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From the introduction, I feel like it is a book about the pastoral and leisurely life of a young Taoist priest. As a result, after reading the previous 30 chapters, almost every chapter was about money, money, various transactions, negotiations on contract signing platforms, medicinal material transactions on each expedition, and even going fishing highlighted how high the price of a fish was. I felt less like a Taoist priest and more like a businessman delivering goods on a live broadcast. On the contrary, a truly leisurely life, such as a panda knocking on the door and entering the house to eat bamboo, ducklings, puppies, and rhubarb, is often brushed aside, and it feels too utilitarian.

I hope this book can be updated faster, with frequent additions and occasional outbursts. I hope the new book will be innovative, come on!

To be honest, it comes from the setting. However, the quality of the work is actually very average. The writing style, writing method and the author's knowledge are not very good. If you can finish it, it is just a habit of starting and ending.

I feel like the latest chapter doesn't have the same feeling as the previous one, it feels like it's forced to show off.

It's because of this novel that I felt it was so good to read from QQQ to Qidian.

I feel that the place where the pig's feet are located is not our earth. The evidence is that the ecological environment of this earth is very well protected, and there are still "spirits" in the mountains and forests. Because it seems to be false, I don't dare to complain. Reading is fluent, there are very few typos, the pig's feet are clearly three-dimensional, and the mascot is cute and powerful at the same time. I will give it 8.5 Out of 10 points.

The writing is so good and it was so enjoyable to read. I accidentally finished reading it all. I'll give it a few days to read it. It's not enough.

After reading so many books on system flow, I think this version is quite good.

Why do so many people hate Bai Yi? There are a lot of women like her in reality, and they are not so much lickers. In the novel, she becomes picky 😅

After reading books for more than ten years, I have found some minor flaws. There is no foreshadowing or foreshadowing. I have read too many books. I can write down my systematic writing skills and use them in the next chapter. I basically don't need to guess what the plot will be like. The beginning is unclear. This is a novel that can be bolder. It seems too ordinary, but it is too embarrassing to read, which makes people feel that it is too poisonous to read. Moreover, there are Taoist texts, insect repellent incense, and other things. On these two points, I have to look for other books to read.

You all said that 39 to 41 are extremely poisonous. I looked at it and found that it's not bad. The urban channel from ten years ago may be able to become a god. It's just a very ordinary urban novice pretending to be cool. I'll check it out later and continue.

Yes, you should update it in a timely manner and make new books more popular, otherwise you won't be able to read them.

You should add one more sentence to the final introduction. We must believe in science~

After reading Chapter 360, I really can't kill myself. The author has too many common-sense mistakes, which always make people laugh. Starting from the protagonist buying a boat, the good guy buys a cruise ship. The author didn't say how big it is. Judging from the context, it is estimated to only displace a thousand tons. Is this called a cruise ship? Then call the steering wheel on the ship a steering wheel, and call the engine throttle lever an operating lever. This is still a trivial matter. Driving a small submarine 200 meters into the sea, getting out of the boat to fight monsters, and then just drive the submarine back to the ship? Did you suffer from decompression sickness? (The protagonist is out of the boat. If he doesn't get out of the boat, it can also explain that the submarine is under normal pressure and constant pressure.) If he directly dives 200 meters back to the surface, does he not need to decompress at such a fast speed? This book is not about cultivating immortality or fantasy. Even if it is, I should explain it in the previous article. Too much poison. Abandoned.

At present, the plot revolves around Qingfeng Temple and its surrounding environment. It's time to explore desert islands, cave wonders, underground worlds, and ocean worlds! After all, the Qinshan Mountains are very large and vast. There may be some places that cannot be detected by radar. You may find some paradise, a mirage-like place that will surprise everyone. As for animals, there are now small falcons, small dogs, small foxes, small yellow chickens, etc. Recently, three kittens have been added to the family. These pets tend to be common everyday small animals. I feel like there is nothing more that needs to be added. The interaction between them is very interesting now. I really enjoyed watching it. I hope the little yellow chicken will fly soon! Fly! Xiaofei, charge the duck! As for communication, is it possible that there are some hidden families, cave aborigines, indigenous people or a certain sect? After all, Qinshan is a spiritual mountain. Ning Fei's master is too mysterious. He must not be a simple person with so much money. Hope to see more foreshadowing. I personally prefer the development of the environment around the Qinshan Mountains. I may have a stronger sense of immersion. What should I do? Am I going off topic...?

