My Elf Is a Beautiful Girl

Muscular Hunk

I hope the author can calm down and read the book friends' suggestions Elven literature is too niche. Especially the one where the protagonist is an elf is even more niche. For example, are you going to take the college hegemony route? Or go on an adventure around the world? According to the world view of this book, there seem to be powerful enemies, and maybe it is possible to open a doomsday expansion pack. As for the interpersonal relationships between the protagonists, should we focus on describing the elves (it seems to be the case now), or should we focus on describing the elves and the elf messengers as the title says? 1. There is no definite solution to these problems, because this type of writing has never been done before, let alone any mature routines. The author can only use our suggestions as a reference, and never write words that you don't like. If you don't like it, your book friends won't like it either. 2. Book friends have various suggestions. For example, in the book review area, I saw some people dislike the slow pace, while others like the slow pace of daily life. Where does the author stand? Some people say that the slow pace means that the protagonist's strength is too slow, the cheats are weak, and the degree of growth does not seem to be great. He does not defeat various elves, cross-grade challenges, shine in the arena, awakens the sky-breaking ability, and other elves lament that it is so terrifying. This type of reader wants to see cool, cool battles. Some people like the warm interaction between the protagonist and Xiaoyu; the warm interaction between the protagonist and other cute elves. But I also said that the pace is slow, maybe because I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and other people has not made much progress. Good friends today, good friends tomorrow, and good friends the day after tomorrow. This category just wants to see sweeter dog food. Both of them are said to be slow-paced, but what they want to see is completely different. The author still has to judge for himself. 3. The author seems to be a weak subject and everyone needs to be careful. Don't feed yourself off books.

To be honest, I really don't feel like a muscular man. Isn't it good to have a streamlined figure? Taking into account both speed and strength, I always feel that muscular men have a dull feeling and cannot appreciate aesthetics.

Good looking

It feels quite similar

Nanny

Wife

The book is a good book, the author writes it very delicately, and the characters and settings are reasonable. However, the updates are a bit slow, or in other words, the early plot is relatively flat (not watery), and there are not enough explosive points. Combined with the fact that there are not many updates, it will be more uncomfortable to follow the book. . . It is estimated that the author may save the manuscript and wait for it to be published before releasing it (exerting pressure 😃). Then I hope it will come from the plot. It depends on the arrangement. The protagonist is ready to appear. There will be a small climax, but don't delay it for too long. The National Day holiday is almost over.

Some suggestions. From the previous description, we know that the protagonist is very strong, grows very fast, and is even mistaken for a legendary elf many times. But what is the strength of this (maybe I read quickly and didn't pay attention), I really don't know, I don't have an idea. The protagonist knows too many things now, including grass, fighting, crystals, and even more methods. It can be seen that the author has a lot of plans. But these are not integrated into a system at all. The protagonist's current fighting method is still very vague. You say he is a warrior, but he is physically strong and knows many and very powerful fighting skills. You say he is a long-range mage, but he has been focusing on close combat in recent times. The positioning is very vague. And the protagonist is crushed most of the time. It is difficult to see where the protagonist's flaws are. You can give the protagonist a battle, a battle in which he is completely defeated, so that he can recognize what he lacks so far. Just like students need to take test papers to understand what knowledge points they have not mastered. Then when the author Ji Fang made the outline before, you can see "Mastering Fighting Energy" here, and you can also let the protagonist fight with the purpose of mastering fighting energy, abandoning other abilities and only using fighting abilities to squeeze his potential. At present, the protagonist is shown to us as a training maniac, as if he has become a numerical monster. When he looks at the data, oh, he is so strong. But I don't know how much strength I can unleash. The above are some suggestions. I feel that the current image of the protagonist is still lacking and has not been fully developed.

Yeah, yeah, I feel like I've been reminded many times that ups and downs are the core of the book. 😐I can even summarize the entire plot in five hundred words. If it weren't for the subject matter, this way of writing would be killed in seconds. So why is it that in so many chapters, your protagonist's feelings about continuous self-growth have become more and more diluted, and even the core character traits and abilities are not obvious. What is now deeply rooted in people's hearts is diligence (?) Daily life can also be composed of stories! Come on. Growth and growth verification are only one part of the core drive, emotional characteristics and personality charm are the second part, and the ups and downs of the story rhythm and the constantly unfolding unknown world are the third part.

