Get Out of the Way. I'm Going to Kill Her.

There was a lightning strike at the opening. The heroine hit the golden body of the protagonist. It was no big deal. The female anchor, who had nothing in the first place, hit the golden body of the protagonist. Instead, the protagonist made her a clergyman and even called her punishment. Is this punishment? This is simply a reward! If it were a man who bumped him, I would probably dig up his ancestral grave. That's okay. The character of the heroine is also amazing. She obviously hit the male protagonist's golden body. The protagonist didn't kill her and let her follow him. She also kicked her nose and face. If you don't like it, you can avoid it.

Book. Saw it several times. I see it every time, and then I click on it every time, and I see the introduction every time. And then he was poisoned every time. . . The spirit of the protagonist is like your figure. Then the heroine is the naughty kid who comes to your house during the Chinese New Year. Then the naughty kid smashed your hand into pieces. To the parent (author) of a naughty child: He is a child, what do you care about with him? Cannot understand.

Doesn't the logic of this writing mean that the woman bumped into the male protagonist's golden body and became the male protagonist's divine attendant???

The review said that this book is good-looking. I guess it was the author's trumpet or something. After reading it, the story setting felt a bit ridiculous, and the plot development felt a bit stiff. The heroine's character was also... How should I put it? . . . . .

Just talking about the shaping of the heroine in the first few chapters is a bit discouraging, personal feelings

You chopped him down and hit the god's meritorious golden body, but the god still keeps you by his side as a master? Forget about changing the name to Dog Licking God. I read the comments and said there will be a reversal later? You are not a great author and have regular fans. If you can't attract readers from the front, how can you spare the time to read the back?

Kind people don't know what to say.

The Qidian book review area is very violent. This is still in the light novel area. Sure enough, only under the scarlet novels, there will be a clear "Thank you author"🤣

The heroine is having a weird live broadcast, and the setting is a bit weird

This book is bad, the story lacks logic

What the hell? Gods let people live broadcast, but the mystery is still there. Is it still a god?

I think the heroine at the beginning of this novel is okay. Compared with those more disgusting heroines, I think this is already very good, but it is a bit nonsense to be hit by a car if you have great merit. Personally, I feel that the male protagonist is actually a big boss, but his current occupation is the land god

It's nice to look at, but it's just that godly servant. I feel like the image it creates is not very good. Since humans and gods coexist, they should be well-educated and behave like this.

I feel that these pictures are relatively similar

To be honest, I thought the protagonist would start from scratch, but I would build a big boss and add a system of immortality. I would make a small dungeon and use dozens of merits to buy a useless accelerating charm. The power of the land had no idea what it was capable of. After being hammered, I would directly use the previous power. What was the previous power system and what level it was? It was not mentioned before. There was also the River God. Seventh grade, I inexplicably said that I used to be fourth grade, what a good relationship, and then they fight each other like fools and gangsters. To be honest, I have tolerated the poisonous points of the heroine in the previous chapter and the golden body. But here I can't do it anymore. I really write one thing at a time. I write randomly and add everything to it. I write it well. The protagonist slowly struggles to achieve the Shinto golden body. . . . Forget it, let's not talk about it anymore, God's character has been written off.

At least so far. The author did not delete my post. , Like the author.

Well written, come on author💪(ง •̀_•́)ง(^O^)!

The pace of the light novel is soothing. But I don't quite understand the author's book. First of all, there were too many elements and the power was messy. Later, I couldn't stand the various gods once they came out. Then there is the protagonist. I don't know if this kind of retired boss is popular, but it is really inappropriate to put it in this article 😭😭😭. I tried my best to endure it, but I ended up getting a lot of poison. Getting to know the underworld female boss, the boss who cleanses himself... It's not like this kind of thing has never been written together, but the author's writing is surprisingly confusing. I don't understand why he wrote it... Finally, the character of Long Pao Pao is really... Green Tea. I know the author wants to write her as a natural idiot, but when I write it, I feel like I want to curse... The above are some suggestions. Note: I really like the introduction, but this book is too messy.

I don't know why so many people start commenting that the book is not good after reading three or five chapters. In the third or fifth chapter, I started talking about what I don't like and what I don't like. This book. Except the typos are really annoying. Generally speaking, it is still above the horizontal line. Talking about the heroine. They say she should be punished for breaking the golden body. But if it is your benefactor who breaks your important things. Do you want to punish me? You are so awesome. Kill decisively.

It reads incoherently and has a discontinuous feel. I suggest you change it.

Did the author watch the Japanese drama "Noragami"?

After reading a few chapters, I got a strong Noragami perspective.

Come on, the author's writing is very good. If you practice the layout and planning more, you can get better. Come on.

Typos, wrong usage of words, wrong punctuation. There are so many errors in almost every chapter that I can't stand it anymore.

The writing is very good, but it is not suitable for those who have just started reading.

These fighting pictures are really bad, and I can't explain why.

What's the point of writing a novel based on anime?

Erlangshen's surname is Zhao! It looks so awkward.

Been raising it for a few weeks! I have read all the other books of the same period! It's the turn of this little cutie! Come! Let me pamper you, uncle! 😙