Awakening of Super Talents at the Beginning of Online Games

A maximum of three stars on a five-star scale. In the early stage of the article, it still conformed to the invincible cool article, but the full-text data collapsed. Until after the magic palace plot, the data was forcibly changed to adjust the data and the author was tortured. Besides, when we read a text that is entertaining, we must be invincible and enjoy it to the end. If we don't write the data seriously, we will just read it casually and read it without thinking. The plot is interesting, but since you have already broken the data, don't change it. Changing it will only affect the audience's experience, and you have to add abuse to the protagonist in the content. This is unnecessary, and the content will weaken the protagonist by adding abuse to the protagonist. If you insist on weakening the protagonist, you can simply slow down the speed at which the protagonist becomes stronger. If you insist on adding any special circumstances to weaken the protagonist, it goes against the essence of the book. The last point is that part of the plot in the whole text is too watery. If there were no previous things, it might be watery without going into details, but the shortcomings add up to a lot. In the end, it can only make us, the audience who come here for the fun of this book, give up the book. That's all.

It's too procrastinating for an invincible novel. For example, this undead mission has too many dialogues. If you can finish it for two or three chapters, you have to grind out all the skills every time. I just finished thirty or forty chapters... I feel that the protagonist is so weak. I just got a dragon pet earlier and didn't change the weapons. It is indeed getting stronger, but the level is stuck there, right? Even if a weapon of more than ten levels is an epic level, can it be more powerful than a weapon with more than twenty or thirty gold attributes? It's not a growth artifact, and you have the talent to improve quality. Why don't you update the equipment in the story and then take on the mission? This can also shorten the task... Are there any unappetizing relatives or blind date plots... The soul is not 18 years old, can't it be refused? Why do you have to go out and be ridiculed... I don't think it's necessary to pave the way for a falling out in the future. Your previous explanation is completely sufficient. All in all, the water feels special... The key is that you still take the water seriously! Another point is that there are too many personal things, such as weianfu and the like, hatred between the country and the family. To be honest, people who read your book don't know how old they are. Some people have incomplete views. No one knows what kind of people will become if they accept these ideas. Maybe you think I am making a mountain out of a molehill, but this is really a problem. People will change imperceptibly without being stimulated. Enemies and enemies are two different concepts, but there is no difference in their treatment. I have always felt that either no one should be killed, or this generation should be abandoned and carried away. When will retribution be repaid? It's really a good question, isn't it? Which generation can solve it perfectly? I don't have any Buddhist ideas. I look at the problem calmly. If I am satisfied with revenge for a while, if I don't kill them all, I will only harm the next generation. What's the point of getting entangled with that undead lich? It's the biggest stupidity for him to ask if it's the right thing to do. If your power is overriding, do you need to explain what you do? Wouldn't it be enough to kill him with just one sentence? I have to go back and forth to answer the question, but in the end the protagonist comes to the conclusion that he is too weak... Isn't this really water? ? ? If you want to introduce the background world view or the like, you might as well be more intuitive. I read part of it and then started listening to the book. I really felt uncomfortable when I heard it was more than 600... I feel like you should be trying to curb too many levels and too high rewards, so you should suppress your desires first, but it was really annoying. I was tricked by Lei Hao and the Dragon Clan. All the equipment exploded, and the level returned to 0. Then after killing the Dragon Clan, it rose back to level 30, and with the black In the Dragon King fight, I finally opened the second career, but the first career was stripped off, all attributes were reduced, and luck resistance was all reset to zero... What advantage does this have? It took more than 700 chapters of various world announcements to get 30 points of luck, and then it was gone. I don't know what the protagonist was doing in the previous 700 chapters. How slow is it to recover? From the beginning, I felt that the shadow warrior profession was like garbage. The protagonist hardly used the skills of this profession when fighting. Can't we create a new profession to cover it? It's not that I can't bear to see the protagonist being frustrated, but the way you express it, I feel like you don't need to read the previous 700 chapters, since you're back before liberation anyway. I won't talk about the various female supporting characters in it. Anyway, every one of them is beautiful. Bloody Rose is both a strong person and a murderer. She pretends to cooperate to arrange for relatives to live and her younger siblings to study... Can a young lady from an aristocratic family be more powerful than the country? Moreover, she was cooperating with her personal power. With so many involved, wouldn't it be exposed in a matter of seconds? How can the protagonist's real identity be kept secret in front of all kinds of people? …I really can't complain about this. Of course, it may be that I have preconceived ideas. This is not some online game invincible and cool article. If you are pursuing results, just be logical and simple. If you want to tell a story, don't engage in such omnipotent cheats. You must be logical and self-consistent, with cause and effect, and you will rise step by step. You can only rush forward with a cheat. If you are stuck and get blasted by others, it only means that the protagonist is a fool... Come on, young man, and may your literary career be prosperous.

