Star Maker

Read Chapter 47. Let me talk about some of the shortcomings I saw. (Only shortcomings are mentioned here, but not bad.) 1. Writing style. In entertainment, there will be a large number of various entertainment works, but the author should not just give the title of the work and let the readers make their own imagination. Copy the lyrics appropriately and add your own appropriate description of the lyrics. You can also add some personal insights (personal insights) of the author into this work. 2. Pig's foot character. It's not that Pig's Feet has a bad personality, it's that he is too passive. In time travel stories, most readers don't like pig's feet to "go with the flow" and solve difficulties when they encounter them. A character who is more likely to stand out: take the initiative to advance the plot rather than being pushed forward by the plot. 3. Story advancement speed. To be honest, the progress of this book is a bit fast. Chapter 47 contains 15 songs or pure music. It also includes the plot of the singer competition, the plot of the new song "Thunder", the plot of the rock rookie, the plot of the folk music school anniversary performance, and the plot of the song collection for the TV series. These plots, other great masters basically have at least 10 chapters per plot, not counting the chapters that copy lyrics. And the focus of the author's description seems to be biased towards the comments of netizens. Finally, the above only represents my personal opinion, I just hope it can be helpful to the author's subsequent plot. If there is something you don't like, the author can delete the post.

It would be better if one of the protagonists could search, and it would be a golden finger for original world works. After all, it is impossible for you to have read all works, even if you have seen them. I don't necessarily remember everything

I finally understand why no one commented, it's just rubbish

I have written more than 1 million words, and there is a reason why I only have so many discussion posts. You can give away songs from Jindian at will. Your sister didn't sign with Tianyuan Entertainment, so they forced you to eliminate your sister. You still give songs to others, just to gain some popularity from them. I want to write a theme song for Journey to the West, but I'm short of a violinist. Hey, you name it, it's a coincidence, but the enemy of the protagonist and the protagonist's sister is the only one in the world who can play it. He ran over to ask for help. The author also explains what kind of talent is good, and the performance effect is different. She has to do it. I guess, I don't see what the woman is good at. She is a good student, why can't she find a teacher? No, you can't find someone from the National Ensemble? Not better than her? This novel is not fun to read, it is full of poison. I was poisoned to death when I saw the Overture to Journey to the West. Sorry, I tried my best.

Is this book club so quiet?

Such a famous song like this, Baoyungong Xunyin, gives people the opportunity to become famous, and also asks for help. What does the author think? He is just a student in school, and he still has some troubles. Chapter 50 is a bit discouraging.

My sister is not lovable at all, until I can't stand it anymore

Replace the name Zhang Wannian. If you don't know, Baidu it yourself

Your worldview is so small. There is only one person in that school in the world who can play the violin.

I think most books have an inexplicable place, such as the Supergirl competition at the beginning, the few seconds between the intro to "First Dream" and the singing, and the audience typing and talking below, creating an exchange as long as a TV series. It's simply magical.

Why are there so few people? This is the first full-scale entertainment novel. I started reading it last night and stayed up until after six o'clock in the morning. I have finished reading it now. Except for a few small details, I don't like it.

Um, no resonance, it's all the same water.

The writing is not good, it looks awkward!

The author probably has too many personal items, and he always quotes from classics.

Embarrassing, this situation has happened again: Can any of you lend me a violin? A remake of: Guitar version. Hey ah ah ah ah

It was good at first, fast food and food, but when it came out, what was it like, Quan Yu Tianxia? ? The second breath immediately poisoned me. . .

You can say so and so, but can you remove the "say"? I use read-aloud to listen to books, but with the addition of this word, I feel it becomes distorted!

Is this the rhythm of the protagonist's life with his sister?

Is this writing about two protagonists? Often unclear about names

It was pretty good in the early stages, but in the later stages it started to get sluggish and the plot became a lot more complicated. It can be said that it was continued for the sake of continuing.

The author didn't write about the time, place, or characters. He just described the process of how the protagonist pretended to be cool and how to show off his coolness like a haze!

Too bad at distinguishing good songs from bad

The brother and sister chapter is boring. Looking at the starting point, there is no brother and sister chapter that can be played. Let alone the plot behind it, the previous chapters are unbearable.

The article is a bit silly, why are you thinking so much? Can you have some brains?

Come on, the update is not enough, it's pretty good-looking👍👍👍