I Made up the Script in Ott

Let me tell you, the author's writing style is not good. He has to write emotional lines, which seems very abrupt. What's outrageous is that he gave Aguru's transformation device to this female object.

In fact, I don't think anyone with any brain would write something like this.

If you don't know how to write the heroine's emotional line, just don't write it~_~!

To be honest, it looks like a running account. After reading more than 40 chapters so far, it seems that there is no main line at all. At first it seemed like something big was going to happen. It was a kind warrior from aliens (Gauss) and Ultraman from the future (Galaxy). They explained their origins at least, but it turned out to be straight away later. Aguru came without any explanation and just hit the eye Q and then left without any point (the eye Q was summoned by the protagonist himself). Pretending to be a dream, he came to kill the vampire monster for no reason. The protagonist pretends to be Ultraman from various places and time and space. The author never explains. Note that he never explains at all why they are here or what they are here to do. It feels as if these Ultraman from various places and time and space are on vacation and happen to meet a monster with Da Gu. From the very beginning, Gauss asked why an Ao from Zhu Xing came to the earth, why an Ao from the future came to fight that person, and finally why Dough happened to be where he was when Dagu was trapped by a vampire monster, the author refused to make up any reasons. My impression is that the author has already taken it upon himself to show off, and no longer cares about logic. He is only responsible for letting O, who has never appeared together, appear together to fight monsters, and then disappear. These are all interesting. The other parts are really just a summary, which is to go through the original plot of Diga, add some psychological activities of the protagonist, or add some difficulty to the original plot (for example, the original plot was Gazot, and the protagonist became Gazot EX, but the problem is that the protagonist cheated Diga and Gazot EX was killed. I don't know what the meaning is at all) Generally speaking, I felt that I wanted to do something big at first, but it turned out that I couldn't do it and then just started to do it. What's even more incomprehensible is that as a mastermind behind the scenes, he actually manipulated the heroine... It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless.

Come on 😁😁The author is great

At the beginning of Moral Kidnapping, I think the author has not yet mastered his writing skills, so I will continue reading. The protagonist of Kakumanari imitates Musashi, and later directly meets Daiko with his true face. It's really just that you pretended to be B even if others couldn't find you. Also, saying so much to Dagu in front of so many people? Are you afraid that others won't be able to see it? During the training, I was still shouting that I would protect him, and I turned my head and cast an eye at Q. Although the natural gas company suffered for no reason, there were no casualties, so I continued to watch. But what do you do by putting a barton on it? , At least his eyes are fixed on high-energy matter, and he will not deliberately look for humans. Barton eats meat! People are also in its menu. And poisonous. He even picked out a volcano with a city nearby and took the heroine there with him. I would like to implore the author, if you are doing it to make money, or if you really want to write a good book, then don't write this kind of protagonist who is both important and independent. If it is for self-interest, please create a new word document and save it on your mobile phone or computer. Don't release it to disgust us poor readers.

I just gave the Agul Transformer to the girl who just appeared in the first chapter. It poisoned me to death.

I vomited the script. Let the monsters be released to destroy the city, causing casualties and destroying families. Then I will appear on stage to kill the monsters and save the world. What the hell is this?

The protagonist was learning martial arts from the martial arts gym owner and said it was for protection, but later he bought a few monsters to massacre the village 😅

Title or IQ online? ! As long as he has some morality, he will not let monsters hurt people! IQ? ! I think it is anti-human. I wish for the end of the world to happen, and everyone else will die, and only myself will be left. IQ online means hurting others? I am not the Virgin! Ultraman is a hero, not a paper man just to show off. And let alone Japan, not even China or the whole world needs such people, who are both responsible and established.

Shouldn't watching Otwen be about realizing the beauty in life and the shining points of humanity? Now Otwen are either dark or conspiracy theories. Is this really the original intention of everyone coming here to see Otwen?

