Menghaisi Xuanlu

The writing is easy and smooth, a rare piece of writing! Great results!

Brief review: The gentle and jade-like God of War, the witty little Lord of the Underworld, what kind of story is this? Hell is in your heart, heaven is in your heart, don't ask outside. Book title: "The Mysterious Record of Menghaisi" Author: Anhua Pavilion Master Keywords: fantasy romance, oriental fantasy Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: Introduction: Introduction is as the name says, but it is just a dream, that's all! Burning flowers burn to ashes, heaven and earth merge, and a dream turns into a boiling sea. The mountains and rivers are shattered, the heart of the sword is dead, and the whole world will suffer this calamity. It can be seen that the scenes in this book are grand, majestic mountains and rivers, joyful and tragic. I would like to give the author a big warning here. Make sure to have a comedy ending, otherwise fans will be sad. Opening: Chapter One: The Story of Destined Crossing has a novel plot and a strong sense of twist. It is a beautiful article that is pleasing to the eye at first glance and makes you want to continue reading. The beginning of the story is that the scattered treasures of the Caibo Xingjun Mansion were robbed crazily. The reason was that the Xuanzun of the Underworld had a 490,000th birthday. Then, the style of the painting changed. The only entrance to the underworld is the one you are destined to cross. The Naihe Bridge and the Wangchuan River have always been gloomy, bloody, and miserable. However, this book is orderly, and those who are destined to cross are those who are destined to cross. The handsome general of the underworld turned out to be a bull-headed and horse-faced general. It turned out to be the greatest injustice in millions of years. In the first three chapters, the male protagonist appears in a novel way. A bamboo umbrella appears in the field of vision, and then there is a modest gentleman with slender hands, moon-white brocade robes, and eyebrows like an ink painting. The general of the underworld guessed that this was the white fox master, who came to get married, but in the later chapters, it was the God of War who came to borrow the east wind. Character: Male Protagonist: Qichuan is the last war god created by War Buddha and the incarnation of Fuyu Sword. Thousands of years later, the appearance of the Northern War God recorded in the classics only contains the words "clear appearance and stunning beauty". The heroine: Sumiya, the young lord of the underworld, she is as beautiful as she is beautiful, but she is a idiot, but her fifth level status is okay. Plot: The plot of this book is twists and turns, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. Writing style: The writing style of this article is smooth and the rhetoric is gorgeous. Summary: Worth reading.

I am super grateful to everyone who has added comments, votes, and rewards to my collection. Gradually, I have posted 100,000 words (*σ´∀`)σ It happens to be the second anniversary of the death of Mr. Jin, which is a bit emotional. I registered an account a month ago and posted articles, but I didn't understand anything. I worked as a webmaster for nearly a month before signing the contract and changing the status... Fortunately, because of your support, I started to push it the next day after changing the status. One hundred thousand words a month, the most obvious feeling is that when I look back at my writing, I feel dissatisfied. I am a person who is a bit harsh on myself. I will carefully examine my subject matter, structure, techniques, characters, lines, and writing style. Not satisfied, I'm really not satisfied. Except for the purpose of the article, there is a lot of room for improvement in any other aspect. Even if you praise my writing style, I feel that it could be more flexible and expressive: the sharper the weapon, the more skillful and skillful the moves must be, otherwise it will only hurt others and yourself. But I also understand that everything cannot be accomplished overnight. All a newbie can do is persevere, do their best, and not be too ambitious. Hopefully you will see my progress. Thank you thank you everyone! ! ! (ʃƪ ˘ ³˘)

The author's writing skills are sophisticated and sophisticated. Anyone with the author's skills in fairy tales, martial arts, urban, etc. Can give it a try. It would be a waste of talent if the author only writes in female channels. You can definitely try different styles.

Because the text is interspersed with explanations of the background, for the convenience of reading, I have summarized the key points of the events in the first volume ~ If you can persist in reading the first volume, there will be no difficult information in the following (until the sixth volume, hehe)

I found a picture and changed the avatar for Yue'er girl🌙

The contract has been sent, and the status will change in the next two days. Investment is welcome 😌

Oh my god, it's so beautifully written, the language is concise, concise and vivid, the characters are rich, the plot is tight and tense, it's a superb work~

I reached 100,000 words on October 31st, and I finished publishing this chapter of 200,000 words today. In fact, my archive of manuscripts has reached 330,000 to 340,000 words, which means that I wrote more than 200,000 words in one and a half months. **** Newbies often wonder which is more important, speed or quality. With a little bit of hand speed, I understand. It's hard to say whether the quality of the final product is higher between racking my brains to write 2000 in a day or writing 10,000 in one go... **** I have more than 200 works by other newcomers in my collection. If they are not updated for more than 2 weeks, they are deleted from the bookshelf. Now there are only more than 180 copies left. If you angels and cuties hadn't voted for me and left comments, I would have started writing online articles by mistake, and it would probably have been deleted now... **** I am a low-key vote king, and I have left a chapter review from the beginning to the end. I hope I can finish it without any other requirements. I won't let you down. 😊 P. S. I applied for listing at the end of the month

These chapters are very well written by King Nanliang (although I don't like them very much), and the plot is particularly exciting, with each link interlocking and pushing towards the biggest plot one by one. Please update it quickly, it's not enough to catch up.

Finally found a face for Young Lord Xuanming...

It's poetic, the words are gorgeous, and the writing is really good.

Chapter 025 "Thirteen Ridges" and Chapter 071 "Fantasy River" — From a bird's eye view, the seasons in the Thirteen Ridges are actually different. Some of the peaks are lush and green, while others are covered in frost and forest. There are also towering snow-capped peaks, standing clearly towards the sun. The demon king spreads his wings in the wind, and his red feathers caress the snow-capped mountain tops. When the ice and snow meet the vermilion fire, they immediately melt and turn into sweet springs. The phoenix-tailed oriole raises its head and crows, and the wonderful sound echoes around the empty valley. In an instant, flowers bloom like brocade, and the birds fly up to the flower branches and join their necks. The breeze blows away the mist lingering in the mountains, and the floating scales in the water can be faintly seen from the sky. There are countless strange birds and animals in the canyon, swimming and flying. When they see the demon king soaring in the sky, they all bow down and worship. — (Excerpted from Chapter 025 "Thirteen Ridges". This long description of the scenery is definitely not a word count. It will play its role in the plot later, such as starting from Chapter 103 "Princess, Don't Make Me Trouble" 😏)

I haven't been here for a few days, so come today to experience the beauty of words!

Good! Collect! "Pupilless Sanchi" comes to visit!

Here we go again, the writing is really great! ❤️

Qingyun Qingyun, Qingyun straight up, Qingyun straight up!

Hehe, the pavilion master's writing style is so delicate! Watch me kill three times in a row 💋💋💋♥♥♥

The author's writing style is fluent, with thousands of words flowing out of Wangchuan. It makes people want to enter the next chapter unconsciously.

A great book. The writing style of the novel is excellent. It uses a lot of environmental description to depict the scene of the underworld, subverting people's impression of the underworld. It is amazing. The world view of the novel is also very complete, and the identity and background of each character is explained, so we will not be confused after reading it. Looking forward to a great follow-up, keep up the good work.

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Take a chance, vote for it, come on!

Nice looking, saved it, keep it up.

Does the author have any ideas for a new book? Reply to me then and I will read your book

The writing is smooth and beautiful and will surely become a masterpiece. The investment has been collected and the future is promising.

The writing is very good, the little details are very sweet, and the fighting scenes are also good, but the real male protagonist hasn't appeared yet?