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As an online novel, the writing style is a bit immature, but it can be seen that it is full of the author's true feelings, and the subject matter is quite novel.

Very well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

From the perspective of an old bookworm, this kind of writing is not to my liking. This is not an exaggeration of the effect. But if it's true and close to life, I recommend industry articles first. The most important thing is truth! If you want to get into the homestay business, I recommend you take a look.

An unfinished story to be continued, sinking into it, and the meaning is still unfinished

Already collected, read slowly and work hard! Welcome to return and give advice! Seek mutual acceptance

How to say it? This is the starting point for online novels. In such an environment. Came across this work. It really surprised me. The novel not only reflects the author's understanding and perception of life, attitude and spirit, but I think the author also has a creative desire and impulse to write out what he feels and thinks. The novel is written in the first person "I", which is autobiographical. The frank self-analysis and narration in the first two chapters reminded me of Yu Wen and Yu Dafu. I hope to see it again later. Author. So candid and explicit. With autobiographical text, this is obviously an excellent work and can be said to have a certain reading value. But I have some shallow opinions about literature. Still want to mention it. First, I don't think it matters whether the article is gorgeous or not. But the wording must be accurate. Second, use metaphors and symbols more often. Able to express abstract thinking. Increase the readability of the article. With layered depth. Third, add an appropriate amount of self-deprecating and humorous writing methods, integrate philosophy into the narrative, be humorous and serious, and make people think deeply. In summary, the above three points. Not my advice to the author of this work, but. I see the author's work. It gave me some ideas about literary works.

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Seven recommendation votes have been cast, come on

Haha, so many years have passed

I originally wanted to reply to the post and then leave, but when I saw the beginning, I couldn't help but read two chapters. I felt that the tone of this book was very to my liking. I like such plain but true words. However, I think the author needs to sort out some paragraphs. This kind of book should not be buried because of occasional awkward sentences. I think it still needs to be revised. I have gone through and revised the prologue of my book no less than ten times, and now I still find time to revise it occasionally. We are all new authors and it's not easy for everyone. Let's work hard together.

Haha, I saw the introduction. I'm afraid it's not that the B&B can't be opened, so I'll write a novel to find someone to take over. (ಡωಡ) I just saw a complaint about the difficulty of opening a B&B

I've read a few chapters and I quite like it. I'll write a book review for you after reading it 😊

It feels like I'm reading a magazine, it's the kind that makes people easily fascinated, I love it