Super Seminary Dragon Soul Spear Control

This author's writing style is so bad that it doesn't matter if he is a novice, but this practice is disgusting. Do the big guys who can make science into gods don't know if their world view is spiritual? This book sucks

To be honest, the writing method of the first chapter made me very uncomfortable, and I believe it will also dissuade many people. However, after reading the seventh chapter, I found that the plot is quite interesting. I hope the author can greatly change the fate of Kesha's fall in the original work. Then, there are a lot of typos. I hope the author will make some corrections before publishing. Come on! 😁

There are so many gangsters, so many super god fans, system flow, summon flow, the original work is there? Isn't it common sense that the setting of the novel is different from the original work? So why are you looking at the fandom to be picky? . . It turns out that technology has already reached the level of god and it is impossible to practice. Are you the original author? The original author doesn't even know whether he can practice cultivation, but you are the only one who knows? It seems that my fellow fans are so sophisticated, they really make sticks.

Introduction: Toxic, Dragon Soul Jue Jing (Menopause)

This Zhao Yun is probably not a disciple of some Daluo Jinxian. The protagonist of the skills he left behind can fly out of the earth after seven chapters of practice, and the speed reaches the speed of light. If you use the speed of sound, I will feel better. Author, you know how fast the speed of light is. In Journey to the West, Monkey Jinxian's cultivation is even a hundred and eighty thousand miles away and he can't compare with you. Has the protagonist become a great immortal?

I type entirely by hand now, and it's relatively slow, so I'd like to ask everyone, should the 6,000 words be divided into two chapters or three? Because I have tried everything and I need your opinions. Thank you everyone. If there is no reply, then I will upload it according to my own wishes.

The author knows the plot, but the main character does not know the plot. He deceives fools and withdraws. My family won't let me play with fools. I will withdraw first out of respect.

Cultivation as a super god? Are those celestial computers a display?

As the heroines, I think Kesha and Pipixi are pretty good 🥺

. . . Full of poison. . . I think the author is definitely no more than 20 years old. There is a childishness in many places, and it is obvious that he has not experienced many things. . Of course, I'm just looking at the front. It's too childish.

Zhao Yun is such a scumbag at Super Seminary

Before reading the book, I really want to know how many female protagonists this book has and who they are.

If I were the male protagonist! Will tell Liang Bing! If you two Lily! I will kill the rose! (Destroy the rose!) Because you are Kesha's biological sister! I won't touch you! But rose is the bottom line! If you touch her haha! Demonic civilization and Rose Life will say BYEBYE to you!

Another protagonist with a sperm-like brain

I want to say one thing, I know that many readers will not like the plot I wrote, but what I want to say is that no author can write a book that will suit the appetite of all readers. Many old bookworms understand this, and the author also knows this fact. A novel, unless the author is writing randomly, will still resonate with some readers even if it is bad. This is also true. I said that if you have any suggestions, post book reviews, or even comment on articles, I can see them on Writer Assistant. And I can understand those who don't like it, but please don't make random comments and don't feel that all authors owe you. I think my book still has readers' support. And those readers who support me, you are the motivation for me to write books. Otherwise, I have to spend time conceiving the plot and coding every day. I might as well go to take out food and earn money. At the same time, thank you to all the readers who support me, thank you! 🙏🙏🙏

Not to mention the writing style, is the storyline really the idea of ​​a twelve-year-old bookworm? I can't stand it~ I slipped away

How can you keep reading? I've read more than 10 chapters and I can't stand it anymore.

You won't see another novel about genetic mother and daughter Lily, right? Does Lily have no bottom line now? When I read the original movie "Gene Mother and Daughter Lily", I had goosebumps all over my body and jumped over it.

Dragon Soul Jue Sutra, now that you have gained knowledge, why don't you write Dragon Soul Jue Sutra, Dragon Soul Jue Sutra.

Did the author not graduate from primary school Chinese? Not even segmented

Hey, can you please learn to write in paragraphs? With this format, I can't even read a chapter, it's such a mess.

Well done to the author, keep it up. The subject matter is good, the imagination is good, but the writing skills are lacking, so practice slowly.

Thank you to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง for your good writing.

Too white, the author has read fewer novels

What did the author think? Brother, you have traveled through time. I won't say whether Dukao was forcibly whitewashed. But the protagonist you wrote is more or less a coward. People who read it were stunned. He Ge Xiaolun can become the main god of the earth. You can't become the patron saint. Who is the protagonist? The writing is a bit biased. In the end, Ge Xiaolun is the main god of the galaxy. You don't see anything and it makes people very uncomfortable.

It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit sloppy

I'm about to watch it. I hope there aren't too many female leads. Everything else doesn't matter.

I didn't look at it. I looked at the catalog. Uh-huh, Heavenly Tribulation has come out. This is the Super Seminary.

The technology of the Super Seminary was completely distorted by her. Normal interstellar war operations: Leina inspired all the energy of a sun to create a supernova for a moment. Rose directly used a wormhole to transport it to the enemy's hometown, destroying a civilization in an instant. Hua Ye directly created a black hole in the enemy's hometown. All physical matter within the black hole's gravity could not escape, and then used void energy to escape. Xin Zhao learned Sun Wukong's indestructibility to maintain his body, and then used the lightning gene to increase his speed to infinite speed, turning him into a light-speed bullet that could pierce a planet into a sieve in an instant. Ari's fox gene can even plant ideological viruses on enemy leaders, directly disintegrating any group from the top. The protagonist's increased physique can also be understood as a super energy box, which can accommodate unlimited energy. Just imagine that a human body contains the energy of a sun. Isn't this just like Lena? As long as Lena doesn't get sniped and doesn't stay far away from the star, she is completely equipped for the protagonist, and she can use it as soon as she gets it. She eats and drinks on weekdays and completely skips the hard training. What is the use of this protagonist?