Da Qin's System Deceived Me into Living in the World of Xianxia

Although I want to support the author, your writing is really... Not what I wanted. There is too much nonsense at the beginning. However, you just ask people to jump to the chapter. This is impossible. Jumping to the chapter means missing the plot. If you think you can skip this plot, why not get rid of the dross? Just reading the free chapter gives people a feeling of boredom and helplessness. It is obviously a very good subject but it is written like this. The author should not be so stupid and write too many useless jokes and verbal rubbish. This will make the whole article look empty and without connotation. Qin Shi The performance of the three Huangs is basically to lower their wits, and the attitude of the protagonist also gives people a deliberately frivolous character. In fact, if this type of character is written, it is like Ye Kai in "Border Town Prodigal Son", with flesh and blood, but if it is not written well, it will be like you. The characters are tasteless and the plot is completely uncontrollable. Moreover, a large number of book fans also have problems. When others point out the author's mistakes or mistakes, fans begin to criticize or accuse the person who made the mistake for making the mistake for no reason. Any accusation should be listened carefully as long as it is not unwarranted abuse. Also, a lot of text layout may need to be adjusted. It looks weird on my mobile phone, so don't keep using Enter! Just use punctuation marks appropriately. Finally, if the author is writing a book for the first time, then I will treat you as a practice. I will naturally read it after you have a certain writing power. However, if you have written many books and are still like this, it is still recommended to learn more about writing. Book review: A book suitable for beginners and old bookworms...

It's a bit like Tang Zhuan, who practices with the law. It's a little more relaxed, but the key points of the emotions are also in place. It's full of historical knowledge elements (like it). The title of the book really attracts people's attention at first, but later it gets in the way of becoming a god. It's impossible for historical books to be large-volume and full-scale. They can only be small and precise. The previous plot was not bad, but the world line has been laid out. The subsequent control of events, the description of the characters' inner thoughts (making each person an independent individual, similar to a mortal flow, rather than a simple plot character), the experience and growth of pig's feet, the logic and causality should be strengthened, and it must not become a brainless novel. I have seen too many books that have too much foreshadowing in the early stage and cannot control the collapse in the later stage, which is a kind of devastation for the author and the reader. I hope you can spend more time to perfect the outline and take us into the Great Qin in your heart.

At the beginning, I had no desire to continue reading.

In fact, I want to complain that this is rubbish. It has no writing style, no IQ, no plot, and nothing else. But it's true, it's very funny and makes people with mental illness happy.

I don't know what it's about. I feel dizzy and poisoned when I read it.

Automatic subscription is always on. If you want to write more slowly, please slow down. This is a good book. I don't want it to be a mindless white text if I write too fast. Well, I'll keep it for now.

I'm looking forward to whether the First Emperor will advance to become an adult king in the future.

The author is great, I think we can make the kind of spaceship in Dragon Nest later and use jade instead of power 😁

It's a good book, but it's too short. I read it in half a day.

Ah... Great Qin died like this? 🤔

. . . Watching the recommendation votes skyrocket. . .

To be honest, the protagonist is so innocent and adorable(//∇//)

I'm planning to stop watching it because I can't wait any longer. Keep it. There's nothing you can do about it even if you feed him to death. If you don't survive, then piracy will start. Emm four or five thousand a day. My heart is broken.

In the world of immortality, at least the first emperor of the Qin Dynasty was the ancestral dragon. Isn't this much more awesome than those great emperors?

I haven't read this book in my collection for a long time, and now that it's out of stock I dug it out again, and it turned out to be a eunuch? ? ? Let's take a look. If it's really a eunuch, I'll publish a fanfic and let him finish it 😒. My obsessive-compulsive disorder makes me unable to stand this kind of waste of good material...

