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A message to the author The protagonist gets a skill or object by chance (this object does not require intelligence), the protagonist slowly develops it, and discovers that this skill or object can travel through the world, and then the protagonist relies on his own IQ to become stronger. As for the way to travel, the author designs it himself. Fan system streams like this one started ten years ago. The system in this book is too self-aware. Very few protagonists become stronger by relying on their own IQ. Readers with book age basically like people with IQ who rely on their own wisdom to become strong. This is the personal opinion of readers who have read fan fiction for many years.

Personally, I think the system part is indeed a poisonous point.

The author has never watched Dragon Ball or something. The setting of Saiyan is that the more seriously injured in the battle, the higher the improvement after the battle. As a result, the protagonist has become seriously injured after the battle and the foundation is damaged... Is this still a Super Saiyan bloodline? Are you kidding us? Has the good Saiyan bloodline been turned into an infinitely weakened version? I almost died laughing when I saw that statement in Chapter 6

These only represent my personal opinions I hate those who write fan fiction, change the settings on the original settings, or add effects, fan fiction, and process it on the basis of the original story. You have changed the basic settings, are you still a fan novel?

Come on, author, this book is very good👍