Isn't it normal for elf messengers to be beautiful girls? Beautiful boys are rare. It is Qiao Biluo who is unique

The subject matter is really good, the next step is to see how the author writes it. But I suggest not to play with ambiguity first, and to be more elven in daily life.

I think Xiao Yu is the heroine 🤭🤭🤭

The writing is quite interesting, but it's just not to my liking. I can't fit in the devilish muscular man or something like that. Alas... It's so annoying to be handsome...

Come on, let me guess the general direction of the next step. First of all, according to the information we have, the protagonist has been building muscles, and now there is a fighting master. So if nothing else, the third crystal has fighting attributes. Of course, this is only the largest of the three possibilities I guessed. The other two are grass type and crystal type. I don't need to say more about the grass type. The protagonist has been developing in the direction of a grass type mage. (Although I have developed a lot of muscles) Then there is the crystal system. I don't know enough about the strength of the crystal system, but judging from the fact that the status of the crystal clan elves in the article is not low, the crystal system skills must have a complete system, and the intensity is not low. However, the author Ji emphasized in the article that the protagonist's development in the direction of crystal is average. Therefore, the attribute of the third crystal will most likely not be of the crystal type. However, there are only five crystals in the growth stage. Now the protagonist already has two grass-type crystals. Then I speculate that the third crystal is fighting, the fourth crystal attribute is crystal, and the fifth crystal is unknown. The second is the development direction of the protagonist. At the beginning, the protagonist wants to use his racial talents to develop in the direction of "grass-consumption-kite". But the author Ji said that in the end, he is an all-around player. Therefore, we can know that the protagonist's subsequent self-cultivation will be fixed in the short term as "the grass type is greater than the fighting type and is greater than the crystal type", but the general direction will not change. Well, with the ultimate absorption of the grass type, plus melee combat, and learning a few more anti-beating skills, the turtle blood demon flow will appear. The third is the plot, or when the protagonist starts to play the game with the first sequence of combat power in the hands of the heroine. The protagonist is now in the quasi-actual combat period, and it is speculated that it will break through to the actual combat period within this semester at most. Then there is the "evolution posture" of the protagonist. If the author Ji doesn't put some pressure on it, the protagonist will soon learn to "evolve" and will probably surpass Xiaobing in the next year (speculation). If the author Ji chooses to suppress the protagonist's development rhythm, the "evolution posture" will not be learned quickly, and the time for the protagonist to become the main combat force in the hands of the heroine will be delayed. But it won't be past high school at the latest, which means that the protagonist will definitely start to show off before graduating from high school. Ahem, the above are all personal guesses, please do not bring them into the book. Oh, by the way, the currency system in this book is a bit broken, but I thought of a reason to manage it. The country encourages elves to cultivate more powerful elves, so they need to fight more. Therefore, a large amount of resources will be concentrated in various competitions, allowing the elves to fight to support the war, instead of cultivating a lot of "waste" elves. As for the one-year salary in ordinary professions, which is too small, you only need to get through the initial infancy, and you don't need to invest too much money later. Like the protagonist, you can make money by participating in that actual combat exercise, it's just a matter of how much. And there is definitely more than one way to make money. Therefore, it can be said that the currency system has not collapsed, but things related to elves must be extra valuable, so that people do not abuse elves and cherish them.

Author, are you so full of tendons?😡

Euler!

It's pretty good, but the update is a bit slow. I finished reading it in one go. It is recommended that you learn a wave missile when you get a fighting core crystal in the future. It can not only learn wave guide, but also has good attack power and looks cool.

Woo hoo hoo, Xiao Hui is a big muscle tyrant 😭😭😭

The author's imagination is much stronger than I imagined. So the following is really just a little fantasy. What would happen if the Sun Flame could be magically modified so that instead of using it as a wave releasing skill, the Sun Flame could cover the surface of the body? At that time, every punch and every kick will be the power of the sun and the flames. In other words, the surface of the Flying Leaf Blade is covered with (or contains inside) the blazing energy of sunlight. When the time comes, Xiao Hui will pick up the flower and smile, and the powerful enemy will be wiped out. (It also sounds a bit like the Buddha's Angry Fire Lotus in Dou Po. Maybe you can consider the lotus-shaped leaves with the sun's rays in the middle or the Lotus Board Flying Leaf Knife burning with the sun's raging flames.) Or the Flying Leaf Knife becomes an active defense skill, spinning around constantly, and someone who wants to get close will be directly scratched. The above ideas come from: 1. In Bleach, when Kurosaki Ichigo went to the virtual world, he tried to wrap the wave-generating Getsuga Tenshō around Zangetsu, so that every ordinary slash would have the power of the Getsuga Tenshō. 2. Naruto's chakra coat in Naruto. 3. The flower-twisting finger among the seventy-two stunts of Shaolin 4. A skill of the big boss of the protagonist group in The Legend of Sword and Fairy.

