The Emperor's Divine Machine

Quality assurance, pass-by adoption, recommendation votes and comments every day, the author is very happy~, support~

The writing is very good, the author has a high ideological level, and it doesn't have the petty and miserable taste of female videos.

The previous cover was pretty good, but this one feels weird.

The author wants to invest the most right now. Please use your big and small accounts. Thank you very much😄

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Great work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Come on, don't be fooled. It's so hard to find good fantasy books these days.

I read the first chapter twice and I understood it, but I am afraid that people who read it for the first time will be a little confused. The first chapter explains four information points, women disguised as men, false reputation, time travellers, and the conspiracy theory introduced at the end of the article. The writing style is very good, the adjectives are used appropriately, and the writing style is not boring. But it feels like the first chapter directly foreshadows the four elements, which is a little rushed, and none of them are too prominent. And when revealing his female identity, it is best to use "him", and then change to "she" after revealing his gender. Also, if there are too many subjects in the same paragraph, that is, if "she" is used too frequently, the paragraph will appear to be cumbersome. It is recommended that after there is a subject in a paragraph, try not to add the subject later if possible. If you must add it, use the person's name and "she" to intersperse it back and forth. Check back tomorrow!

Come on, come on, vote for the young lady, give me a reward for your recommendation vote, oh, there is also investment, let's take care of the seedlings together~

Come on, for a male protagonist! It's difficult to select works by first- and second-level writers with female fantasy heroes and male protagonists. So I support you~(^з^)-☆

Great work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Already invested, the writing of the novel is good, the story is exciting, and very readable. Great support✊✊

Pass by and collect it, come on! Happy New Year! Shamelessly asking for a return visit!

Don't plan to update? Author

Well written, already invested ↖(^ω^)↗

May I ask if the male protagonist is clean physically and mentally? Can members of the Clean Party join?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The heroine? This makes me, a grown-up man, so embarrassed that I left three recommendation votes and decisively abandoned the book.

Is there a male protagonist? Come on come on