Demon God Aotian Lu

Read it very carefully. How can I put it, you can feel the author's careful characterization from between the lines, especially the rendering of the environment, his skills are very good! Personally, I like the part about poisoning people in wine and killing people the most. It made my eyes light up and made me feel deeply involved. Of course, there are some shortcomings. The first is that some modern words do not feel good when they appear in the article. The second is. . . Names, names. For people like me who don't remember names very well, when I see those people named Jian or something, I easily get confused and wonder who this is. There are no other shortcomings. You can feel that the author is weaving a very large web. Very good work. Come on!

Before writing a book, please think about it first, why are you so popular? Why do you make a living by writing books? After reading the full text, although there are not many poisonous points, it has no bright spots or imaginative ideas. It is just quite satisfactory. Please don't think you can write fairy tales after reading a few classic fairy tales. The routine you thought of has been written badly! If you don't write something new and have a clear selling point, no readers will be willing to subscribe. On this point, you can check out Brother Jianjian. It only has one selling point, which is "gou", but it is enough to write new ideas. In addition, I hope to focus on writing a book and not go through some sideways to improve the data for myself. It is recommended to set up more suspense. If the plot is as bland as water, you can go to light novels. Xianxia is not suitable for you; read more books, write more books, and accumulate yourself. Rating: 3/10

It's really good to read and well written. The author would like to work hard to update it. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

Come on, the writing is interesting. Let me give you a small suggestion. The introduction can be written in a concise and concise way. If there are too many words, ordinary people will not have the patience to read them one by one. Haha, keep up the good work and encourage each other

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1. When I first read the title of this book, I thought it sounded like a middle-school fantasy, and even reminded me of Diablo. The introduction, with a sense of fantasy mixed with literature and art, was quite long, but I didn't understand it very well, and the readers couldn't extract anything interesting. I suggest you greatly revise the layout or something. 2. The traditional slow-burning waste material flow, but the protagonist obviously contains some secrets, and it is probably related to his purple pupils. In the early stages of a trash stream, you will inevitably feel frustrated. It is not as good as a mortal stream. If you want to abuse it, I hope the emotions are more prominent, and the sense of substitution is not too strong. The jokes like "monster, trash," are too old, and it should be much better in the future. The number of words is still small. 3. The writing is very good! The description of the environment is very good, the characters are well drawn, and the world view is slowly shaped! Come on! 4. There is a point in the second chapter that seems very strange. Logically speaking, the world of cultivation, where the jungle prevails over the strong, should not be so indifferent. The reputation of the second genius is overshadowed by the "waste senior brother". It should probably reflect the affection between the master and the disciple, but it is very strange from this perspective. After all, it is still appropriate to deal with ordinary people the next day, and his future achievements are expected to be very good. There is no need to ridicule and offend him because of his junior brother, overshadowing his reputation as a genius. Logically speaking, it should be the protagonist because there is such a senior brother. The contrast is too great, and the reputation of poor talent is even worse...

The writing in Bingyu is interesting. Here comes the long review~ First of all, the environment description is great. It is short and high-level, and it can create a scope. Secondly, in terms of plot, the books I read usually introduce the background first, and then start the narrative with a certain paragraph, or just start talking about the protagonist. From Bingyu's point of view, it seems that each chapter is a different story, which is half understood (that is, it is quite suspenseful), but there is a connection between them. How this connection will develop remains to be seen below. There is no problem with the number of words in the paragraphs. The only drawback may be that some of the more intense scenes are not well expressed in language and action. Come on⊙▽⊙

There are details and emotions, it seems to be in front of you, and it feels great to be there.

The complex is getting more and more interesting. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I'm looking forward to the following content.

It's amazing. Even though I don't like this type of book, I'm still attracted to it.

This book is indeed not like ordinary cool articles. It has a certain degree of literary quality. The words and some descriptions are very flavorful and have a strong literary flavor. The author's writing style is very good, and the overall storyline is also good. Support support support

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The book is very good and worth collecting! I love the description so much! Love it! Love it!

It's a very interesting novel, keep updating it, keep up the good work

I feel that the author's writing style is really great! ! ! The wedge is written very delicately and is very attractive to readers! I don't read many fairy tales, and I'm not in a position to comment on the plot. The author will continue to work hard and update!

The writing is good and the writing is beautiful. Come on.

The author's writing style is very good and worth reading!

The author is great and writes very well. There are many places that are outstanding and very powerful.

The writing is good, but it's a bit old-fashioned T_T. After reading the first few chapters, you can probably figure out what will happen next... It depends on whether the author can arrange more highlights.

Undoubtedly a masterpiece. The finished book will be divine.

The writing is good. Come on!

This layout is so cool! Strong!

Introduction: I think it can be a little more general. Some readers will scan through the lines to find something that attracts them when they see such a multi-word introduction, and then decide whether to read it or not. The number of words in the prologue can also be compressed. It expresses too much, so you might as well save some for later to draw out the plot.

The writing of the article is good, but some points are obviously over-exaggerated. The author probably thought of too many words when describing and couldn't finish it. The plot is a bit mediocre. (It's a bit old-fashioned, and it doesn't have the taste of old reviews repackaging new wine.) The content I read is less, and the comments are one-sided. Let me advertise, "My Classmate Is a Salted Fish" is a book written by my classmate. Well, the writing is hard to say.

The writing is delicate, the layout is grand, and there are layers of foreshadowing.

Come on, author, this book gave me a feeling of being a swordsman in the snow, but I feel that the author's text is still a little immature. I hope the author can handle the camera transitions better, grasp the rhythm, and provide more foreshadowing. It can be seen that the author's picture is big, but I hope it will not collapse in the later stage. Finally, the background of the characters and the background of the world are not introduced enough. Many times, I have an inexplicable feeling. I hope to improve. Come on, keep an eye on you.

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The ignorance written in the book and the years hidden between the lines are treasures to me, but to others, they are just a piece of paper and an insignificant story. When your tears fall on those papers, people think you are coquettish. It should be noted that no one will ever accompany you through your story. You can only bury your loneliness in your heart and move forward alone.

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The opening chapter attracted me. It was my first time watching a male video. The content was completely different from the novels I had read before. I felt that the content was very novel. I am looking forward to the following content. I have decided on this novel!