Portable Space Starts from Covering the Sky

1. Style issue: partial to farming. Zhetian is a masterpiece written by Chen Dong, with a style of passionate male protagonist. As a Zheten fan, I also like this kind of passionate flow very much But the author's Taneda-style painting style of this book is incompatible with the hot-blooded flow painting style of the original Zheten. Most readers are passionate Zhetian fans. The style of this book is different from Zhetian style, which has led to a lot of controversy in the comment area. In the world of Zhetian, the most exciting part of the entire game is the Imperial Battle and Thunder Tribulation. These are the two major features of the Zhetian style. Without the Imperial Battle, it is easy to persuade a lot of Zhetian fans. Many Zhetianfen readers don't care whether the protagonist takes the path of the earthly immortal, but care whether the protagonist participates in the struggle for the imperial path. The author made a big mistake by turning thunder tribulation into thunder tribulation liquid. As a result, every time the protagonist goes through a tribulation, there is no thunder tribulation, only thunder tribulation liquid, which completely ruins one of the two major features of Zhe Tian. The biggest problem for the author is to write the fan fiction as the original work. Normal Zhe Tian fan fiction is to fine-tune the style of Zhe Tian and write out the differences. The author writes in an independent farming style, which is incompatible with the painting style of Zhetianrexueliu. The best way to deal with it is to remain silent and follow the path of immortality. The avatar puts on a vest, such as Yaoyao, Luo Tianxian, etc. And goes out to do various things, participate in the imperial battle, and play in the style of covering the sky. In this way, we can not only write about the unique Earth Immortal style, but also take into account Chen Dong's Zhetian style, attracting old Zhetian fans, and not dissuading a lot of passionate Zhetian readers. 2. Character problem: tend to be weak. The real passionate protagonist (girl): majestic, neither delicate nor soft. Cold and taciturn or with a sharp tongue + a bit dirty. A domineering personality. The protagonist of this book (girl): gentle personality, quiet, well-behaved and lovable, with a weak personality. This kind of character's weak personality is suitable for being the protagonist of a farming novel. It's a pity that this book is a Zhetian fanfic. "Shading the Sky" is the pinnacle work of Hot Blood Flow! This kind of personality is not suitable for the protagonist of a hot-blooded series. Instead, it is suitable for a female supporting character such as a tool or a canary in a hot-blooded series. Generally speaking, the overall farming style of the article is incompatible with the original painting style of "Zhatian Hot Blood Flow". The character's personality is weak, which has led to many people being labeled as a "female channel". Readers have sharp eyes, not only because the protagonist is a girl, but also from the overall style to the character of the protagonist, they all tend to be farming and weak! The writing style of plot processing and detailed description is very good, which has conquered many readers, and many readers have donated monthly tickets.

Poison! It's so cruel! How beautiful it is in front, how poisonous it is in the back! On the basic road, there are all kinds of dramas in Taishan. I'm speechless. Nowadays, fan fiction is basically unreadable, and most of them have two problems The first "meme", the reason: drama Many people use memes for the sake of memes, and they are tired of watching them. Most of them directly use the memes from the original text, without any self-propelled plot advancement. This results in a person who has not read the original text and cannot understand it! Inexplicably strange. If you understand it, you will automatically apply the plot of the original drama, but without the plot of this article, it will be even more dramatic! ! ! In general, it lacks the logic to advance the plot of this article. Second, plot line! I won't say much more about this, let's focus on the protagonist of this article. The protagonist of the original drama for a while. There are two plot lines, anyone who wants to watch them immersed will be mentally ill (schizophrenia). Basically, the protagonists of fan fiction will show hostility to the protagonists of the original drama - / licking dogs / virgins / and other plots mentioned above. It's like Gouxue stepped on the horse to open the door for Gouxue, Gouxue has come home.

