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The writing is good, the narrative is smooth, and the emotions are well expressed. It uses environmental description to enhance the atmosphere and successfully strengthens the expression of the article. The writing has surpassed most books. From a plot point of view, the beginning of the plot is relatively bland, with the usual cool writing routine, the plot is completely predictable, and there is nothing outstanding. Later, after the introduction of machinations, the plot gradually has twists and turns, and it starts to become exciting, and describes many scenes of life details. The shortcoming is that the plot is less atmospheric, but it is also because the description of these details makes it easier for readers to integrate into the world of the novel and enhance their sense of substitution. I personally think this is excellent, but this is greatly affected by personal preferences and is difficult to judge. Looking at the core of the story, at first we only saw revenge and the storyline of a refreshing novel, and there was nothing worthy of praise. However, as the storyline unfolded, the feelings and thoughts of the protagonist gradually emerged, which continuously elevated the ideological core of the work and truly elevated the work to a certain level. It broke away from the category of ordinary refreshing novels and can truly be regarded as an excellent work. In terms of emotional content, the description is very delicate, the emotions are real, there is no embarrassment, or the feeling of being out of place. The emotional characters in the past life and the present life are intertwined, which makes people feel more emotional and resonate, and it is easier to touch the readers. The stories in chapters 21, 22, 51, 60, 94, 95, 98, 99, 100, 101, 114, 115 and the extra stories are very exciting, touching and worthy of praise. The most commendable thing is the creation of characters. After reading too many novels, I can't even remember a single character in them, but the big book made me remember a lot. In addition to the protagonists, Si Gu, Yan Shu, Huo Ran, Qiu He, their names, I also remember their stories. Hey, wait a minute, there is no male protagonist! This... The author needs to put more effort into the male protagonist. In addition, the author still has some shortcomings in the characters, that is, the characters' personalities are not well shaped. Most of the characters I wrote down remember their stories and their emotions, but not their personalities. My personal suggestion is to highlight a certain personality trait of the characters, such as highlighting Loyalty, sensibility, trustworthiness, etc. Will make the character more recognizable. Once this is done, a character can have good and bad personalities, that is, advantages and disadvantages, such as frivolousness and kindness, arrogance and affection, which can make the character appear more three-dimensional. Personally, this book is not suitable to be written or read as a cool novel. Except for its successful character creation at the beginning, this book can be said to be the novel that I have been searching for. I have always believed that a successful novel must have unforgettable characters and a story that can touch readers, so that readers can remember it. It's not like something produced by an assembly line, and you will forget it after reading it. I have done a good job in these two aspects, and I have also worked hard on these two aspects. As for how well I have done, I can't say, because I am never accurate in evaluating my own novels, but in my heart, this book has the potential to become a sacred book, so I must work hard! (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

I originally came here to scold the author, but I didn't expect that his writing skills were sophisticated. It looked like he had written it before. There was nothing to scold, but I left a chapter comment, which was not considered a mistake. I have something to do in the afternoon, so I came to see you in the evening.

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I came from Zhihu, and your writing is very good, to be honest. It's too cool to order girls... It's a platform problem.

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The writing is pretty good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

The first book is really well written. I keep reading more and more. I feel like the author will definitely achieve results if he perseveres! ! ! !

There is no comment, please post one yourself! This is my first time writing an online article. The past two days of designing the character have been very uncomfortable. Now I have a plot in my mind, but I'm afraid I won't be able to write it out. I suddenly decided to write online articles seven days ago, and I stopped following good TV series. The plot is going through my mind every day. My heartbeat has been over 100, and I can't sleep. I have written so little, but I am too impatient. I want to know what is not well written and what should be done better. In the past two days, the sad mood has passed. I will try my best to write it down. I want the characters I feel sad for to be seen by more people. They are all my children.

Come to Zhihu and check in hahahaha

As long as you don't feel embarrassed, it will be others who are embarrassed hahaha, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The weekend is coming soon, and my sister has been having a great time this week. It feels like time flies by so fast. In the blink of an eye, my sister's book already has 440,000 words, and mine has 400,000 words as well 🙂 Huh? Wait, it seems that when I read my sister's book for the first time, the number of words between us seemed to be about the same 😰, I'm so embarrassed, my update speed is really embarrassing (/∇＼*)

Let me say Merry Christmas to my sister before going to bed. Today is another day of reviewing manuscripts. I am a little tired, but no matter what, I must be happy during the holidays. I also wish my sister a happy holiday ❤️

(⊙O⊙)Wow, I clicked in from here: Third on the list.

2020 Is not easy, 2021 is a great year, New Year's Day is approaching, and 2020 is coming to an end. Here I wish my sister a happy New Year ❤️ New Year's red envelope, a little thought, I hope my sister will not dislike it, 🙂 I am a poor college student who really has no money 😭

It's a new week again. I hope my sister can have new gains in the new week. I don't know if my sister has already taken a vacation. Whether she has or not, I wish her a happy holiday. It's been cold recently, so please keep warm 🌹❤️

It's almost a new year, wish you a new year and a new atmosphere hahaha

Finished, scatter flowers, read a book 😊

The new book "Travel into my sister's fairy tale and run wild" is a fairy tale about sisters who love each other and travel through time together. It focuses on comedy and sweet pets, love, family affection, friendship... Opening up a different path to immortality. Personally, I feel that I have made some progress after writing the last book. Welcome to click on it. Thank you, cuties. Momoda😊😊

Happy New Year, I wish my sister good health and all the best in the new year 🌹

I'm convinced... If the hastily completed explanation is written at the top, I will simply give up 😅 Although this automatic subscription does not cost much, it is too much of a waste of emotion.

At the end of the year, the wind is getting colder, and the epidemic is raging, and people are sentimental. I hope my sister will be accompanied by warm sunshine when she travels, and may she be happy and healthy when she returns home, and may she make a big fire 🌹❤️

I'm here to visit my sister. The New Year is getting closer and closer. I wish her a happy mood 😊

Congratulations on finishing this book! May you finish it with flowers! !