Quickly Travel Through This World, I Have Conquered It

The beginning looked pretty good, and the story setting felt quite fresh. I was very excited as I had been reading for a long time. I thought I had discovered another treasure. Starting from the time when the heroine entered the campus, I finally couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 10. The logical relationship really pulled me out. First of all, the heroine was called to "collect the body" of her "brother", but was taken away by Yan Chu. The reason was to pay off her brother's debt. After seeing this, I was somewhat acceptable, but after seeing the later, the author set Yan Chu to be a "good person", and seeing him treat the orphan The protection of the younger brothers and sisters in the courtyard should be a boy who values ​​love. I began to not think that such a "good guy" would actually ask his sister to pay off the debt because of the wrong things done by an innocent girl's brother, instead of choosing to directly avenge the heroine's brother 🤔. Second, the heroine invited a doctor for Tianqing, and the doctor actually directly speculated that the heroine was Tianqing's sister-in-law. The reason was that the people who brought Tianqing to see Tianqing for so long were all brothers who were still young. As mentioned before, the heroine was still wearing school uniform. As a doctor and an adult, why didn't he think that the heroine was Tianqing's sister or relative? I just thought that a girl in a school uniform and a big sum of money was actually the sister-in-law of a patient of about the same age 🤔. This feeling of forcibly binding a CP reminds me of the children who loved each other to death in the non-mainstream period, such as big brother, sister-in-law, hall master, and gang leader. It makes me want to dig out the three rooms with my toes. In the first hall, the first thing I thought about was whether the author was a junior high school student. This was the place that made me most embarrassed and uncomfortable. Thirdly, the children in the orphanage described by the author were all afraid of meeting outsiders. Wen Mian was bold and smart. She had already told the heroine who had just played with her for a while and got familiar with those children. It was sold, but I didn't dare to make the situation too clear later 🤔 You can see this below, and I invite you to dig out the subsequent plot. There is no malicious intention in writing this book review, I just hope that the author will write better and better, and can strengthen some logic, or the rationality between the story and the characters will be better. Everyone has his own preferences (fourth tone). Maybe it seems difficult for me to get into the situation, but other readers will think it doesn't matter. It can also be seen that the author is quite good in some aspects of description. After all, I was still attracted by it at the beginning. If I give the author more time, there will definitely be good works in the future. I look forward to more mature works in the future. The author, please come on.

In the first story, the heroine is the God of Cause and Effect, and she feels like she has a love brain. After being together for just a few days, I couldn't bear to leave that man.

Why does Mao have such a good subject matter?

The author writes very well, not a noob or superficial. I like it and keep following it, but the updates are a bit slow for me. Come on, author! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

In the first story, the heroine kissed the boy on the corner of the mouth. It's like a romance novel

The male protagonist is Lord Tiandao! The heroine is the god of cause and effect!