I Really Want to Play Ball

It's not easy to say something, so let me give you some suggestions. Mainly to talk about what I feel is wrong. You can delete it after reading it if you think it will affect the score of the book. First of all, there is the aspect of high school basketball. Many people are not interested in high school basketball, because writing about high school basketball requires a strong foundation and creates an atmosphere, which is very unfriendly to newcomers. If you look at sports novels, they rarely involve high school students who can achieve early results. For example, the novel "Blacksmith" involves high school, but it has several premises. One is that Kobe Bryant is a major factor in attracting attention. The second is that it is interesting to write. The third is that it is set in the United States because the standard in the United States is higher. You can have a hard time writing in the American high school league because the level is indeed relatively good, but it is difficult to grasp this level in a domestic background. And without familiar characters, it lacks appeal. Let's take Lin Hai Tingtao's new book as an example. It can be compared to high school football, but his writing skills are sufficient and the premise is imaginary. Compared with the previous books, the early results are relatively poor. The second is a description of competition and daily life. There are a total of 58 chapters in total, not counting the 15 chapters spent at the beginning describing daily life in Korea. It is true that you, the heroine, are very attractive to LSPs like me, but most of them came to watch basketball after seeing your title. Moreover, the common feature of some successful basketball novels is that life and basketball are interspersed, and they will not describe daily life in too large a space in the early stage. Some will use daily life to induce basketball plots. I think, just I think, for reference only, since you are in Korea, you can get involved in some things about the Korean basketball world and check the official Korean basketball and street ball information. Design your own plot about the Korean basketball world. You can pretend to be cool and slap in the face, and then let the female protagonist revolve around the male protagonist every day, because it is a competitive novel. Rather than the other way around. Let there be an intersection between daily life and competition. Besides, most people who watch basketball know about the United States, but who knows about Korea? Just compile it based on certain information. And pay attention to the length, it all depends on the NBA plot. If you have an idea, then you have delayed it for too long and have not yet introduced the basketball plot, which will affect the perception in the early stage. As for the description of relative strength and rationality, some book friends have also said it. I won't say much more. The most important thing is that the title of your book is Really Want to Play Basketball, not Korean Entertainment Basketball. Book Friends came in because of the title of the book. The character should be set up well. Good character design in terms of training, character speech, etc. The above suggestions are for reference only.

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I've probably finished reading the novels recommended by others, so let me share your opinion (it's just a family opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). First of all, the author's classification is competitive, but you have more than 100,000 words, and the protagonist's rating is over 70 NBA levels. As a result, you haven't even entered the NCAA. If you want to use Duncan's full LM to rob, you won't increase your reputation, but keep doing it. The focus is on the laughter and banter between a few girls. You have to keep writing like this, and don't classify it in the competition, so that the grumpy old man at the back will come up and start to complain. Let's talk about the supporting characters. It is not difficult to tell from the introduction of this book that the protagonist is going to enter the NBA, but you, a Michelin-star chef and a singer-level singer, what can you do that is not better than playing basketball? And the protagonist is too powerful! He's already at the NBA level before he graduates from high school, so he can't be at the James level in college? Besides, I don't know what to say if you have an NBA level and want to win in a high school league, but you still have to explode to win. Anyway, I hope the author writes better and better! By the way, I am Zhini Milk Sound Controller!

From the beginning, I thought I was watching romance and not sports. Goldfinger must have a beautiful woman. I was going to vomit.

When writing about basketball, try not to write about China. The level will be low and readers will not be interested. Even the top players in college basketball may not be able to play in the CBA.

Yes, I like basketball novels very much. The author should work hard to write more. It would be nice to have more Hollywood actress girlfriends. She is the god of basketball. I like to read it very much.

Come on, come on, I really like basketball novels

Beating the Korean team in the Asian Championships and World Championships is a repertoire of basketball literature. Nowadays, the heroine is a Korean, and it is a bit difficult to start.

Can't substitute, Korean style semi-permanent. The last book about Korean semi-permanent books couldn't be any more cool.

Come on, come on, your book cannot be without Chen Mo

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