After seeing the comments about Ying Zheng in the comments, I want to say something Qin Shihuang was a strong and wise emperor, a very diligent and promising emperor. He settled cases during the day and reviewed books at night, weighed stones and measured books, and reviewed 120 kilograms of memorials every day. During the Qin Shihuang period, there were no peasant uprisings, and there were no large numbers of hungry people who had no food to eat. He unified the six kingdoms and treated the people of the six kingdoms equally. He did not massacre the people in the city, nor did he punish the survivors of the six kingdoms. He treated the meritorious generals well and did not criticize the defeated generals harshly. The ministers spoke frankly and gave advice, and did not blame the doctors who laughed at him face to face. He always valued the meritorious ministers such as Meng Tian and Meng Yi. He was a tolerant emperor. During the period of Qin Shihuang, the policy of "suspending penalties, thinning taxes and collecting taxes" was implemented. The unearthed Qin bamboo slips in Liye recorded that the field taxes during Qin Shihuang's period were 7%, 8.5%, And 8.82%, Which did not exceed 9%. The average tax was 1 out of 12 taxes, which was not the two-thirds payment mentioned by Dong Zhongshu and the majority of taxes written by Ban Gu in the "Book of Han". The twelve taxes and one adopted by Qin Shihuang were even lower than the ten taxes and one recommended by Mencius, and the ten taxes and one on Zhangjiashan Han Bamboo Slips. "Historical Records. Biography of Li Si" records that one of the things to assist the First Emperor was: "Suspend punishments and reduce taxes, so as to win the hearts of the people." This is also supported by the unearthed Qin bamboo slips. The Qin slips unearthed from Shuihudi show that during the Qin Dynasty, corvee workers were paid, took care of food, and were distributed clothes according to regulations; a family could not recruit two people to serve at the same time, and even those serving criminal sentences had a 40-day holiday to go home and farm during the busy farming season; women were paid the same as men for jobs they were good at, etc., Which is different from the non-Qin theory of later generations. The construction of the Great Wall by Qin Shihuang's northern attack on the Xiongnu did not begin just after he unified the six kingdoms, but was carried out in the 32nd year of the First Emperor after he had recuperated. The Great Wall was built on the basis of the original Qin, Zhao, and Yan Great Walls by Meng Tian after he defeated the Xiongnu. It took about 5 years. Historical records record that except for officials who broke the law and were fined to build the Great Wall, there is no record of large-scale conscription of common people to build the Great Wall. After unification, in the 28th year of the First Emperor's reign, 30,000 households were moved to Langyatai, exempting them from taxes and corvee for 12 years; in December, the 31st year, the city was renamed "Jiaping" and given six stones of rice and two sheep per mile in Guizhou Province; in the 33rd year, levy and son-in-law were collected, and merchants went to Luliang area; in the 35th year, roads were built, 30,000 households were moved to Liyi, 50,000 households were moved to Yunyang, and the capital was Ten years of tax and corvee were exempted; in the thirty-fifth year, due to the large population in Xianyang, the site was selected for the construction of Afang Palace. Archaeological evidence shows that the Afang Palace had a rammed earth foundation during the reign of Qin II; in the thirty-sixth year, 30,000 households were moved to Beihe and Yuzhong areas, and each household was granted a first-level title; in the Qin Shihuang period, national construction and the exemption of people from corvee taxes and the policy of conferring titles complemented each other. Meng Jiangnu cried over the Great Wall is purely fabricated. The events of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period were changed to the Qin Dynasty. Lu Xun criticized Confucianism the most because it was really disgusting. They were the ones talking about killing with words. Most of the people who criticized Yingzheng were Confucian scholars. The burning of books was to unify thought and deceive Confucianism. It is even more untrue. Like in India now, where one banknote has more than a dozen languages, do they think each other is a family? Many people die in India every year because of ideological and cultural conflicts. In Europe, because of cultural conflicts, there are dozens of countries in far larger places. Cultural unification is too important. Because the sage Confucius admired the enfeoffment system of the Emperor of Zhou, but he implemented the system of prefectures and counties, he was criticized by Confucian scholars and has been misunderstood until now. It is doubtful whether Ying Zheng traveled through the past. His ideas were too advanced. Many laws promulgated are available in modern times. For civil servants of the Qin Dynasty, the private use of official cars and civilians have been misunderstood. There are detailed regulations on loan sharking, extramarital affairs between men and women, etc. He has made so many achievements that one emperor can never be too good for the ages. Regarding this, I can only say that Liu Bang is so disgusting and Confucianism is so mean. The author does not need to give any face to the Confucianists. He beat them to death with all his strength. And that Liu Bang, castrated him! ! !