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I don't know why now, whenever I meet someone who has a peaceful mind and a kind heart, who wants to make his world a better place, or wants to help save the weak, he likes to call other people a holy mother. Are they so violent? Does the protagonist lose her own interests by helping to improve the world? Or does everyone in the world want her dead, but she still wants to save the world? As far as this book is concerned, it wouldn't hurt her to help the world, right? Does she have any conflict with Mark? No? I am a fellow countryman and a classmate from the same place. Could you please help me? Although there are indeed many plots about helping Ye Fan, at least Ye Fan is the protagonist who covers the sky. If it didn't appear at all, then what kind of fanfic would you be watching? At least the protagonist is not the kind of person who has to lick his face and follow the plot, obviously without any reason, but still shut up and rush to save Ye Fan when he thinks or thinks that a certain plot is in danger, right? I don't know why the hostility is so high now. Is it necessary to have no contact with the original protagonist of the novel forever or even to fight to the death to avoid being a nanny? Do you have to kill your whole family whenever you meet someone who says a few words of objection? The novel must be read from beginning to end, whenever there are disagreements. Is this not the Holy Mother?

Does she look like the heroine

First of all, I am very grateful to the book friends who have always supported the author and the book friends who later decided that this book is worth reading. Thank you! Don't worry, it's not a declaration of discontinuation. Although there are not many fans of this book, there are still some book friends who recognize this book and are following it. The author is slow to code and wants to do his best to write better, so the update has been slow. Recently, in order to strive for double updates, I haven't read book reviews. Every time I want to read it, I tell myself, don't read it, just write down a few more words when you have time. After reading it, you may not be in the mood to write. (ㅇㅅㅇ❀) I couldn't help but take a quick look today, and I found it was unexpectedly uneven. When there were fewer people reading, although there would be some comments saying they didn't like reading the heroine's article, there were more book friends who were able to accept the author's style of writing, and the book review area was quite harmonious. It was a bit shocking to see it today. There are so many Qidian novels. It is a kind of fate that my books are discovered by everyone. Of course, it may be a bad fate for some people. I was mentally prepared for this at the beginning. After all, even RMB has some people who don't like it. I had such mental preparation from the beginning, so my mental endurance is not bad. I also said at the beginning, if you like it, read it, and if you don't like it, see you next time. There are so many books in the starting point, and there is always something you like. If it doesn't work, you can write one yourself like the author. I hope you can be merciful. After all, I want to give the best works to the book friends who still support the author. Since I have already taken up the coding time to communicate with you, let me say a little more by the way. When I was writing this book, the happiest thing was seeing someone in the book review section who agreed with the author's ideas. I wanted to spoil it right away, but I still held back and waited until it was written before reading it, otherwise no one would want to read it... ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔ I have read all the comments from book friends so far. In order to write as much as possible in the future, I probably won't be able to reply to every comment like before. Recently, there have been dozens of book friends who have given rewards and cast monthly votes, as well as more friends who have voted for recommendations, and book friends who have encouraged and supported the author in the book review area. Thank you very much for your support and encouragement! I spent a lot of time writing book reviews today, and I hope I can do two more tonight! Thank you again for your support and encouragement!

The protagonist's way of earthly immortality is now covered with the method of covering the sky. When the protagonist truly creates the way of the Earthly Immortal, he should start with a small bubble space to communicate with the heaven and earth, develop a secret realm, and finally turn into a portable space, with the universe and the sea of ​​realms hidden in his body, which corresponds to the title of the book. A creative method like this that is beneficial to the world may cause much less disaster.

He was so open-minded that he actually wanted to be a supporter, but he still knew his true intentions. I laughed. I have never seen such a stupid person. He wants to be the emperor without any physical constitution. Looking at all the great emperors in Zhetian, which one is not ranked among the top in constitution? Even ruthless people have to shed their mortal bodies to become emperors. Who do you think you are?

With this thought, do you still want to become emperor within two hundred years? First of all, let's not say that you don't have any physique. You want to be a support because you are so stubborn. After becoming the emperor, won't you just replenish the blood of the restricted area supreme? Author, haven't you ever thought about why so many great emperors fell because of the Forbidden Zone Supreme?

