What Is It Like to Become Superman - Superman Diary

At supersonic speeds, you just can't hear the sound from behind, but you can hear the sound from the front if you hit it.

Some people find it toxic when they see the moving part, but I think there's nothing wrong with it! The protagonist was just a little more capable than ordinary people before, but his mentality was still ordinary. In reality, unless he had low self-esteem, any man would give up the opportunity to live with a top-notch white and rich girl. As for not wanting to expose his abilities, the protagonist has just gained the ability. Isn't it very perverted? At most, it's just that the strength is stronger and the five senses are better. Believe it or not, the protagonist tells people directly that he has super powers and no one believes him? It's not like spitting fire or shooting lasers.

In fact, I have also thought about how to set the protagonist's abilities if I write a novel with Superman as the protagonist. Let me share with the author: First of all, Superman's most basic ability should be to absorb solar energy, but everyone knows that energy is conserved, so no matter how to absorb the energy of the sun, The amount cannot be more powerful than the energy of the sun itself (it is not as good as blowing out the sun, pulling the solar system, etc.), So if I set it up, the protagonist's cells are special and can absorb energy, but the energy is not solar energy, but uses sunlight as a catalyst to accelerate cell absorption. Another mysterious energy It will weaken. At the same time, the catalytic efficiency of light of different wavelengths is different. Some are strong and some are weak. In extreme cases, cells cannot absorb energy (but not release energy. In this case, the protagonist's weakness is because the stored energy is used for maintenance and consumption, rather than being released). All other abilities are derived from the ability of cells to absorb energy, such as super strength, super speed, super hearing, super vision, super brain, heat vision, freezing breathing, etc. However, based on the different degree of energy absorption and strengthening of cells, the order and level of ability awakening are also prescribed. For example, the most basic strength and speed are displayed first (getting stronger all the time), then the brain initially awakens (the power no longer affects daily life, and the speed of thinking speed accelerates), and hearing and vision begin to strengthen (mainly manifested by the increase in the upper and lower thresholds of hearing, visual acuity). The range of perception increases) → Second awakening of the brain (hearing and vision can be controlled without affecting daily life) → Hearing and vision continue to strengthen (mainly the hearing range is strengthened, the visual field of vision is strengthened, and light fabrics blur the perspective)... The cycle continues... And finally manifests as medium-free hearing and atomic vision (seeing where light can penetrate), the first time I want to support a skyscraper (or other things with extremely large mass and volume) or the first awakening of the biological force field when running at supersonic speed, the awakening of the ability to fly after the biological force field is awakened, and so on. I am really lazy, and I don't know if I will ever write a book in this life, so I will share my idea of ​​Superman for the author's reference 😃

The creativity can be said to be very good, but the writing style is too childish and crude. The writing style of Long Aotian's urban essays in 2006 and 2007 has a very poor sense of substitution. Why is the language of a person with a bachelor's degree from China University of Political Science and Law so rough? The more I look at it, the less I want to look at it, and it becomes difficult to continue.

After watching it for a while, I didn't understand. Mutations are just mutations. Why do you have to do this to yourself? Just understand and record your own abilities. I'm not a scientific researcher. Wouldn't it be better if you become stronger? I don't understand the logic of researching self-mutilation like this. What are the benefits?

Three small suggestions that I personally recommend First, grow your hair back. Don't be like the vampire next door who actually wants to be bald? Superman won't be bald, and you're not One Punch Man. Second, DC Superman symbolizes hope, represents the characters of the Justice League, and saves mankind in various daily appearances. Even if someone targets him, he will not take it seriously. So my hope is, will I be able to save mankind from fire and water like Superman in the future? Third, you can consider becoming a superhero, because he will have superhuman abilities in the future, and he will not return home rich and powerful, just like walking at night in brocade clothes! You can also go to the black-robed pickets to beat up the people of the motherland. .

