
Taking the Sharingan with Me, I Went to the West to Learn Scriptures.
带着写轮眼去西天取经
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- Completed
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- 31k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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This idea is also amazing, but it seems that Naruto's power system is not as good as that of Journey to the West. After all, Journey to the West has various settings of the ancient gods, and various traditional mythological bonuses. Immortality can go in and out of the sky, and the eyes of the candle dragon in the myth are also very powerful.
The title is too long and wordy, I don't know if it can be changed... The writing style is pretty good, I used the Monkey King and Monkey King as the background, keep up the good work!
Not bad, not bad 😃
[Muzi Comment]: I have to say that the author is very imaginative, and the plot is very popular with me. Moreover, I like this short and clear language to tell the story. "Speaking of it last time" adds to the meaning of storytelling. However, it is suggested that the author does not need to mention what was mentioned in the previous book at the beginning of each chapter. It can be a statement, so that it will not appear repetitive. In addition, I find the new settings such as Sun Wukong and Xuanzang very interesting. Overall good.
Let's talk about it here. The setting of Naruto is really not as good as Journey to the West... 1. The weight of Sun Wukong's stick is fixed, this is for Sun Wukong, the master. As long as you have mana to support it, its weight is unknown. No matter how big it becomes, the weight it holds will remain the same, but its weight to outsiders will change. Don't you understand this little bit of truth? 2. Regardless of Gu Que's combat prowess, each of those big guys in heaven have lived for tens of thousands of centuries. Their experience and experience are not tens of thousands of times higher than that of Hokage? 3. From beginning to end in Journey to the West, the story is about Sun Wukong and his party fighting monsters, and the high-end combat power is not revealed at all. The only ones who showed their faces were Erlang Shen and the doorman... Take a closer look. 4. Not to mention combat power, the big guys in heaven have a lot of magic weapons. What about Luya, Taishang Laojun, Venus, etc... Not to mention the combat power, but the item settings. Have you ever seen an elixir of immortality? The emphasis of the two is different and there is no comparison. 5. Journey to the West has come out of hell, and I can't figure out the pure land where the deceased Naruto belongs... Just make your own decision. 6. Didn't you see that all the big guys in heaven just count on their fingers? I won't go into details, just taste it yourself. So there is really no comparison between the two bar settings, the settings are all different. The settings of Journey to the West are all self-contained. Naruto is just like a miscellaneous book. The settings are not systematic and cannot be pieced together to form a complete world view. Do you understand? 7. Journey to the West is not a mythological novel in the true sense. It actually satirizes the instability of society, so the setting is not so mysterious, but it refers to the setting of Chinese mythology... So in its original meaning, it is the same as the setting of Chinese mythology. 8. Also, many of the settings in Naruto are based on our country's culture, so there's really no comparison. It's just stupid behavior to use your own stuff against your own stuff. 9. Naruto's Death actually followed Taishan Fujun's setting and summoned a person's soul that must be taken away. Either the enemy dies or he dies. Looking at Naruto's ghostly appearance, if you really think about it, he's not even the projection of Lord Taishan from the heavens... Hahaha. 10. Putting aside Taishan Fujun, the dragon veins and other things in novels such as Journey to the West actually have the effect of destroying the world and traveling through time... You will know how low it is. According to this, wouldn't it be possible for Comrade Bowen to crush the world of Naruto by himself? 11. Kaihuang's "Eight Gate Dunjia" is actually one of the settings of "Qimen Dunjia". It's just that the setting has been changed, and the prediction has been changed to physical skills. 12. The handprints of Naruto are all copied from Taoism. In this way, Taoist Lao Sanqing will know what is going on at a glance, so you can think about it slowly. Even the handprints were copied... 13. Moreover, the original version of Journey to the West was written in classical Chinese. Who knows if later translations have reduced the combat effectiveness of Journey to the West? After all, classical Chinese sentences are short, and if they are short, there is a lot of room for interpretation.