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Soldiers love reading "Taoyuan Bandit Suppression" and have invested in it for permanent collection. Come on 🤝

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Already voted, hope not to disappoint

Wow, I didn't expect it to be about being reborn into the previous campus life. I have to say that what you wrote, the author, is very similar to the male version of our dormitory. Those lives are not too similar. I would like to ask the author, is he a college student now? 😁 I also wrote a similar article about campus, we can discuss it, although you are born again, I am "non-mainstream", haha. Okay, don't say much. I would like to make a few small comments. First of all, I saw a comment on the first chapter and felt that the tone was unfriendly. I don't understand it. Since the author wrote something that made people misunderstood, let's express it in another way so that those people have no chance to criticize. As for the author's writing style, I think there is generally no problem, but some parts do need to be revised. There are many small problems, such as the reasonable use of punctuation marks, the smoothness of sentences, and the reasonableness of paragraphing. It is recommended that you review it and correct the obvious writing errors. As for the plot, it's still okay, lighthearted but true. The author has more imagination than me. Come on⊙▽⊙

I would like to make a suggestion, some plots can be expanded and written, and then the learning of various skills must also go through a process. I think the updated setting of the novel at the beginning can be slightly changed, and the description of the supporting characters should not be ignored. Emmmm The overall direction is not too bad, but I hope there can be more ups and downs in the plot.