Zhiyuan

Good guy, to be honest, I don't think I'm qualified to comment on this book. I can only say that in my heart, this book is very strong. Although the narrative perspective is from a female perspective, which I don't like very much, the writing is excellent, the opening plot is tight but not congested, it can be said to be fine writing, and the progression is appropriate. The fighting has the style of martial arts from the last century, and in some places it is even worse (although the heroine is stunning and very dramatic). Although it starts with a fighting scene, it does not make people feel aesthetic fatigue. This is because the author has a solid foundation in literature. Unfortunately, I do not know much about fighting movements and martial arts moves, so I cannot give a corresponding evaluation. The changes are a little abrupt, such as saving the old man and the wolf soldier. I don't know if I saw it too quickly or for other reasons. This sentence may be nonsense I can't see any problems for the time being. It is my favorite dish.

It's another good-looking movie, but not too popular. The writing is so refreshing.

Much better than the martial arts of the last century, come on! 👍 Invested🎁 I will give you a complete copy when I stop writing🙏

It's so deserted, keep writing, it will get better slowly ^_^♪

I'm the only one who thinks it's well written. The description of the characters' movements is very smooth and has a very visual feel. It's very good.

I came from Zhihu. I actually read three chapters and thought it was pretty good. If it were a well-received book by a great author, I might bite the bullet and read ten chapters. But since it does look a bit tired😂 I don't really want to continue reading. Because I have also written novels before, but unfortunately I have never finished them, and the stories in my heart have never been completely written out. Come on, author, if you finish writing this book, it will be a success, at least you won't leave any regrets for yourself in the future.

I'm from Zhihu. I was very moved after reading your question. I specially collected it to support it.

Come on, don't care what others say, keep writing until 1 million copies are completed!

I have read "The Book of Songs" and I understand "Zhibi Gaogang" well. I am from Zhihu, and I am an unsigned author at the bottom of the food chain. Come on, although I don't appreciate this way of writing. Don't you feel tired of describing that during a fight? Wu Chengen seems to have done this in "Journey to the West", but Wu Chengen is from the Ming Dynasty...

Lu Xun spent many years popularizing the vernacular, and yours is just like the martial arts novels of the past. Aren't today's novels basically all written in vernacular? Although your writing can be regarded as vernacular writing, it is different from mainstream vernacular writing. It's the kind of writing style in vernacular mixed with some old martial arts style. Also, ordinary people in ancient times spoke in vernacular Chinese, and wrote articles in classical Chinese. Even if you write about ancient times, you can still write in vernacular, because ordinary people in ancient times spoke vernacular. I don't know about the one similar to Kong Yiji.

It's a pity that it comes from Zhihu. In fact, it is still somewhat interesting. At least to me, it is better than some high-quality books. A good book should include plot, characters and ideas. But now many requirements for online articles really have nothing to do with whether the book is a good book, such as male and female protagonists, or various systems. Too many authors focus on these details but forget the original intention of writing a book.

There seem to be a few more people voting🤔

A male channel writes about a female protagonist. I predict that this book will definitely die.

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It's well written. I haven't read a book of this style for a long time. I have saved it and will read it slowly.

After reading it, the writing is good and the description is good. Come on!

I have collected it, boss. Thank you very much for giving me some pointers to my book when you have time!