The Return of the Pinnacle of the Alliance

If you think you have a high poison resistance, you can read it. The first forty chapters are mindless, the characters are bullshit, and the settings are rubbish. The plot development is better, but it's still hard to stand. If you don't want to read it, just skip it. Poison Level: Ammonia

All novels about sadistic protagonists should be put on the street!

The sense of immersion is very strong, I am already on the way to the SKT base with my knife in hand

It's true that I didn't write it well before. I accept the criticism. If you want to criticize the author, please do so in this post. If you don't want to read what happened before you changed teams, you can sweep away the first forty chapters, or you can just skip to chapter fifty and start having fun, beating up your former teammates! Hope to be given a chance. . . Another note: I came up with the idea for this book after watching Faker's last few games, so when I was imagining it, I incorporated Brother Li's elegant and good-natured character into it. This also caused a large number of readers to feel uncomfortable reading it, and I deserved to be criticized. It was indeed not written well. But I would like to argue two points. First, the reason why I wrote three games before changing teams is that they correspond to the last game of the summer regular season with Faker (starting with the rookie mid laner, and after winning, let Faker come on to play Galio in the second game, and the teammates acted like each other), and the second and third games of the first game of the playoffs. After Li Ge took Card C in the second game for one game, in the third game, he immediately asked Naseti to resist the pressure in the middle. Second, for example, waiting for teammates to be interviewed outside the door. This is to pay tribute to the fat general. As the biggest contributor to EDG, he finally understood everything. In fact, many places in the article are true in reality, but there are too many cloud viewers, so it feels very outrageous. Third, I just made it clear about teammates acting. It's a little peanut of the S10 godfather. Isn't the Oscar operation more outrageous than what I wrote in the book? The second level flashes to the top lane, giving away kills and double BUFFs. If the team fight is still alive, stop with S and let the opponent kill! Etc! Simply outrageous! Finally, if you scold the author, please don't bring your family with you. I will delete it if you bring your family with you. Don't open another post to scold me. If you want to scold me, just do it here.

The current faker template? The coach is Coach Jin from T1, jungler Cuzz, shooter Teddy, substitute mid laner Clozer, top laner Canna and auxiliary effort have been changed.

No, there are always lol novels, and they are well written. You said you are always thinking about the messy female anchor's girlfriend doing jb stuff? ? When writing an e-sports article, what emotional line would you add?

Grt treats the protagonist like this, the protagonist doesn't run away and even helps them find ad

The book was not cool and I washed my hair while standing on my head. After reading Chapter 20, I died of poisonous hair.

I saw the charge for the last book and couldn't finish it after reading two chapters. When I finished the book and ordered the finale, I found that I didn't want to read it at all. I randomly selected a few chapters from the table of contents and read it. I hope you can work hard on this book I'm really not a black guy. I just think there are too many bugs in your writing. The opponents always die with flashes and there are many errors in some details. I feel that there are more bugs than the last book. Maybe I didn't see it before, but now my diamond vision has improved? To be honest, I really like your book writing style, but I think the plot design of the competition is a bit rudimentary. I'll continue to see if it doesn't work. Come on, I'll withdraw. I don't know if this is considered trolling for you. After all, everyone has different definitions of trolling. If you think it's me who apologizes to you first, I'll do it first for 1000 points. (Two days ago, the author scolded a LOL book for giving opinions, and now I don't dare to give opinions without sending points)

I skipped through more than a dozen chapters first, and then read the author's comment saying that cloud players don't believe that this happens in reality. But if you copy what you were doing in Korea and then move it to China, the Chinese people are not so mean and they won't target them like this if they have personal conflicts. They will be sprayed to death.

There are 5 chapters of the frustrating plot, but you are so awesome that you can still write 40 chapters

I was wrong, I admit it, and I won't change it. What can you do to me? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. It's like it's stuck in my throat and it's hard to swallow. Goodbye.

Reality doesn't need logic but novels do. You still have time to make changes now. Don't wait until you are recommended. Who will read you, an unknown little author, who abuses the protagonist for dozens of chapters?

The S1 championship is a bit embarrassing. Others, S1, is a competition in a foreign Internet cafe. Why should I go? S2 is internationalized and allows teams from other regions to compete, but it is immature.

Although some books abuse the protagonist, they are not disgusting to read, but the author of this book abuses the protagonist but has no control over the plot, which makes people feel disgusting.

Not many people criticized the way of writing that discouraged the trend. It seems that it has become cold. The first fifty chapters should either be deleted and given a background, or they should be rewritten. Otherwise, I will probably be annoyed after it is released (if it can still survive until it is released).

I'm just curious. Why do some authors insist on changing their real-life player IDs and team names without being blocked? Many people who are not veteran players are confused when they read the memes. Anyway, I can't stand such novels.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too draggy. First of all, the three-chapter rule often mentioned in online articles is a routine, but it is useful. You have written more than 30 chapters and readers have not found the fun part. Glory is also forced to retire, but there are some cool people who brush copies and sell records. Maybe you want to describe the protagonist's psychological journey in detail, but it's too slow. If you don't speed up the process, it may take 100 chapters for the protagonist to form a team and complete the run-in. That's not what reading a novel is about. You just need to describe in detail how to play the protagonist in the first game, and then you can just briefly describe it later. Then, retiring and forming a team is reduced to about 3 or 5 chapters. To put it bluntly, winning the clockwork does not make the readers feel better, but makes them more angry. In general, the pace is too slow and there are too many descriptions of supporting characters. You have to say it's reasonable, but it's unreasonable to let him retire. As an outsider, the boss has heard of the protagonist, so he doesn't understand the value of the protagonist? And why the boss bought this team, he must have understood it. Do you want to retire before your contract expires? And if you can afford to play LPL, the protagonist himself can pay liquidated damages. No other team can afford it. There is no way that all LPLs are short of big mid laners! Otherwise, the contract has a clause that prevents him from playing games with other teams within a certain period of time when he retires. T1 is to let Brother Li sit on the bench. Do you want to retire during the contract period? Doesn't exist. He will also be asked to play a few games from time to time to increase his presence. Now this book is about pursuing rationality, but if the rationality is enough, the protagonist will be dead. In pursuit of the return of the king, you describe too many details.

In the early stage, the protagonist was so hard on the Holy Mother that he vomited and couldn't hold on any longer.

I have read novels that are even more poisonous than this book. They were all poisonous. There were people who cared about players and went to play in city leagues, and there was also an awesome protagonist who was a king with a rank of about 4 gold and reached the top of the world. While reading this novel, I felt that I could continue reading it.

Look at the character next door, Li Zixiu. The author enjoys it as much as he likes it. When readers enjoy it, their grades will go up. Don't say it's unreasonable. Most people like to read it.

The first three chapters were damned. They tortured me before the plot unfolded. The coach and teammates were like the second batch.

It's a bit poisonous in the beginning. It depends on your personal experience. After all, there are different types of poison. It starts to change after the thirty-three chapters, but few can survive so many chapters. This book is probably cool.

In fact, the LPL here is different from South Korea. If the popularity of the players here reaches a certain level, the coach must also respect the players' choices.

There are too many private goods, and the details are not careful.

There are words with abbreviated pinyin letters in every chapter. It gives me a headache. When I read a novel, I have to go to Baidu to look up what the hell these words are.

The previous operation of this system is simply a huge poisonous point. The author should change it

Ask who the heroine is? Is it a single heroine? If so, I will pursue it.

Word is very big, please bear with it 😜

What the hell, it's so damn hard to persuade me to quit 😡