Food Starts from the Sand Table

After reading the first two chapters, I feel a bit confused. Let me talk about the overall time. According to the first chapter, it is more than a year. The deadline is the birth of the red panda Then I will tell you the reason why I feel confused 1. Tens of thousands of failures. Since it is described as tens of thousands, it should be at least 20,000 upwards. So that means at least thirty or fifty failures a day. Isn't your test time a bit too short (this actually makes sense if you insist on saying it) It's okay if your system speeds up quickly) 2. The article says that from the time you traveled through time, your eyesight began to decrease, and then you went through your own reaction time, and you went to see a doctor and found a method online. You made carrot water for three months and made your own sandbox (there is a bug here. When did you start making your own sandbox? When you tried carrot water, there was a description in the previous article that you haven't played enough with the newly created sandbox. Later, when carrot water didn't work, you said you want to realize your dream. So when did you make your own sandbox?) Then the first batch of nutrient solution was successfully made. The system was cooled down and bound after one year (so there was no system before your tens of thousands of failures. How many times did you fail?) The red panda was born (there is also a description here that the body recovered today after a year, which means another year has passed? Then your total time is not correct)

Author, please don't fill the article with commas. It's very tiring to read. There are also many grammatical errors. There are always commas in strange places. It's very tiring to read.