The Invincible Master Is Very Defiant

The performance of the book was very poor, so bad that it was abandoned and irretrievable. However, I will work hard to achieve my dreams to make up for the bragging I did when I was a kid. A smile that defies heaven and never give up! Come on! One last sprint! Just give it a try and hope for a miracle on the last day! If there is no miracle, there will be no beautiful smile.

After watching it, haha, I feel pretty good, why are the results so bad😱

Every time someone asks me what kind of boy I like, I have to start describing you again! I searched the world and didn't understand what love was, but I suddenly understood it the moment I met you. If I disappear one day, will you look for me like crazy? You are born to be stubborn and have clear likes and dislikes, so my liking for you is not just a whim or a disagreement. Every time you tip, your phone will vibrate. Guhehehe, do you understand what I mean? Why are you giving me rewards... I'm stunned!

It feels too white. Please change it a little. Don't write it so white. Today's readers have very finicky tastes. Sometimes you need to leave some sense of expectation and mystery.

Also, if you have this style, you should consider going to a female channel and change your gender etc.

The world view also feels a bit confusing, so don't always mess with modern things.

Organize your thoughts carefully and think more about what readers want to see (you can scan the rankings). When writing, think more from the readers' perspective. Don't just write what you want to write. Pay attention to the rhythm and plot tension. A successful brainless novel does not mean that the author does not use his brain when writing, but that the reader can read it without using his brain, slowly immersing himself in the words you wrote, and following your rhythm.

Please come on, author, I am very optimistic about you

Passing by😜😜

No beginning or end, I don't even know what to say!

The writing is okay. Just don't make it too watery.