Evolution from a Tree

The author is great, the writing is good, and the creativity is very good! Personally, I suggest you polish it up after you graduate from elementary school.

Author, read your book yourself! Post it yourself and tell me whether it is poisonous or not!

No! No! Even this book can be recommended as a high-quality martial arts book. It is no lie to say that martial arts is dead!

Shen Nong is dead. If something happens, paper will be burned 💔

Online dating + gambling + a bad person who almost killed his parents can also be the protagonist. Is abortion among bad people popular now?

After reading 3 chapters, I can't hold on anymore, and I will never see you again!

What a miserable result. Is the author cheating on perfect attendance?

Riding on a horse, how can a tree produce nectar and the protagonist shoots it into it? ?

Back then, I also went to the recommended martial arts boutique 😌

I thought it was still in 2011 and the subject matter was good, but the writing style and concept were really not good... Rating: Poisonous Weed.

Is this something written by an adult? I won't talk about the writing style, but I will say that the plot logic in the book is really not something that a primary school student came up with? If the author is a minor, I apologize, your imagination is amazing! But if the author is an adult, I beg you to think about it with your own mind. Would a normal person let a ten-year-old mountain village child directly become the military commander of a city without any training? A major general or a marshal? Extremely poisonous!

Good guy, it reminds me of my youth

I'll add the bookshelf first and look at it tonight. In evaluation

Good guy! When you click on the directory, you will see Long Xiaotian. Say goodbye!

Good guy, I'm straight fucking good guy. What the hell are Long Xiaotian, Devil Fruit, and the First Emperor? I persisted until Chapter 45, but I couldn't bear it anymore.

It's really poisonous. Just let your tree evolve into a devil fruit tree. Take a look at the son you wrote. It's really poisonous.

I didn't finish the second chapter and died from poison...

All the words I use to criticize books cannot be used to describe his bad writing. In the third grade of elementary school, he barely passed the essay. I have read countless books, and this kind of work makes my eyes darken. I have never seen such a shocking work! Naming someone gave me a sudden heart attack. I thought about what I did the day before. How could I have read more than 100 chapters of this kind of book? I want to vomit out all the breakfast I had yesterday morning. This is not to criticize the author. Practice your writing well and bring your creations after graduating from elementary school! Until then I'm optimistic about you! But I think there are still some bright spots, and the concept is quite novel. But let's not use names like Long Xiaotian, Jun Lintian, Gao Yunmi, etc. That make my blood boil. But the three views are a bit hard to describe in one sentence. The protagonist himself is also very proud and arrogant. He didn't keep his promises several times in the early stage, and there is also a sense of comparison. Also, after using the Devil Fruit, you can enslave them, which is a bit twisted. Although I am not a Holy Mother, it is easier for people to accept that he obeys the protagonist's orders. The protagonist's eldest son, Gao Wanger, has a sense of arrogance and domineering. He has a girlfriend in the third grade of junior high school, and he is a Jiangnan Tiger Commander underage. Isn't it a bit unheard of? When I swiped up, I realized that there was a lot written. I clicked on it and I didn't even want to talk about the rest of it! 🙂🙂🙂

I didn't even finish the first chapter. I was such a failure. 😒

This is the first time I've seen this result😄😄

Dufa, I'm going, you don't have to look at it

Gambling dogs don't deserve to live

I can get into the martial arts masterpieces and die from poison. Goodbye No, no see you

It's good to be creative, but it's a little too toxic.

Extremely embarrassed? No one is too lazy to say anything!

This book is really embarrassing, testicles

Poison is very imaginative, let's take a look and pass the time in the book wasteland.

Come on, author! I think what you wrote is pretty good! I hope you will continue writing. I really don't know how they think such a beautiful novel is too poisonous. The more you look at the back, the better it looks.

The subject matter is okay, but a bit toxic. I suggest rewriting the relationships between the characters.