The first dozen or so pictures are okay. At most, the protagonist is a bit mentally disturbed and hiding his mental illness! Do you think a normal person would cut off a piece of his own flesh? How painful would that be? I was bitten by a dog. The length of my calf was about three to four centimeters, the width was about two centimeters, and the depth was probably 0.5 Centimeters to one centimeter. It was this size, but in the hospital, I needed more than ten stitches just to suture it. It took me 34 months to stand up, and the sutures were removed for more than half a year. 14 Years later, the scar is still on my body, and it still is like this until now! Do you think a normal person would do this? There are about 20 pictures. When I moved there, it became a dog-licking article. The TV reminded me of the school belle's personal master, Supreme Soldier King, and the return of the special forces around 2016, which gave me a retro feeling

Let's talk about my views on the main plot. In terms of character creation, this book imitates the beginning of the vampires, but in fact Superman and vampires are completely different characters. Vampires can't see the light, and their abilities are limited, so of course they have to be stubborn. But Superman is a god on earth, and his technology is really far from the Man of Steel that everyone has in mind. In fact, the coolness that everyone expects from Superman does not overlap. I think this is the reason why everyone complains. It doesn't matter whether you lick the dog or not. The pain point behind it is: the protagonist is too soft and is too far from the Superman everyone expects. And the main line is very vague. Sometimes I am engaged in technology, sometimes I am running a company, sometimes I am working on a case, sometimes I am doing self-research, sometimes I want to kill someone on a whim, sometimes I am playing a game, and sometimes I am a dog licker. There is no problem with these plots, but the rhythm of the plot is very messy and inconsistent. It's not a timeline development as you said, but a multi-line narrative, which requires strong plot control and writing skills, and the multi-line narrative must be concluded at the end, especially the multi-line narrative centered on the protagonist, which must be prioritized, but this article does not. It would be much better if you grasp one main line and unfold it slowly, explain the background of other things clearly, and then make the logic self-consistent. At the same time, it should be helpful to the growth of the protagonist (this is very important). In one sentence, there must be a transition in transition. Telling the story completely will make it more attractive. The setting is meaningless. I think the author's reference study book should not be Blood Clan. Instead, he should study the outlines of masters such as Big Stick and Lala, and learn plot rhythm and character creation. I think if the rhythm of this book is better, it will definitely be a high-quality book. If this is the author's first book, I think it is possible to become a great master. Come on!

Policewoman living together in a flat? Does the female policewoman look down on her at the beginning? Live in a nanny's room at the beginning? Mutated and still living together? Good guy, it seems like I have returned to the days when the school belle was the personal expert.

The more I look at him, the less he looks like Superman. . Like Zerg😰

What rubbish. What a waste of my money. Unsubscribed. The protagonist who is a dog-licker only knows how to behave in a nest.

I have a question, can the protagonist jump 10 meters high after breaking the speed of sound? It feels too low, right?

After spending a dollar and saying a few words, the moving part made me sick, so I left.

As a superman, you can study yourself and benefit the people but it is unwise to throw yourself into the whirlpool of worldly money and power! If you are tainted with money and power, you will be bound by money and power and cannot transcend. How can you still be considered a superman?

The author is so awesome that the protagonist's body has mutated and yet he dares to write a diary and record every point of mutation in detail. You might think that the protagonist doesn't die quickly enough!

The writing of the last few chapters has been really messy. I said before that the protagonist is a little cautious. However, he was bombarded by people at Base 17, which shows that the people inside can obviously detect the protagonist. There are obviously many unknown things to the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist doesn't say anything cautious at this time, and just wants to rush in when his brain gets hot? ? ? The normal thing is to retreat and then use other methods to test the defense strength of Base 17. There are so many ways for the protagonist to do it, just smash the whole meteorite first to see. If you force it when you know there is a problem, it will only make people think that you are a fool.

The advantage of reading this book is that you can read it at any small plot point, without worrying about the previous plot. The disadvantage is also the same. I have collected it for a long time, and today I found that it was suddenly limited. Then I came to read it. I haven't seen it on the shelf yet. I feel that the behavior and thinking of the protagonist are a bit strange. I forgot all about the previous plot and didn't bother to read it. I saw an old classmate from Heilongjiang getting off the plane in Shanghai. I was using my super powers at will while feeling scared to death. The last hot search on Weibo asked my old classmate to delete the video, and I refused to give in to a very few Weibo accounts who were desperate for exposure and traffic. Then I saw this and flipped through the catalog, and saw Running Man. I★★you★★. After watching Running Man, I will come back to complain.

