Extremely Violent Tyrant

Newbie, new book, if there are any shortcomings in the writing, I hope everyone can point it out 😊

There aren't many Yakuza-ryu works, so write well.

Newbie, new book, I hope everyone can support it! ! !

No matter who writes about big muscles, my 358 group will come to support them

I guess it's about eunuchs. Seeing as the author has written about eunuchs before, don't count on it. Dismissed

It's better not to have a bald head, you can leave a head, don't make your whole body hairless 🙂

When writing this kind of book, it is recommended that there be no heroine, so as not to make it boring.

Come and invest. Write well

The differentiation of realms doesn't feel very good. You have to understand the realms after reading every book Please update

After reading Chapter 21, my mother's heart burst into tears and slipped away.

This is a good beginning, better than the beginning of many books, and is currently edible.

It's been really fun watching the fight scenes recently 😏

Author, are you OK? 😅😅😅😅

As long as it is recommended by Ji Dao Ji Ba Liu, it does not matter whether the writing is good or bad.

Poison! There are too many superfluous and boring fake actions. Who can bear to look at your pile of scraps? Didn't the teacher teach you to refine your language when you were studying? Why are you describing it in such detail? When you describe a tree on the roadside, you describe its texture, growth habits, patterns, and even the number of ants on the tree and what formation they are in... Do you describe it all? Make up the word count? Delete it and rewrite it. Was it difficult to develop the plot? It's just an idea. Today's authors are too lazy to conceive of plots and write a plot that is bloated and unknowingly developing poisonous points.

Unexpectedly, I voted for the author's first monthly vote 😃

Update soon, I saw in the comments that you changed the outline. There are only three chapters in the second volume. Was he cut off at the waist?

Entering the palace🤫

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