The Editor Comes with the Start

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It's just that the first two chapters about getting the golden finger are a bit poisonous.

What about IQ? What about IQ? I can't even read half a chapter

Keep an eye on it. . . . . . . . . . . Put an eye in

Why are there so few people in this comment area... Judging from the title, this is already a good title in my opinion. It is simple and easy to understand, and goes straight to the topic. It is quite good, and I won't go into more details. From the perspective of writing style, the author's writing style is just passable. It's not too uncomfortable to watch, but it's not comfortable either. Writing style can only rely on practice. The more you write, the better it will be! From the content point of view, it is a very standard system flow. Let me change the name of the system. I don't know if I missed it or something, but the author didn't tell us much about the background knowledge of the world the protagonist traveled to, which made me a little confused. For example, what is the King level, what is the Heaven level, and how powerful they are. The author only tells us that the King level is the full level, which is very powerful, and the Heaven level is not as good as the King level, which is also very powerful. As a result, I am still confused now. Then, the plot was too fast, the protagonist was useless at the beginning, and the protagonist's master also had no skills. However, this good-for-nothing state didn't last even one chapter. It makes people feel that you have such a heaven-defying ability, why didn't you use it earlier... You have to endure it for so long, and it's not the first day you traveled through time.

[Muzi Comment]: I simply have a rich imagination. When I first saw the title, I thought about the writer having an editor. Then I looked at the assets of the king, and then I went for the glory of the king. Fortunately, I didn't think much more about it later, haha. The author's writing style is good, and the details are well described. Especially the relationship between the master and his apprentice is so vivid, and he speaks with humor. However, the system appeared so suddenly that I didn't even realize it. The subsequent plots are actually quite common, but each has its own creativity, and the author's creation and other functions are quite fresh. Not bad.

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