Miss Mei's Revenge Diary

The first-person narrative doesn't have a large audience, so it's a bit embarrassing to watch. It seems that it has gone too far, the protagonist's emotions are too strong, and the description is inappropriate. It looks strange. Practice your writing slowly. Once the number of words increases, more people will read it. The setting of the introduction is actually more interesting to write in physical form than to write it online. However, it still depends on the writing style. Come on (✪▽✪)

Okay, this is a recommendation vote, come on

It's really much better after I revised the text~ The first person was changed to the third person, and the storyline became more vivid and exciting. Come on! 🤝Future Nobel Prize winner in literature! 👍

The title of the book is good, and it's quite enjoyable to read. The writing is quite good, and the story seems exciting, but this may be a matter of personal preference. Looking at the behavior and language of the characters, I feel that they should be young, like junior high school children. Come on⊙▽⊙

The first person has a poor sense of substitution. Of course, this does not mean that the first person is not good. You must have certain literary skills to better control the first person. Moreover, many readers now think that the first person is a poisonous point. Even some better books such as The First Chaos in History are not acceptable to many people.

Come on, thank you, I've opened a new book!

Boys always have a heroic dream, and girls always have a princess heart~ This conclusion, or what we call human nature, has no age limit. ---Tears turn into ice

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Miss Mei's original painting