The writing is very good, and you can't tell it's a new author at all, but you must have never carefully outlined the main plot line, otherwise it wouldn't be written like this. Also, your protagonist is a dog licker (don't excuse it. If he is a dog licker in real life, he is also a dog licker in the book. Don't use animal instincts to defend it. Why don't you say that a lion's courtship is actually a one-way strong opinion? Why don't you say that a tiger's courtship requires knocking the female tiger down first? Dog lickers don't know it.) The beginning is really well written, and since the policewoman came out, it has started to boast. . . You can look at the number of book reviews yourself. Is it true that the number of book reviews has been decreasing since the release of Police Girl, until there are no more book reviews? You can carefully study how other people's heroines are written, and the protagonist's attitude towards the heroine in other books (for example, you have a chapter that goes something like this: "I am mutated, and I am really embarrassed to hurt others and fall in love with her." This shows the protagonist's sense of cowardice, as if he is innately free. You are not as good as others. This is in conflict with the fact that the protagonist is essentially an evolved person with super powers, which makes readers feel unhappy and aggrieved: "So powerful, yet so humble?") If you write cool articles, and you write like this, except for a very small number of S and B who are looking for literary and artistic ideas on the Internet, no one else will like it. If you write it as a book to be published or change the IP, I suggest you delete the book directly, because this is not eight years ago. The result of writing this way is that you will not make any money, and you will be scolded by others, which is just self-pleasure.

I hope the protagonist's three views will always be so upright! Many novels nowadays are really too violent! In many books, after the protagonists gain power, if they are a little unsatisfied or offend the protagonist a little, they will either be killed or be punished miserably! It's as if the world can only revolve around him. In their eyes, the world is black and white! In my opinion, the Western heroism and those superheroes are superheroes at best, but just a group of thugs at worst! Just wearing the cloak of promoting justice! The law is not about maintaining fairness and justice, the law is about maintaining order! It's a bottom line! Fairness and justice are just one of them! To be honest, in a society with relatively sound laws, there is no place for superheroes at all! You have the power to supervise and expose, but you cannot abuse lynching! Because you are not qualified! As bystanders, we may feel very happy and satisfied when we see the protagonist killing everyone in the book! But if you experienced it yourself, you wouldn't think so! You must hate those so-called superheroes! Therefore, I think that in the future, if the protagonist stands at the front desk, he will have a formal establishment and identity! The best thing is to let him have the power of law enforcement, supervision, investigation, and emergency stop (the suspect escaped and the protagonist broke his leg), but not the power of execution! I know what I said. There must be many book friends who feel that writing this way is too nonsense and not enjoyable at all! Everyone is welcome to discuss~ It's just my humble opinion, I hope you don't blame me~

It was okay at the beginning, but I don't understand why I moved to a villa and lived with others. I was so cautious in the early stage to hide my abilities.

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After reading some parts, I feel that the main plot is too confusing and has nothing to do with Superman. It is all about technology, but the key points are not fully understood by myself, such as the limit of speed, the limit of strength, etc. Most of the time, I rely on guesswork. I mainly want to tell future readers that there is no book about Superman pretending to be a god on earth, not at all. Go to American Comics next door, where there are many.

It's rare to find a well-written Superman novel😰

When I saw Plane 73, was it so smart to shut down? I was dumbfounded.

Hahaha, I have newly discovered daily Superman novels, and I am worried that I don't have any Superman novels to read. I hope there is only one superman in this book who is deeply involved in daily life and pretends to be awesome in daily life. That would be so cool. I suggest the author watch a TV series "Everyday Life" instead of having a lot of superpowers appear, which is too cliché. I've added a book list, I hope it doesn't become cliché, that would be too boring.

I really don't care, I'll read it in two days, and I'll keep it up later! I hope you'll remember it then

I gave up after seeing

The description of this country is really trash.

What happened to the latest finale?

146Give up It's getting boring