The protagonist of this book may not be a dog licker, but the author is

It doesn't look good. The protagonist is suspected of kneeling down and licking Mu Mu's foursome. It's obviously a fair deal, but the protagonist finds various reasons to give things to these four people. It's like asking the author what he thinks? It's fun to fight monsters and be cool with the BOSS, isn't it? I fought a BOSS for five chapters. You are really good at it.

Stupid. . . The protagonist's appraisal is completed and he is bumbling throughout the whole story. There is a reason for his lack of results, plus he is a licker.

I saw a few embarrassing pictures that made me want to cry.

After reading a few chapters of a game, it looks like it has become a game of reality. A game plot actually makes people almost lose their minds. When an NPC died on a mission, he said it was revenge.

The main character is the same as Rod, a disgusting clown.

God: No more playing. Anyone who plays LoL can surpass me with eight heads.

I originally wanted to complain, but after reading this book review, I might as well forget it.

Although it's a little fun, there are also a lot of awkward points. I need to improve my writing skills.

What kind of disgusting thing is this? Why are there two repeated paragraphs in one chapter, and you charge one price and give two identical half-parts? This is not the real thing.

It's been a few days since the break. The author wondered, is this the plot of the novel or a eunuch? And will Lin Huan write the book in the future?

I think it's okay. Why is the popularity so low?

Support the author and keep writing with support. The scoldings of readers are the author's motivation. It shows that the author's writing is read by others, and he can sum up his experience from the scoldings of readers. If readers don't even have the desire to read and comment, it's better to write amidst the scoldings of readers.

It makes me sick. Whoever comes is disgusting.

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All attributes do not include blood volume and attack, which is outrageous

I haven't read this book, but I read the online game Ace Warrior written by him when I was a kid. It's the kind of random killing, but I still remember the plot. Five Saints Set, White Tiger Claw Thorn. The Ring of the Green Dragon. Suzaku's Feather. Black armor. Kirin Heart. Later, one skill could kill tens of millions of people. Netherworld Nine Dragons Howling Divine Bullet

What about the missing chapters in the middle? Can you be more serious about updating new chapters? There are several chapters missing.

The writing was a bit jumpy and fell apart in the middle.

Ask if this is a harem. There are several,

Chapter 20 charges? No wonder the popularity is so low.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still feel nothing. I feel uncomfortable all over. I can only say that the author still needs to strengthen his writing skills. Also, the portrayal of this little girl has an ancient flavor and is disgusting.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I didn't feel anything at all. Why do the portrayals of women feel so cheap! Abandoned!

It's destined to be a failure, Chapter 20 is on the shelves

Everyone, let's go read Chapter 203. I have endured many of the protagonist's kneeling and licking behaviors before, but in this chapter, the protagonist's despicable behavior made me tremble. A rough description: The protagonist was helping a familiar team complete a mercenary mission. During the process, he noticed that the beautiful priest in the team was in danger, and then stood up to protect her. In the process, he accidentally put his hand on her breast. Then without saying a word, the priest summons a system to strike down thunder, deducting 10,000 blood from the protagonist and giving him a weak buff (this damage can damage 99% of current players in seconds). Afterwards, the priest asks the protagonist to owe her a favor, and then the protagonist agrees, feeling happy and thinking about how much money he has made... To be honest, after reading the novel for so many years, this is the first time I have seen a person be so lowly...