I Am Cultivating an Immortal in the United States

I felt relieved when I saw that they were all trolls

A few words from old readers about why this book has poor performance. The author's subject matter. First of all, it is an old subject matter from 5 or 6 years ago. After reading more than ten chapters, there are a few novice logics, dialogues, and old routines... In addition, it might be better if it is written in the direction of "The Last Cultivator", instead of the old routine of cultivating an immortal in the urban earth, and discovering that there are also cultivators in China or other places. In the end, it evolved into the fact that there is a circle of immortals on the earth... And it became a pure immortality novel.

One chapter a day, even if it's good, no one will read it

I think this book is very interesting. There are several points in it. Firstly, cultivating immortality in the United States is a good subject. But it is boring to start an ancient martial arts all at once. It is the day after tomorrow, innateness, and land gods. The reality you write is more realistic. Is it possible to reduce the number of words? What you write is about cultivating immortality in the United States by yourself. The more you write, the more you will bring it to the country. Practice well. At least after graduating from college, you can become a prostitute or overdo it. After digging out the ginseng Behind is Tietou, who just does what he does and doesn't care about anything. There is no logic and no sense of involvement. The most poisonous thing here is that you treat diseases and are very arrogant. You are very poisonous and have to treat diseases. If you don't treat diseases, you won't write. I thought you should kill everyone in prison. If you get passionate, the result is not. You are only practicing Qi on the second level. It's too wasteful. Another poisonous point is that the chicken cup is donated to the country. Just like Ge You said, if you have a car, you will donate it. No, because I really have a car. I am overly fanciful. It would be more interesting to donate some animal heads. I can't imagine the fighting scenes. It's better to change the outline and rewrite it. You don't need to change the beginning. Don't join the ancient martial arts. You are invincible alone. Earn money, build a farm, sell goods, improve social status, enter the entertainment harem, don't accept domestic people, they are all ocean horses, go to various countries to play, and finally switch to fight in aliens. Unexpectedly, wear another Vietnam It doesn't matter whether it's unlimited, whether it's a fixed trip to one world or several worlds, there's no limit on foreign movies. If you write it down, the order will be more than 3,000, which is still a lot of words. If you don't write much like this, you'll be a eunuch. No one will read it after it's put on the shelves. You'll be done with it in two months.

You have to protect the Chinese man. When they were taken away, shouldn't they have stepped on a hole or broken a brick or something? Just one sentence is obviously useless.

I have been reading it for many days, and today I have read 100 chapters. The more I read, the more my head hurts. The Chinese male protagonist, watching the protagonist fight with brute force, later his uncle said that he often fought and was ravaged. Then he went out to dig ginseng and had an adventure with an alien monk. He successfully turned into a cultivator. Because of carelessness, flying leaves killed people. The leaves have fingerprints. I understand, young people, but since you were young, you have always carried money with you. Don't you have some thoughts in your heart? The United States is so chaotic, but then the routine comes. When I saw the news, I complained about Fei Ye's murder and martial arts. , The whole United States denies martial arts, and then the uncle tells him that his father and he are martial arts people, is it a bit sudden to be hunted down, and then the protagonist shows that he punches a hole in the wall, and the uncle is happy, and the internal energy is leaked, the master, you can take revenge, I guess, the protagonist has been beaten in school, you just watch, and then apply medicine to the protagonist, persuade him not to be impulsive, uh, beautiful, at the end of this sentence, are you afraid that the protagonist will kill impulsively? Well, the next series of operations in the prison made me feel that I really can't give the protagonist martial arts. It's too damn high-profile, for fear that people won't know that he can kill people. Who messes with me? Who should I kill? Then, I tell others that I can kill, and whoever I let die will die. However, this is what he did. After reading more than ten chapters, I was hesitant to watch the next one. However, judging from the behavior of the protagonist, it does not look like someone who lives in China. He is a bit of a middle-aged man. It seems that I will make dramas and complain a lot. I look forward to making him mature in the future. It is a pity. I personally feel that the sense of substitution is too poor.

Author, you are such a novice! America has a castle law! There is a law of self-defense! You can fight back when you are violated! Do you think they bought guns for fun? The U. S. Constitution private property and freedom are inviolable! When you encounter an infringement, just prove that you are not at fault! Even if the person who offends you is a police officer, you can kill him! Understand? ? ? ?

The protagonist is like an idiot. His way of thinking is different from human beings. Could it be that the author is a banana person?

In an environment like the United States, people are always suspicious and scorned. The protagonist refutes and pretends. No one around him can live well. The main character who is most afraid of the heroine being raped later goes on a killing spree. The book is finished.

The word Chinese-American is really harsh, it feels like a dog

I can't figure out the temperature of a meteorite after it falls. Shouldn't the place where it hits the ground be burned into glass? How does the author reduce the temperature? I can get started immediately. A unique skill passed down from ancestors?

The subject matter is very good but the writing is too messy. If you are cultivating immortality in the United States, you should cultivate it in the United States and don't go back to China. The main reason is that the writing is so messy that I can't even read it.

Chapter 1 It's outrageous to carry $1,000 with you. I mostly use credit cards. I rarely carry cash unless I'm shopping for something. The amount of cash I carry with me basically doesn't exceed $200. And as a joke, the maximum bet is only ten or twenty dollars. How can any student bet 500? It's not Japanese yen.

First of all, there is no sense of identity in the relationship. Banana people generally don't have a good impression of China! There are also routine dialogues and plots. I feel like I have returned to ten years ago, and it feels like a Renaissance 🤭

Let's put it this way, it was fine in the beginning, but when it came to writing about ancient martial arts, it was exaggerated. In fact, there is no need to write about ancient martial arts. It is enough to write about the main character on earth who can cultivate immortality. It would be good to write about farming, promoting traditional Chinese medicine, and raising cute pets. It's really difficult to write about foreign urban immortality genres, and there's no sense of immersion. It is better to write about overseas farming flow. Nowadays, there are very few such articles at the beginning. Moreover, this kind of article still has some readers at Qidian, and these are basically genuine. As long as you don't write too much, your subscriptions should be at least around 2,000!

If something like this happens, shouldn't the United States be on alert nationwide? Those mad scientists didn't take the protagonist into the laboratory and take slices?

Is there a collective corpse fraud recently? It's actually written in ancient white writing 😒

The little boy is so murderous that he killed dozens of people in just over 20 chapters. It was an ordinary encounter, but all of a sudden all kinds of monsters and monsters came out.

Don't do ancient martial arts or anything like that, it's not new anymore. I suggest you refer to the American TV series "American Gods".

It's short, and the beginning is repetitive with the previous chapter, water.

The book can continue! Let's have a fairy tale with a protagonist