Ordinary People of Dragon Clan

How to say it. . To put it simply, among the dozen or so Dragon Clan fanfics I have read, this one ranks last. . 😅Not targeting anyone, just my personal feelings

This book feels immature to me, as if it is following the route of the original book, and it gives me the feeling that the name, power, etc. Have been changed. The power system is a little too dependent on "Lao Lu" and it feels very sloppy. The writing progress is also too fast, and the foreshadowing is a bit stiff. Of course, it is good for the author to have his own ideas. It is not without reason that Jiangnan relies on the dragon clan and the carp leaps over the dragon gate. If you read it carefully, you can find many inadvertent "little surprises", which are some language and emotional foreshadowing, bursting out at the right time under your control. Of course, this does not mean that the author's writing is not good. As I said at the beginning, it is immature and has room for improvement. I have also written novels myself and understand the difficulties involved. Sometimes the writing can be stuck for a whole day. Therefore, I hope that the author's writing style will become better and more mature, making people feel comfortable and natural.

After watching a few of them, it really didn't work. It didn't have the Jiangnan flavor at all. The main character was talking to himself and it was so unbearable. Who could stand it if he went to slay the Dragon King in the second year of high school? I really need to see the Dragon Clan fandom for recommendations. Since I don't have money to go to college, I can only go to slay the dragon.

Yes, come on update gkd

How should I put it? I feel like a newbie, and everything I write is taken for granted.

It's too easy to follow fate. This Yan Ling can change whenever he wants, and he will kill the Dragon King when he comes up. . . .

There are too many things on my mind, talking to myself!

This book won't last more than a month and a half

I saw it in the daily guide, and it actually faked corpses from time to time.

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The first few pictures are too idealistic.

I suddenly had an idea. If you say a mixed race joins the army and becomes a pilot with the physical fitness and learning ability of a mixed race, wouldn't everyone be an ace in air combat? . . .

What will happen if you say there is a root-grabbing treasure in the dragon world?

Have you ever updated this?

Please update

The author has updated the right and wrong, I am afraid it will take some time to recover from the injury.