Madam Boss, She Has Refreshed Her Vest Again

After reading the novel, my first impression was that the author is probably a new writer, and he should not be too old. First of all, this novel is full of flaws in general. The writing style is immature and the logic is not very clear. However, there are still a few ideas that can be figured out. I hope the author can improve his experience and write more quality words. The second thing is about the creation of the character. According to the setting, the heroine should be almighty and very smart. However, the heroine in the article sometimes has an IQ that is off the charts, and sometimes makes people feel that she is a fool, or even a bit stupid. There is also the male protagonist. Since the male protagonist is also set to be a boss, it should not be written to make people feel that the male protagonist is a fool with low quotient. And the supporting characters seem to be useless except for being a hindrance. On the contrary, the changes made by the villain are eye-catching. Personally, I suggest that the character creation needs to be more specific. Don't make people feel that the protagonists in the same article are not the same person. The characteristics of the character setting must be fully reflected to make the plot of the novel more vivid. The last thing is logic. The expression of logic is a bit disordered, and some details are not handled well, which makes people feel that it is very jumpy. It is not straightforward where it should be, and it is too fast where it should be delayed, making it impossible for people to immerse themselves in the book. Sometimes it seems that the matter has not been dealt with and the ending has not been explained clearly. The next thing is almost finished, and it feels very strange to jump to the scene in an instant. I don't comment much on the improvement of my writing skills. I read more books to gain experience and write more to collect inspiration. My writing skills will always improve slowly. Some small suggestions, I hope the author can improve himself more and become a famous writer soon.