The Ultimate of All Realms Encounters the King of Demonic Time

The plot is too jumpy, like a running account.

In fact, the first part is okay, but the sudden transition operation is really hard to understand. There is no transition in the middle. I just finished writing the first world and then transitioned to the battle in the middle and late stages. Before I finished writing, it moved to the next world. I suggest the author round it out or open a new volume and rewrite it.

This is the cover picture of Feng Mo's novel

There are many places in the running account that are incomprehensible and without any foreshadowing. Author, do you want readers to figure it out on their own?

The lines for the main character's transformation are countless in words each time he transforms.

Finished? This is so fucking outrageous

It would be better if the author didn't have a female protagonist.

Why are there only 7 chapters?🤔

Finally there is another one written about King Shi 👍

Md, this kind of super beast weapon is playing the operation of 100,000 years ago. Just seeing this makes my head hurt. The protagonist has just traveled 16 years. Where did it come from 100,000 years ago? So according to what you say, isn't the fate of the protagonist already controlled? Then watch a ball