The elites of Great Qin! ! !

Hello, dear author, this is the Space-Time Management Bureau's Time and Space Branch. We suspect that the protagonist in your novel is involved in illegal travel, changing history, and disrupting the normal order of time. We hope you can write more chapters to fight for leniency. Here are seven recommendation summonses given to you by the Space-Time Management Bureau. Please deal with it seriously 🙏!

The most annoying thing is that you are always scientific, and you have become an immortal! Still coming? Cultivation of immortality is also about exploring the essence of the world! So does science! Why do we have to force separation and it seems more scientific?

Has the author never raised pigs? Never seen a pig pen? Do you raise pigs in the school district? ? Don't take it for granted, okay? ? If you have ever seen pig farming, you will know that it smells bad. You can smell it hundreds of meters away, and mosquitoes and flies are flying around. This is the sanitary condition of modern pig farming. Even the Han and Tang Dynasties were not allowed to raise pigs in the inner city. It's better now. The room in the good school district is smelly and dirty. .

fgo Qin Shihuang original painting Painter: Dong Dong

After reading this book so far, I feel that the core of this book is similar to most time-travel historical novels. It promotes social development, allows the Chinese people to live a good life in advance, and makes the first Chinese empire last for a long time. The reason why the protagonist has the identity of an immortal cultivator is because of conspiracy and conspiracy. The battle of wits is too difficult to write and easy to make loopholes. It is better to suppress everything by force and then it will be logical. So far, so good writing.

To be honest, since the protagonist is an immortal master, can he use more spells? Science can be used by ordinary people. Since the protagonist is a cultivator, if he also uses ordinary scientific principles and props, how can he set off his unusualness? After all, the readers are modern people, not ignorant ancients! In addition, the Da Qin Dynasty on the tip of the tongue has almost come to an end. In ancient times, productivity was extremely low, and people were cooking delicious food every day without thinking about how to improve productivity. Ordinary civilians could hardly afford to eat chestnuts. They lived by mixing wild grass, wild vegetables, and bark with grain. Who cares how your tofu and soy milk taste, and whether it tastes good or not? In addition, let's talk about some core issues. The setting at the beginning of this book is good. The cultivators, the system and the restoration of the Qin Dynasty can be used to write a novel of more than two to three million words in the most concise language, and it is still full of mistakes. This is true for dry stuff. Judging from the current situation where I only write about food and other things that have nothing to do with the main plot, it is impossible to finish it without three to five million words! Looking at Qidian's novels that have been completed so far, there are very few novels with two million words, and only three million words. As we all know, the performance of online novels gets worse in the later stages (unless it is a masterpiece or masterpiece, high-quality works are not good), and the less money the author makes. When the performance of the novel continues to decline and the money is getting less and less, can the author really persist, use love to generate electricity, and persist in writing the subsequent millions of words of the novel? (At least 90% of Qidian's high-quality articles have encountered this problem, at least 60% of them choose to finish the book and start a new book, 10% choose to be eunuchs, and the remaining 30% are those who can persist in filling in the holes and writing to the end regardless of how much money they make) I personally doubt this! I hope the author can carefully consider the above issues!

This is the stove in Panda's home. It can still be used 😁😁😁

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To educate those who have never seen a woman, immortals have very good noses. Women smell fishy, ​​stinky, sweaty, and perfume. Who can stand the smell of so many smells entering the nose at the same time?