As an Ultraman fan, you have to read the kind of great fan fiction. There are too many protagonists who get Ultraman's power but don't do Ultraman's things. They are not worthy of Ultraman's power. No one paid me to promote it, but for the sake of friends who like Ultraman, I still have to promote two books. I have watched The Legend of Tiga and Ultraman Chronicles. They are absolutely exquisite. Personally, I feel that at least I have the enlightenment of Ultraman. I have transformed from an ordinary person to a hero. It's up to you whether I see it or not. I just feel that good things must be known to Ultraman fans. Personally, it's okay! The protagonist doesn't have too much selfishness, which is more in line with Ultraman's spirit! If you don't like watching it, just think I didn't say that there are a hundred Hamlets in the eyes of a hundred people!

What the hell is the script? The protagonist exchanges millions for an uncontrollable monster. ?

The author wants to ask you a question. The male protagonist fights for protection, but creating monsters will bring disaster. Doesn't this make sense

Gaussian is the most fun The form of reasoning The form of physics The form of reasoning while doing physics It is the form of reason

The destruction of the house by Diga was caused by an act of bravery, and the responsibility is borne by the monster. The destruction was caused by the protagonist on his own initiative, and the responsibility is borne by the protagonist. Is there a problem? Also, destroying the city without hurting people is throwing a mess on the government. The victim's mentality is likely to be bad, and all the property he has worked hard for half a life will be lost. . . Negative emotions will brew in society, causing social security, distrust of the government, social panic, and another negative energy monster. . . .

Can the protagonist use Gauss permanently? There are too few Ultraman Gauss novels at the starting point. Most of them are about Tiga, which makes me vomit after reading them.

This is the most disgusting Ultra fan I have ever seen. In the beginning, he was inexplicably pretending to be his true self in front of Dagu, and he was still pretending to be a forcefully embarrassed person. Later, he created all kinds of monsters to cause destruction, and then pretended to be a savior to fight the monsters. The protagonist always showed an image of a compassionate master.

A mentally retarded script and a confusing plot. The author must have graduated from junior high school.

You can write it to poison people. Will you die if you create a Word document for yourself?

Are you sick? The heroine appears suddenly, with an inexplicable double standard. This chapter talks about protecting the heart, and the next chapter releases monsters. She only changes her skin to show off. The researchers just study shit and know everything. If there is research, there will be research data. Where did the data come from? Can't the winning team get it? There is also a heroine who bites the protagonist without moving. I have seen it twice in just twenty chapters. Is it a dog? Was it the shoulders and hands that were bitten? Is it that close? Crazy? Even in reality, women will not bite them directly no matter how angry they are. Do you have any misunderstandings about women? 😡😡😡

It's a pure novel. The last chapter said that we must protect all the good things. The next chapter is about unleashing monsters to massacre the village for points. The stinky Jaguar is double-labeled. √. Hurry up and 414 and cancel the collection.

What the hell, I'm also drunk. I suggest King Ao take action and let the protagonist go to the Valley of Fire to make a hanging stove.

All I can say is that this book is very toxic. Fight again after releasing the monster. What are you protecting? Do you direct and act yourself?

The author's self-titled work, the writing model borrowed from the studio, and he pieced together some content to become this book (especially the talkative one who can quarrel with the protagonist, the system used to improve the word count, the system will probably read avi when the protagonist finds a girlfriend, the points exchange stream, the behind-the-scenes screenwriter stream that became popular some time ago, etc., A lot of mess), no I'm afraid that you may have too many elements, as long as you write it well and have less poison, the plot will be more enjoyable. The key point is that the author is crazy about himself and writes whatever he wants. He simply relies on the Ultraman theme to attract some readers who pay more attention to this aspect. But for me, it is too dramatic. I might as well watch Ultraman. The plot is like an assembly line, the protagonist pretends to be like a fool, and the author always shows off his presence.

Let's talk about the first Ultraman you watched: Mine was Ultraman Leo.

Damn it, the monsters in Gaussian time and space are all kind-hearted. They are always sleeping but are controlled by the Kaos virus. On the one hand, the monsters in Gaussian time and space are also victims. Gauss usually uses the moon god to release the control, but that doesn't mean he is a virgin bitch, okay? Didn't the one who caused the trouble get raped by the solar eclipse?

Garbage should stay in the trash can

What evil had I done that would lead me to push this thing to me again after a few months? 😅

Wearing Ultraman skin, without any Ultraman spirit, just to show off