The First Immortal of the Great Tang

The beginning is well written. After kneeling down, his style suddenly changed. All that was left was to kneel down and lick.

Farewell, your fairy is different from the fairy I think of. The banished immortal you think of is not the same as the banished immortal I grew up with. Kneel down and thank the Lord for your kindness, which is too poisonous. He shouldn't be called an immortal. If he were the number one person in the Tang Dynasty, he might still be able to accept it.

I think the author can give the protagonist a proper hook, such as one with infinite strength. How can he just rely on his lips to bear the name of an immortal?

Ah, this No one can really see it No, no, no

You've learned dialect for four or five chapters, but you still can't write? Ancient people could read and understand most simplified Chinese characters. I felt quite bored after watching it. Nothing new! Kneel down and lick the text again.

The writing style is too childish, there is no plot, no character details, and even the most basic character relationships are a mess. How can a high school student write a composition with enough foreshadowing?

The live broadcast of My Datang is not serious, who is the pirate?

I once felt that the protagonist was a bit frustrated.

The content of the chapter is completely inconsistent with the title of the book! Feeling tired after seeing it

Come around, give the author a big boost