I thought the championship was the beginning, but I didn't expect it to be the end.

I think you can add rewards and add more standards. There is really no monthly pass.

The title of the book has a different focus than the actual content. I came to see the beautiful girl trainer, not the growth history of the muscular man.

The exciting points of the progress of strength are: 1. Plans to be completed 2. Unconventional ways to improve strength Planning means having a good plan. After completing the plan, the protagonist's strength can change drastically. The core here is to break through the routine and contrast with ordinary people. (In fact, there is still upgrading or catching up, but let's not worry about it for now) For example, in early fantasy novels, they especially liked to have the protagonist collect all five elements. After collecting all five elements, some of them would use ultimate moves. Some have become perpetual motion machines. Another example is the common cultivation novels nowadays. How many opportunities and how many treasures are required to achieve the golden elixir? If an ordinary person's elixir becomes fifth or sixth grade, if the protagonist collects good materials, the elixir will become a first-grade elixir! Once you complete this plan, will you be happy? I'm quite happy. This kind of improvement in strength that breaks the rules is very refreshing The pace of this book is slow now, I think it's okay. A Mortal Cultivation Passage has written three to four hundred chapters for one Qi training. Is this so slow? Not slow either. The protagonist who is a mortal cultivating immortality has been working hard to complete his plan and has always had his own rhythm. This makes you feel neither rushed nor slow, and very comfortable. And sometimes you even have to go a little slower! Your pace has improved so quickly, what else do readers expect? Normal people expect the protagonist to become stronger, with almost no exceptions! At this time, the rhythm is very important to make readers a little anxious and looking forward to it. A clear plan that allows the protagonist's strength (growth) to break the rules is good. The problem now is that the author makes the protagonist's growth look like ordinary precocity, and fails to create a feeling of breaking through the norm. In other words, the author's pen and ink did not stop here. But the author wrote it in a steady and calm style, which I think is very good. I think it's okay to refer to "Go Back in Time and Become a Cat", or "The Familiar of Zero", or borrow routines from other elf novels, or if you can't copy articles like "Nine-Star Poisonous Milk", and do some group adventures. The problem with this book actually lies in the system. This system... Has no sense of existence... Let's say it is like an accelerator. It does not accelerate quickly, or the author did not write that feeling. Generally, novels about accelerated cultivation use the main character's monster strength as a selling point. However, it is difficult to write about a main character with an elf on his head. However, the writing is actually pretty good, but it would be better if the author could introduce the power system of this world. For example, it is very difficult to master skills in this world. Generally, elves can only master a limited number of types, right? The level of comprehension is generally beginner to intermediate? The protagonist's understanding of an ultimate can make people feel happy for a long time. The key is whether the protagonist's strength breaks through the norm. It will feel better if you focus on describing this part.

A group of night owls, ten red envelopes are gone after they are given out, and I haven't grabbed them yet 😰😰

I think the mid-term plot can include an outdoor experience due to an accidental separation from Xiaoxian, and a plot of survival in the wild. This is very writeable. After all, it definitely cannot be just in the academy. In the later stage, there may be elves siege or war.

As long as I look fast enough, 404 can't catch up with me!

After reading dozens of chapters, the author has really put a lot of effort into this book, but as an original setting, it is too complicated, including the growth path of elves, evolutionary forms, various systems, equipment and special elf buildings, etc. It is all covered in just a few dozen chapters. To be honest, I spent a long time reading just one level, and I still don't understand it very much. Another one is that there are too many characters, including elflings, early elves, and secondary elves. There are more than a dozen characters around the protagonist and his elflings alone, and there are also a few game-style appearances. In addition, the elves are all humanoid. Except for the protagonist, there are too few other words and ink, and the image cannot be remembered at all.

Build a readership. Running a good readership is also crucial.

Isn't the first order data only the data on the first day it is put on the shelves? The author counts so many days