One Arrow Breaks All Laws

The writing becomes smoother and smoother. You can describe more details. Like every time the protagonist settles in a place, you can describe some local humanities and customs.

First of all, the indigenous people are trying to persuade them to quit. Even the Platinum Master dare not write about the indigenous people. There is no sense of substitution. First of all, 50 points will be deducted out of 100 points. Another 40 points will be deducted for the second suppressed abuser. Leaving 10 points depends on the author's writing style and everything else. I think the author should position himself well when writing this book. Do you want to entertain yourself or do you want to make ends meet by writing a book? If it is for self-entertainment, then you can let yourself go however you want. The indigenous protagonist, the literary youth and the sadist are all OK. Anyway, QD does not charge money to publish the book. If you write more words, you can still make some money from the Internet and electricity bills. If you still want to earn some royalties from writing books to support your family, then before you start writing the book, make an outline of an interesting novel that does not abuse the protagonist in advance, and then abandon the pretentiousness of literary youth and other ideas and write it well. The most important thing is not to write about indigenous protagonists.

I haven't read this book yet, but I will support any book on bows and arrows. Bows and arrows are the best weapons for ancient soldiers to turn decay into magic. And I am also a bow and arrow enthusiast. I think I will promote bows and arrows myself. After all, this is a weapon that has created miracles in ancient times. It is also a weapon used by our ancestors to conquer cities and villages. In memory of our ancestors...

This book is well written! Why are so few people watching? I don't understand. I'm afraid of the deep alley despite the smell of wine? However, support is still needed. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a wonderful book, but it's a pity that it didn't become popular! The subject matter is too cruel, I hope to see it in film and television one day! Everyone, I quit. Life is not easy. I can't stand reading this book.

I like the book you wrote very much, and I will be waiting for your update in a few days. The recommended monthly pass supports everything, now it's up to you to perform!

As soon as I saw this life-or-death brotherhood, I lost the motivation to continue reading!

I hope the author's next book will have a time-traveling protagonist. Don't think that time travel is cliche. The purpose of time travel is to have a sense of substitution. Writing about an indigenous person really doesn't feel right.

The protagonist is really useless, drifting with the crowd, and has no charm.

After reading ten chapters, I don't like to read the character growth process, just the old fox, the best one, please read the book.

The writing is very good. Although it is not as sophisticated as other novels, it is unexpectedly very popular and comfortable to read. There is nothing pretentious or deliberately lyrical. Everything comes naturally. I hope the author will work hard and it will get better and better in the future!

Chapters 153 to 155 are very sad. If you don't like sad stories, you can skip it. Thank you.

The protagonist has a weak IQ, so let someone else guide him.

Leave a message to prove that I have read it. The author writes well. Come on.

The book is very good, but it was very frustrating to read.

A bit of a holy mother, any bad coach will kill you, you will be cool in the end

It's time to change the map, Lu Zhihan ran away, there is no villain in this map, and the protagonist has never had advanced martial arts skills. The next volume will be Tianfu! You should have advanced archery skills! It is still a basic archery technique, and the two arrows I have learned cannot be used all the time. Then there are the hidden injuries on the protagonist's eyes and body, which should all have consequences! Take your time and take your time.

I finally found a book about bows and arrows. Reading the comments, it seems quite abusive.

What a bloody plot. There are too many heroines in novels who have outstanding talents and are snatched away by powerful sects. They are either illegitimate daughters of big families or direct princesses. You didn't escape the cliche plot either.

The writing style is very good, but it's a bit dark. I don't like this style of writing, so the author got bad grades! There are many such examples. The author should change his style in his next book! Life is already so hard

That training officer was too dissatisfied 😴. Although you are under the roof, you must at least be dissatisfied. In troubled times, you are always centered on yourself, otherwise you will die quickly.

I read more than sixty chapters. I didn't see anything else, but I saw three words: bitter, miserable, and cruel. If you like this kind of novel, then this book is worth reading. But this is not my thing, bye!

The writing is good, you can read the novel just to relax, it's too depressing

To be honest, there are too many writers who write to serve the audience. In fact, they can't compete with those great writers who deliberately cater to the readers. It's better to just keep writing and have clear ideas.

After reading Chapter 120, I really can't help but complain a few words. To be honest, the author's writing style is good and his descriptions are appropriate. However, the plot design is obviously not online. First, Uncle Pig's Knuckle was fired for a section, showing his obvious diaosi mentality. No superior person or organization would dare to do this - who would dare to pay for you in the future? Then, the contrast between the characters is too great. Including the "uncle" family, there are contradictions (perhaps they were originally supporting characters, and the author doesn't care at all, as long as the plot requires it). That General Lu was even more completely different. In the end, in order to "escape" to "make" the pig's feet even more "miserable", the author directly treated everyone as fools ("Whether you believe it or not, I just believe it myself"). ----You also wrote earlier that Pig Trotter has been retired, and then he became a "thorn warrior". Does he have anything to do with that "General Shang"? How come he was sent by "General Shang"? And he was "rewarded with a hundred thousand taels of silver"? Do you know how much a hundred thousand taels is? Have you forgotten the previous article? How much are the rewards for the previous ones? ----To take a step back, Lu XX is just a "senior official" of medium or small size. Can he decide to "publicly" reward? It's so perfunctory! (It feels like it was written without thinking at all)

I still like to watch time travel, but the native system type doesn't like watching it very much 🙂 I'll withdraw it first.

It was fine before I joined the army, but my style changed immediately after I joined the army! It is simply force-feeding poison to readers. There are also instructors in space. It's so simple. Since they are modern soldiers with self-awareness, how can they teach someone well? What's the point of teaching a fool? I can't stand what's behind! The author's own strength persuades him to quit! It's really awesome

The results of the new book are dismal, I hope my old friends can give me some support

Others pointed out that he was almost blinded and almost killed. Others talked about their difficulties and the protagonist started to lick it.

The comment section talked about the indigenous people and the chapters about the abuse of the master, which made me want to read it. It means there are no evil points, just pick some insignificant faults. Attract a wave in the opposite direction