Jedi in Infinity

I quickly read about 20 or 30 chapters. How can I put it, let me tell you something about the author that you may not like to hear. The writing is really bad. It doesn't read like a novel or like a student composition In terms of plot, I have read it so far so quickly that it has passed the original content. I won't talk about the content. In the first volume of the system, the main god and the protagonist's inner drama are all very smart. At the end of the second volume, Chu Xuan spreads the news everywhere, while Zhang Jie normally shares information and the protagonist's inner drama is complaining about Zhang Jie betraying him and planning to retaliate in the future. I:? ? ? In addition, when Chu Xuan expresses interest in the protagonist, he panics. If you panic, even if you don't see a basket of horror movies, you will panic. At this time, you are afraid of Mao Chuxuan, although this may be a common problem among many fans (tired) Also, the protagonist enters a place where he can die at any time, but he has no mentality at all. Fu, it looks like he knows that he is the protagonist and is here to enjoy the blessings in the Lord God's space (Chapter 1: The inner voice of the protagonist) The character dialogue is a bit too colloquial... And there is really no need to add a "say" before every speech and mental activity. I think, these two words appear too frequently. XX, it's best to use the word "a while" less often. Things like novels should be a little more written, otherwise they may look too awkward sometimes Before entering the horror film, the protagonist introduced what he had prepared and said a long list at once. I personally recommend adding it in the middle. Some other people's reactions Last point, I know that the author wanted to explain the original plot quickly and as interestingly as possible, but the form of narration and rants is really not suitable. Since you don't plan to write an invincible style, the Infinite Horror fandom is still suitable for a more serious writing style. The above are my current thoughts. To be honest, I can't stand it. Moreover, my suggestions may not be correct. I still hope that the author can make progress.

The author really generates electricity for love, strong

The first world is just A, B and other side plots. What else can you do? This is too much to earn points, and this does not include the bloodline rewards given by the system. Not interesting

After reading the first ten chapters or so, I earned too many reward points in the early stage A B-level linear plot, adding several thousand reward points, changing a building, and increasing the training speed In the end, it was not used at all. I thought that the protagonist was going to spend a lot of time to practice (in the end, he stayed in the main god space for ten days and went directly to the next horror movie) The protagonist was strengthened, bought things, and ran to the biochemistry for thirty hours after coming back. He has a total of more than 50,000 reward points? ? ? ? Skull pain

Because I am busy with my studies, I will stop updating for a while.

After reading Chapter 5, I just want to say that the author has lost the biggest battle with the original work. He basically copied the original plot and did not develop other possibilities. It still feels a bit logical but lacks reason. As the author's stand-in, the system simply cannot explore story possibilities, that is, side tasks. The task is released too late, so the protagonist can only stay in the computer room and wait for a long time. If the main branch line is displayed at the beginning, the protagonist may be able to operate it. It is logical to talk about the protagonist telling the mercenaries about the weakness of the infected body. Even if the protagonist saves them, when someone mentions a monster he has never seen before, the author does not question what the protagonist said. The author's approach is to skip it directly. Unfortunately, it is unclear.

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The writing is too long. After reading three or four chapters, I have no desire to continue reading. It has not written any new ideas. It belongs to the lowest level of fan fiction. I copy the original text and add a few lines of my own writing. Please, this is 2021. Is there anyone else writing this kind of fan fiction?

I want to ask what movie everyone wants to watch? If so, you can write it here.

Boss, I'll wait for you to update

The writing is really good, but there are too few updates.

I came here after seeing your review of the book next door, so I saved it first, but I guess I can only read it during the holidays (ಡωಡ)

This chapter is really poisonous to me, is it a bad guy? It's hard to understand what's so good about this person named Zhang in Infinite Horror. Is it that beauty in the two-dimensional world is not good? Or is it not satisfying enough for the Lord God to manipulate his face and create humans?

It's really rare to see Infinite fandoms. When Infinite fandoms were the most popular, at least one of the ten fanfics was Infinite. Although most of them were just ordinary YY novels, it was really amazing at that time. It would be infinite horror. It is probably the only novel that can make so many people follow the trend of fanfics. It's a pity that we can no longer see this kind of grand occasion. I haven't read the book yet, but as long as the writing is not bad, I will support it even if the author charges in the end.

Recruiting supporting players: Long-term supporting roles: 10 players from Demon Team, 5 players from Celestial Team (reduced at any time), 3 players from East America Team, and 3 players from Nanyanzhou Team Salary: Long-term active in team battles Other supporting roles: Zhongzhou There are several group performances including Team, God Team, Devil Team, Nanyanzhou Team, Northern Yanzhou Team, Southern Icezhou Team, North Icezhou Team, East America Team, West America Team, East China Sea Team, West Sea Team, Beihai Team, India Team, Morizhou Team, Shazhou Team, Daxizhou Team, and Beiyangzhou Team. Salary: Negotiable Note: The Central Continent team will no longer recruit important supporting roles, at least not in the first generation. In addition, if anyone wants to create a more powerful reincarnation in another team, please mark it. I will try my best to satisfy you. After all, their strength is also needed during team battles, otherwise the plot will not unfold normally. The template for the supporting role is as follows Name: Chen Zhen Gender: Male Age: 19 Height: 173cm Personality: gentle, cheerful Skills: Date of birth: X, month, XXXXX Hobbies: watching anime, watching movies, drinking tea, chatting quietly Dislike ：Spicy things Occupation: The direction of future development Intelligence: Psychic power: Immunity: Cell vitality: Nerve response rate of fire: Muscle tissue strength: (The average value of a healthy person is 100) Skills: Introduction:

Recommend a friend's book "The Heavens: Entering Taoism through Martial Arts at the Beginning"

Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 write about the five members of the Zhongzhou team. Zhang Jie, Zheng Zha, Zhan Lan, the protagonist, who else? There are only four here

After taking a look, it's not a Yuanzu unlimited setting, it can only be said to be an unlimited novel.

What the hell, why do all the characters in horror movies have wrong names?

I just found this book about Killing City. Didn't the author write it?

? ? ? Eunuch

The start is a bit too much. You have already earned 100,000 bonus points by brushing it at the start. You haven't seen the second game yet. If you don't reveal Zhang Jie's identity in the second game, there is no need to write it down. I see you are also a eunuch. Let's go.

It's not my cup of tea. I'll add another system to the main god space. Now I really can't play without a system...

I feel that the dissuasion factors in Chapter 1 are a bit too dense 😅

Keep at it 😡

Brother, have perseverance! 🙂