The future Qin army😏😏

Hello, author, I am your fan. I feel really uncomfortable when I see some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who works hard for your goals. I will always support you, so can you kowtow to me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise.

After reading the last few chapters, I always felt that something was not quite right about Zhang Liang's plot. So I want to express my opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize it. (Note: This represents my personal opinion) Based on the description in the book, Zhang Liang is a member of the Mohist family and did not believe in the existence of immortals at first. This may be due to the education of the Mohist family, because the Mohist family generally did not believe in immortals. What Zhang Liang learned in Mohism was the power of revenge for him, and he learned it in order to overthrow the Qin State. What he did in Bolangsha also proved this. The author also stated Zhang Liang's original thoughts in Chapter 321: Since the hatred of the family and the country was all due to the Qin State, and his original life was also destroyed by the Qin State, he must rebel against the Qin State. Up to this point the plot has been normal, but what happens later becomes a bit magical: the protagonist not only wants to protect Zhang Liang, but also makes him the king. This is very confusing. The fat man did not kill Zhang Liang in Bolangsha because of the protagonist's request, but he should also have a grudge against Zhang Liang. (This can be seen from the subsequent opposition in the court and the fat man's questioning of the protagonist) He would not enfeoff a person who seemed to be a rebel but was actually a rebel and had not surrendered to him. Even if the protagonist begs, it is impossible. As for the protagonist's explanation, well... It does make sense, but it's not enough. Fatty naturally understands these things, but why doesn't Fatty want to enfeoff his loyal prince, but instead enfeoffs Zhang Liang who wants to kill him?        You didn't enfeoff us because of our merits, but instead enfeoffed a rebel thief. Then what do you think of us? There is also Zhang Liang's own problem. The author is indeed right. Historically, Zhang Liang re-established Korea with the help of Xiang Liang and assisted him for a period of time. Then he met Liu Bang and became a confidant, so he began to assist Liu Bang. But before assisting Liu Bang, Zhang Liang had a good time getting over the addiction of Prime Minister Han. And later he fought against the Qin Dynasty with Liu Bang and founded the Han Dynasty. This was equivalent to getting revenge and successfully starting his own business. From the director of a township enterprise to the CEO of a Fortune 500 company, he was of course very willing to become an official. But in the book, Zhang Liangcai went to Bolangsha to assassinate him and did not experience what happened after that. For him, the most important revenge against Qin has not yet been completed, and he has not experienced so many things. He is still the young and heroic young man, and the hatred of family and country is still heavy in his heart. In Chapter 321, I felt that the author wanted Zhang Liang to experience some things and complete Zhang Liang's transformation in these things, which might be more natural. But alas, no. Zhang Liang's transformation was too sudden. Without any foreshadowing, he "began to loosen up" and the transformation was almost completed. This directly confused me. A young and heroic young man turned into an enemy of his family and country because of the protagonist's nonsense talk? I don't know who everyone brought in when reading the book, but I brought in the protagonist (probably all of them). I felt very comfortable watching the protagonist farming and upgrading all the way and leading the Qin Dynasty to ascend, but I was extremely disgusted by the part about Zhang Liang, which made me feel like I was being deceived. The protagonist is like these people's licking dogs, but the previous description tells me that the protagonist is not, so I feel disgusted. This paragraph I wrote is too long, and I guess not many people will be able to finish it. These are my personal opinions. There may be omissions, please understand. I have been pursuing this book for so long, and I have developed feelings for it. In the early chapters, I had sex for nothing because I had no money in school. I felt very guilty, but in the more than 200 chapters, I did not have sex for free, so I think I support it. The author may have his own ideas, and there may be better developments in the future, but I really don't like these recent chapters, and I hope the author can see it. I declare again: These things represent my personal opinions. If you don't like them, please don't comment. Thank you 🙂

I'm really impressed. The ministers under Qin Shihuang write like losers. They may not understand anything, but from observation, you can't compare to them in terms of how they behave.