of the two novels he transitioned to was too low, and it was no longer enough, so he could only come back to write online games. However, he was not willing to rest on his laurels, and still wanted to innovate, so he continued. I continue to hone my writing skills in the real world and want to develop in an all-round way, but it seems to be more difficult now. I read a few newly written novels, and I feel that they don't have the same flavor as before. I just read the first few hundred chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. Of course, I am not blaming the author. As a reader, I am still very happy to see that he can continue to make progress. I wish the author here to write better and better.

The master of game writing has fallen like this. The Yue Heng trilogy is so beautiful.

My favorite online game novels back then were Lost Leaves, Gravity of Mars, and Thieves in the World

Real or fake? Lost Ye himself? Why are there so few people?

Lost Leaf, Yue Heng Trilogy, Slaying the Dragon

What the hell, what are these settings? After being fucked by the heroine, you go to lick the heroine? I was cut off because my data was too strong and there was no compensation? Just admit it? There are too many flaws. Was it written by me?

The protagonist is a dog licker and wants to start a harem😷You must have some brains, you don't think that we male readers are just like this?

Good guy, Zangetsu can go to the starting point and see it.

Today I saw this novel written by Lost Leaf, so I clicked in and read it. It turned out that the protagonist looks like a mentally retarded child, and the plot is very low, and the writing is average. Has it sold out?

This author is not suitable for writing original game novels. It can be said that all game works are about the same novice village. There are also many game authors who are not even willing to give a name to the novice village and the village chief. The world background is too hollow and I don't have the writing power to write the setting. It is better to use Warcraft or DND as the background.

Online Game: The World, I watched it in junior high school. I had no resources at the time. I watched the third wave of Attack on the City of Kings, and then I watched it again during the holidays. I never knew where the follow-up was. Fast forward more than ten years, and I just saw the Lost Leaf boss. I was still very surprised.

The first person persuaded me to quit.

The book Lost Leaves appeared in my life when it least should have appeared. Well!

A novice among novices, all the characters have facial makeup. Except for the protagonist, no one is outstanding. In the history of selling equipment, they directly share half of the money. Where does the face come from? No contribution at all, no point in your heart? The real world is about eating and drinking. The various data and tasks in the game are not like online games at all. The sense of immersion is too bad. Compared with the previous novels, I wonder if there is a setting and a ghostwriter.

First of all, I have watched the online game trilogy, and I have been chasing Dragon Slayer since elementary school. Lost Ye Master was indeed at his peak back then. His previous characterizations and plot descriptions were more connected and in-depth, and the plot was indeed good (Stacked Armor, passed) But when I read this book, I felt that the plot and rhythm of Master have been a bit too fast. Compared with the game and reality, the connection has indeed become weaker (in the early stage of the story, I briefly mentioned why the characters in the game disappeared, and the background and characterization of the protagonist became one-sided) Also, the IQ and portrayal of the villains and protagonists have also declined. Although I don't say it (hot-blooded, brainless, reading novels without brains), it does have an impact on the plot and description (the plot flows too fast, the time changes are unclear, and the protagonist updates faster than Slaying the Dragon) n times, Li Xiaoyao seems to be 100+ chapter 30 level, and his attributes are indeed super models) Some people may say that if you are not a super model, how can you compete with other first-line t0 players (but compared to virtual e-sports, everyone may not have the brains, such as the real part...) Overall, it's really not as exciting as the previous one.

Is it outrageous to post a LOL tag?

This book feels like it was written by a gunman. It's very different from Uemoto Tianxing.

Why do I think it looks good, but you all say no? ? ? I think it's okay! Very nice!

There's something wrong with the setting of this heroine, she's grown into a top warrior and she keeps fussing. For a person with an unstable mind, let alone becoming a top warrior, even the title of warrior is too luxurious. Just go to bed directly, it has to be written as a high level of fun. There is also the issue of the camp. Not to mention that he is in Cao's camp and his heart is in Han. He is a pure 25 boy. Some ideas are wrong, for example, regarding vampires. Is there any difference between vampires eating humans and humans eating animals? The way of survival is just different. There is no need to bring justice and brightness. In real terms, humans are the most evil animals. The justice you imagine is completely incompatible with the human species. If you look at thousands of years of history, you say that history is not comprehensive. If you look at the real society, what is justice? It is the rules and constraints of the rulers.

Does this author love to be a dog licker so much? If people don't do it, they will be a dog licker.

I'm wondering if it's a gunman or an AI or if he sold his account, what kind of thing is he writing? What kind of thing is the master who wrote the trilogy in my heart writing now?

I originally thought there were ten good books, but after reading more than 300 chapters, I suddenly realized that the main character is a brainless licker, so humble that I gave up on it.

This is ghostwriting, right? The writing is obviously much worse than the previous books.

The Yue Heng trilogy and Dragon Slaying are both good to watch, but this one is really uncomfortable to see the licking dog at the end. The real world is too drawn, so I really don't have the mood to watch it. The trilogy is really awesome, but this one is still not good.

This was not written by Lost Leaf himself. It was written in such a low-level way that the villain was subdued. Generally speaking, Lost Leaf would not write about such villains, so someone might have written it on their behalf or in person.

After the trilogy, there are no interesting novels about online games.

The protagonist written by the author feels so good about herself. She is a top beauty known to everyone in the game. She has traded equipment with you once. After playing the game for a day, the protagonist wants to carry her downstairs, but her teammates won't let her.