Go find the Qing Emperor to resurrect the Qing Emperor, build something like a super god space, and win over most powerful people. As for the dark turmoil, he told them the exit of the world without beginning. These great emperors and ancient emperors can also be a part of the force against darkness in the future, and the emperor can also win over them. Telling them the path of the Nine Immortals. The super god space cultivates the weak. You can find opponents to train here, customize a currency, trade scriptures and secret techniques here, use tasks to transform the planets in the universe into livable planets, cultivate a world tree and put it on a continent, let those planets rotate around the continent, see if you can create the star formation in the prehistoric world, deduce the internal force, Yin Shen Yang Shen martial arts and so on, and distribute the seeds. Let's see what results will be achieved in the future. We can create the illusory world and see what characters can transcend it. Those who can come out are geniuses. When the Zhetian World becomes stronger, worlds such as the Immortal Realm will be merged. When the Super God Space becomes strong enough, you can teleport your subordinates across worlds to some small worlds and small universes. When that world is conquered, it will be merged into the Zhetian Universe.

1-Two powerful immortals want to become immortals 2-Mighty monks destroy the emperor's tomb 3-Passengers who know everything 4-The four-pole divine body seizes the emperor's soldiers 5-The strongest humane lives ten thousand years If there are any other wonders, welcome to add!

Farming in Zhetian? The Forbidden Zone Supreme: This is a high-quality leek. We must let her live longer.

There are no auxiliary characters in the world of Zhetian. In the later stage, when facing strange things, you will be outnumbered and your combat power is not good. If someone of the same level drags you down and supports you, you can't do anything. If you can survive, you will be better off if you don't hurt others.

I'm sorry, I was wrong. I ran out of books to read. I came back to read it, but I still can't stand it. I couldn't stand it after reading chapter 60. I said that I didn't want to be a nanny, but I ended up being a nanny. Not only a nanny, but also a holy mother.

Covering the sky and farming? Didn't the great emperor fight all the way up, so you just put aside farming?

In fact, I can read it, the author writes well. The only thing that irritates me is that although the original owner was taken away, the original owner's family was ruined by his stepmother. It's okay not to take revenge. A breakup is enough. Why do you need to take care of me later? Just because I have a biological brother! Too bloody!

Why do I feel that the protagonist is putting the cart before the horse? Shouldn't she work hard to practice and understand the skills? She obviously has a lot of resources and is still here to help. Those who are involved have no main line. The so-called farming can't be seen, and the forces created in the early stage of Zhetian are of little use. There are things to do and things not to do, and the protagonist is cultivating the earthly immortal path. To put it bluntly, he is still cultivating immortality. However, the protagonist is too deliberate in gathering power and talents. It feels like he is begging for it, and it does not feel very consistent with the protagonist's path. The most important thing is that the characters in it are not well-drawn. I have not read the original work, and it is difficult to remember them. Their characters in the original work should not be emphasized too much. I think it should be written from the side. To be honest, I still like the first part of the author's writing.

It is indeed a high-quality leek. If the road to immortality is opened for the first time, the protagonist proves the truth, and the supreme beings who failed to break through the barrier come out. The Supremes: "The current emperor's blood is so strong, why don't we try to swallow her... Just try... This emperor is so weak, but his blood is so strong. It's enough for the six of us, so we go back and sleep." Then the protagonist died, and the universe carnivaled.

I hope Liu Yiyi will go to Beidou and make friends with the female monks from various holy places, and then we can practice together and go into the small world to hunt for treasures. After becoming the Empress, she created the Palace of Creation and pulled her female friends into the Palace of Creation. Then she became the Empress of Creation instead of following Ye Fan and then being treated as a nanny.

Why don't female protagonists post female videos?

The last chapter feels weird, because there is no such operation as hiding one's cultivation level in the world of Zhetian! Also, as long as the protagonist shows his cultivation, this conflict is completely unnecessary, right? Feeling particularly stiff and awkward

Logically speaking, Tiandao is the boss and the protagonist is the wage earner. Now, even if the protagonist practices the Earth Immortal Path, he has not specifically created the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. It is equivalent to the protagonist joining the job but not participating in the work. Tiandao will not pay the protagonist's salary "Thunder Tribulation Liquid" in advance. The protagonist must work first (go to major places to create areas), and only after reaching a certain amount, the boss will pay wages (Thunder Tribulation Liquid).

What the hell, Daddy, I've been waiting and there's no news, Daddy, don't, please update.

Has the author been sold to Myanmar? ! ! ! ! Write or not! ! ! ! !

Very Holy Mother's heart is not suitable for covering the sky

This is the best Zhetian fanfic I have ever seen, with three correct views! All positive energy