The great rivers and mountains of the motherland have not been visited yet, and the foreign scenery must be put at the back. Ning Fei can take everyone to appreciate the domestic scenery together, and then go abroad. In fact, you can go to Shennongjia, Daxinganling, Tianshan, and Mount Everest. I don't know why others read this book. I read this book because I have to work every day and really can't spare the time and energy. And my wallet doesn't allow me to travel anywhere. I really, really yearn to travel to various places and experience different customs and customs. I saw it in this book, so I don't hope there will be spiritual energy recovery or the like in the future.

Patrolling the top of the snow-capped mountains in search of snowmen? Swimming with dolphins in the vast ocean? The mysterious Shennongjia visits the savages? Qinghai Lake, where the sea and sky are the same color, feel the peace of mind? Adults don't make choices, they just go! 😁

The author is average and the story is a good one, but the author makes the protagonist keep a low profile and do spectacular things all day long. He is deliberately calm and calm, so every moment that should be thrilling and every wonderful story is extremely dull. Just find a place that no one else can find and then go through some twists and turns. The story is over. The next story is here...

If you don't know how to write a heroine, don't write it. Why forcefully add a heroine? It's awkward.

The first half is interesting, but the further you go, the more nonsense it becomes. There is no need to read the second half.

Escape

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Well, maybe it was preconceived, and it was because of this novel that I started to like the leisurely rural live broadcast genre, so I really thought it was good to read at first. Really, I really thought it was good to watch at first, but then towards the end, I felt that the writing was getting worse and worse, but I may still think that this novel should be the first in my heart! (I only think so after reading other works) (Personal opinion only)

At present, the next stop should be the Kunlun Mountains, so I think I should consider meeting a legendary creature. In the later stage, I can really go into the plot of cultivating immortals, or Gaowu, just don't use too much force. If appropriate, you can arrange a natural disaster, earthquake, mudslide, etc., Adjust it, and then you can go to the Hundred Thousand Mountains, and go to the Bermuda Triangle, and specifically meet the author himself It depends on the situation. The main thing is to consider not repeating the plot. In fact, I don't know if the author is planning to arrange for the heroine to appear in the plot of "Meet the Master". At present, it is not recommended to have a heroine, because the heroine seems to be difficult to integrate into the current stage of the book. In the middle and later stages, it is best to arrange a trip to Mount Everest to meet the heroine. Anyone who appears in the previous article will do, or simply follow the entertainment writing routine in the later stage

Thoughts: I read this book on Baidu when it was still being serialized. It was really nice and refreshing, but after reading the comment section again, could it be the blessing of the memory filter?

Isn't it too much to have a good time? 😏

Xdm, what do you say about Water Monkey? I feel like it is the most poisonous point now. In the past, whether it was Phoenix, Baize or Kunlun gem, it was either related to the system or a secret thousands of years ago, and had little connection with reality. This also allows readers to establish the world view of the novel in which reality is reality and the system is a system. That is, although the products of the system are very unscientific, only the system is unscientific, and everything else can be explained scientifically. But there is no scientific explanation for things like water monkeys and this plot. . . It's a bit confusing to me. I don't understand the author's purpose of this plot arrangement. It is probably a kind of "wandering" by the author in the plot arrangement. It is a development direction that was finally abandoned because the readers did not want it to develop into fantasy, but it is a bit uncomfortable to stay here xdm.

It's written as a zoo at the end, so you don't need to read the 200 pictures later.

This author wants to say a lot, but he only knows a rough idea. When it came to acupuncture, I was confused. There is a lot of acupuncture handed down from China, and there are many techniques, which cannot be summarized in just three words. There is also Chinese martial arts. This is too general and makes people confused.