Global Reincarnation Game

To be honest, if Pig's Knuckle doesn't know the plot, it's better to be original and avoid adapting to the original plot. It would be a little poisonous if everyone is blind.

Unfortunately, I haven't recommended it for a long time😭. The book has not been exposed at all, and it is about to be released on the shelves. If you have votes, please support Abing. This is really important to me.

After working on it for a long time, the main character is a native... I don't know the plot at all.

Don't you know the plot of The Reincarnation of All Heavens? This is not an original world, and you have no sense of immersion.

Shen Nong tasted a hundred herbs, couldn't help it, and slaughtered it. I watched three quarters of it, but I threw it into groups that were tasteless and discarded. In general, the author wanted to write too much, but he couldn't cover every aspect Secondly, I don't know the poisonous point of the protagonist in the plot +1 The main line is not clear, what country is it from, what is the collapse of the sky, the poisonous point +1 Others are not urged

The protagonist doesn't know the plot, but I know the plot. I don't have a sense of involvement, and it feels very contradictory.

After the protagonist reaches Hokage, how can I put it, I feel that the style of painting has changed. In the past, he was down-to-earth and step-by-step, and he was more self-aware. Learning shamanism from Sal is also a profession with a very high ceiling. However, after experiencing the age of katyetsu and reaching the Great Holy Grail, after adding understanding and qualifications, why does it feel like the whole person's intelligence has been reduced. Have you practiced the shaman way well? The shaman skills are not explained clearly. The protagonist seems to upgrade quickly, but it is relatively weak. We don't even know what skills he has, although we all know what skills the shaman has. As for the Xin Shen Sect behind it, it is completely nonsense. Doing whatever you want is even more demonic. Do you know what it means to have a willful mind? Only by subduing the willful will can one achieve something. Confucius said that when you are seventy, you can do whatever you want without breaking the rules. The protagonist wants to do whatever he wants at a young age. Isn't it because he doesn't want to die quickly enough?

The biggest failure of this book is that the setting of levels failed. It has been more than a year since the reincarnation space was officially released. The vast majority of people are still from F+ to E. This is completely abnormal. The interval between reincarnations is so short, once every seven days. If it is so difficult to level up, how come the protagonist can level up to C so quickly? A total of six worlds passed. How bad are the people trained by those countries in A place? In at least two years, I can pass through 104 worlds at most. With some special props, I can travel to some worlds, and there are at least more than 130 worlds. How stupid are they? It took them so long to get to A+.

If the protagonist is not a time traveler and doesn't know the plot, why can the protagonist, an ordinary person, stand out? A few worlds can surpass others by dozens of worlds?

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Does the protagonist know the plot? If you don't know it's embarrassing, you might as well write an original copy

The use of skills is not introduced in detail, and there is no sense of substitution. It feels like a flow of literature. The world is completed and the box is not unpacked. I want you to persuade me to quit. I should persuade you to quit properly. The infinite world is completed. If you don't open the box, it will not be attractive. The unboxing process is very important 😒😒

How should I put it? If you are a Hokage, you create a sect and you can cultivate your mind. Are you preparing to become an immortal? It is a bit outrageous. Then the Loulan Dragon Vein extracts the fragments of the Law of Time. This is an incredible idea.

This unstable update should be nourished first, then kill it after fattening it up.

Come on, author, get a few more investments, and if you reach 100 people, there will be a small promotion

The protagonist doesn't know the plot. Isn't it unreasonable to release a new version of Hearthstone? Feeling very embarrassed

Can you write about Attack on Titan and make it longer?

From the moment the Hokage collapsed, he started fighting hand-to-hand from a distance, and then his combat power was like a train. He went from C to A in one go. In reality, he should be invincible. Is there anything better? After 1 or 2 experiences, I'm afraid I'll get S+ and it's over!

I always feel a little confused. . Each story is well told, but they don't flow together. . There are always leaps and bounds in development. Moreover, the settings are quite messy. There are no progressive settings. There are various jumping settings. I don't know if I didn't write an outline. Just write whatever comes to mind.

I hope the author will consider Attack on Titan. I especially like to read Titan fanfics, but I can only find one or two. The others are all gay. I have ordered all the ones you wrote so far.

A bit broken. The author can write whatever he wants. Your Sharingan is so powerful. Perspective is more powerful than white eyes. Not only can you see the outside clearly, but you can also see the energy movement in other people's bodies. Copy other people's abilities in direct combat. Why is Kakashi called a copy ninja? No other Uchiha have this title? The correct answer should be that the Sharingan can see everything externally clearly in every battle. On this basis, some people who are good at this use it to deduce how the energy in the body works, and then learn it. The protagonist's strength has expanded too quickly. And they were all upgraded without much effort. Lack of excitement. It seems that the supporting characters are all a group of two hundred and fifty. It's so easy to level up, but the supporting characters are still hanging around in the novice village.

The plot is too messy. It's like a big pot of food stewing in one pot. The protagonist's skill settings are too many and too watery The experience is extremely poor.

I feel like Naruto has gone through this wave of combat power. Why does the level increase so quickly? Moreover, the mandatory upgrade of combat power from low difficulty to medium difficulty is a bit too much. I don't know how to grasp it from the world of Naruto.

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Very well written🤭